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Post by luisismine on Nov 1, 2007 5:59:26 GMT -5
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Post by lancylust on Nov 10, 2007 23:28:34 GMT -5
more please
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Nov 12, 2007 16:49:32 GMT -5
At The Hotel. Sheridan and Pretty have returned and have Fancy's cell phone in their hand.
Sheridan: Wow, little miss cadet thought she could pull one over us and text Luis.
Pretty: Aww to bad. Now he thinks its over.
Sheridan and Pretty laugh.
Fancy: You evil b1tches.
Sheridan: Ooohh that hurt (sarcastically)
Pretty: Fancy, I hate to burst your bubble, but your never getting out of here.
Sheridan: I have the perfect thing to put you through absolute misery. I need to make a call.
Sheridan walks away and leaves Pretty and Fancy alone.
Fancy: Pretty, listen to me. I know that this isn't the real you.
Pretty: Shutup. God I am so tired of you being little miss perfect.
Fancy: Look I know what I did was wrong and I am truly sorry. There is someone out there for you. I swear on it. Please don't do this anymore. I know that my sister is still there deep inside of you just please let me go.
Pretty: I can't trust you anymore. You hurt me mentally and physically and you expect to me to set you free. Wow you mus be incredibly .
Fancy: Pretty I love you. Your my sister and if I could switch places with you I would. Please just let us start over and rebuild our friendship and act like sisters again.
Pretty knew Fancy was sincere, but she couldn't overlook everything Fancy has done to her. She just couldn't.
Sheridan on the phone.
Sheridan: Great so, you'll be here soon right. Make her extremely miserable. You do a good of that all the time anyways. Meet us here as soon as you can.
They hang up.
In Luis' police car.
Paloma: Luis, slow down. Your goanna run someone over.
Luis: Paloma, I'm sorry but I can't Fancy could be in great danger and we have to hurry before we are to late.
Luis is getting teary just thinking something bad could happen to her. Paloma sees this.
Paloma: Wow you really love her don't you.
Luis: What are you talking about.
Paloma: I mean you realy and truly love Fancy Crane, don't you.
Luis: I really do. She is just everything to me. She gave me hope and love again and I am not about to lose her.
Paloma: I am happy for you. I mean after that evil sherwitch left you, I mean everybody thought you were going to be a loner.(laughs)
Luis gives her this stare.
Paloma: Sorry. Luis slow down okay before we get into an accident.
Luis decides to change the subject.
Luis: Has mama been acting a little wierd lately?
Paloma: What do you mean? She is still mama.
Luis: Okay well when we were leaving the station Mama and Sam kissed.
Paloma: (slaps Luis' arm) Shutup.
Luis: Paloma! Not when I am driving.
Paloma: Sorry. But mama and Sam? That has to be the funniest thing I ever heard. Maybe you just saw things.
Luis: (chuckles) I guess your right. Mama and Sam please..
At the hotel. There is a knock on the door.
Sheridan: Oh well we have a sepcial vistor that has come to make you (looks at Fancy) miserable.
Spike comes crashing in.
Spike: The Spikeman is here!
Pretty: Sheridan what is going on?
Sheridan: Just watch. (laughs) She is going to finally pay.
Fancy: Don't touch me. (tears are beginning to flow her face)
Spike walks over to Fancy and pushes her hair back. He then rips her clothes off and forces her on the bed.
Fancy is crying for help.
Spike is starting to rape her.
Pretty: Sheridan what are you doing? This awful.
Sheridan: Oh shutup. Don't you want her to pay. After Luis learnes his precious as been raped by the dirtiest man in Harmony he is never going to want her or make love to her again.
Fancy:(screaming) Pretty!!! Please don't do this.
Sheridan: Oh shutup. Your finally being pimped.
Pretty: Sheridan, don't you think we ar epushing it a little to far. I mean Fancy didn't hurt me intenitionally. She even told me.
Sheridan: Yeah well she told me she back off Luis, but did she NO.
Pretty: Thats your fault you pushed him away.
Sheridan slaps Pretty.
Sheridan: How dare you say that!
Fancy is screaming for help.
Pretty can't bare to watch her sister get raped. It was disgusting and absolutely horrible. She had to do something.
Spike: Shutup princess. I know you want me but lets try to keep it down. Your moans and groans are ebginning to really set me loose. Ahh screw it come here.
He kisses her all over and throw in a few punches that knocked her unconscious so he could have his way.
Luis and Paloma have entered the hotel and are asking the clerk where they are. The clerk refuses to answer.
Luis grabs his shirt.
Luis: LOOK IF YOU DON'T TELL ME WHER EMY GIRLFRIEND IS. THERE IS GOING TO BE HELL TO PAY. I WILL MAKE SURE YOU ARE LOCKED BEHIND BARS!
Paloma: Take it easy.
Pretty decides that its over. She has to help her sister. Then she run toward Spike and tries to pull him off.
Pretty: GET OFF MY SISTER! YOU BASTARD!
Spike: woah slow down there is enough spikeman to go around.
Pretty: Ew get off her and leave us alone.
Pretty begins screaming for help. Sheridan tries to pull her off.
Sheridan: What are you doing? Isn't this what you wanted. Your sister miserabel!
Pretty: Get off of me Sheridan! (screaming ) Help! Help!!
Luis and Paloma hear the screams.
Luis: Lets Go.
They run toward the room.
Luis: HARMONY PD! OPEN UP!
Paloma: We'll count to 3 and we are busting in!
Sheridan: Oh sh1t. We gotta go or else we are all going to jail. If Luis cataches me he'll never want you.
Spike: Please he still doesn't want you.
Sheridan: Shutup.
Pretty: I am not leaving Fancy here by herself.
Sheridan: Pretty I swear to God if you tell him I was involved I will make you pay.
Luis: 1...2...
Sheridan and Spike jump out of the window. Pretty runs towards Fancy.
Pretty: Fancy: I am so sorry. Please wake up. Please. We can be sister againa dn friends. I forgive you. Just please don't die on me.
Luis: 3!
They bust in and find Pretty trying to wake Fancy up.
Pretty: She has been raped. We need to her to the hospital.
Paloma to her walkie.
Paloma: This is officer Lopez Fitzgerald. We have Fancy Crane, We need an ambulance right away. Shes been sexually assualted.
Luis is holding Fancy.
Luis: Please baby please wake up. I can't lose you. I jsut can't.
Pretty: You must be Luis.
Paloma: Yeah I am Paloma. Who the hella re you.
Pretty: I am Pretty Fancy's sister.
Both their mouths drop.
Luis: I'll deal with you later. Fancy please don't die on me.
The ambulance arrive and they all follow her to the hospital.
Fancy is in the emergency room and Dr. Russel is running some test.
Everybody arrive at the hospital.
Ivy: How is she?
Luis: We don't know yet.
Pretty walks out.
Pretty: Mother.
Julian: Oh My God. Pretty what did you do to her?
Ivy: What did you do to your sister!
Pretty: I didn't do it I swear.
Ivy: Then who did!
Pretty: Au...
Before she could finish Eve walks out.
Luis: Eve how is she? Is she going to be able to make it?
Eve: She is fine now. We ran some test and she was indeed raped. We have the DNA and we are going to run it and find out who did this.
Noah: Is she awake?
Eve: She has woken up, but she cannot be put under a lot of stress.
Pretty: May I go see her first.
Everybody except luis shouts NO.
Luis: I think Pretty should go see her. They need their closure and Pretty dhould say her final words before i ring her neck.
Pretty quickly walks in. Fancy is just laying there looking horrible with her cuts and bruises all over.
Fancy: HI Pretty!
Pretty: How can you be so happy to see me after everything i done to you.
Fancy: Look I probably deserved it.
Pretty: Dont say that! I just wanted you to feel the pain I felt. I never meant for this to happen. I am so sorry. I didn't know Sheridan was going to do this. I swear.
Fancy grabs her hand.
Fancy: I know. Its okay. I forgive you.
Pretty: I frogive you for everything to. Fancy I really did miss you, I missed having my sister around. Do you think we can ever be sister again?
Fancy: I missed you too. And of course we cna be sisters again, its just going to take some time. We have to learn to trust each other again. I love you Pretty.
Pretty: I love you too. We can get our clean start after I do my jail time.
Fancy: Look I'll talk to Chief Bennet and Luis to let you off with something easy but not going behind bars.
Pretty hugs her.
Pretty: So that Luis guy is a real keeper Fance.
Fancy: (laughs) What he do?
Pretty: HE WANTS TO RING MY NECK.! (laughs) He loves you alot Fancy. Don't let him go.
Fancy: I don't intend to.
Luis knocks on the door.
Luis: May I come in.
Fancy: Of course.
Pretty: Well I'll leave you two alone and go face evrybody else.
Fancy: Wait Pretty. I think you guys should be introduced to each other. Luis, this is my sister Pretty and Pretty this is Luis.
Luis: We've met. You should leave.
Fancy: Luis, its okay. We talked we forgave and forgot now we are going to start over. I am not putting any charges on her or anything.
Luis: Thats very ncie of you but she still has to go down to the station.
Fancy: Thats fine, but I want her with me until I am out of the hospital. You can question her later.
Pretty: Thankyou Fancy.
Luis: I am sorry pretty for snapping at you, but when it comes to her I lose all control.
Pretty: I understand.
They hug and Pretty leaves.
Up Next: Everybody fins out who is try to kill Theresa. A Crane family reunion and Pilar and Sam tell their children about their relationship and Luis isn't pleased.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Nov 12, 2007 16:52:17 GMT -5
Outside the room. Sam gets a call. He moves away from everybody.
Sam: Are you sure?
Ryan: We are positive. All the evidence point to her.
Sam: Alright. Thanks man.
Inside Fancy's room.
Luis kisses her head.
Luis: How are you feeling?
Fancy: Much better with you here.
Luis: Do you remeber what happened?
Fancy: Yes I do. I remeber Sheridan opening the door and
Dr. Russel interrupts.
Eve: Sorry to interrupt but we have the result from the DNA test.
Luis holds Fancy's hand.
Fancy: What DNA?
Eve: Well sweetie, you were unfortunately you were raped.
Fancy: What! By who?
Luis: Honey, calm down. She is going to tell us.
Fancy is tearing.
Eve: The DNA matches perfectly with Spike.
Luis: That bastard is going to pay. (angry)
Eve: I am so sorry Fancy.
Fancy: Thankyou.
Eve walks out and informs the others. They are all furious and Sam joins them but with some extra news. Earlier Sam called down Gwen and Rebecca as well as Theresa. They all arrived and everyone was present except for Luis and Fancy. Two other officers had arrived as well.
Gwen: Why am I here?
Noah: Fancy was raped.
Rebecca: That poor girl, but no offense why are we here?
Theresa and Ethan walk in.
Gwen: What the hell is she doing here?
Sam went to tell Luis what was going on and Pretty went back in the room to keep Fancy company.
Sam: Gwen Hotchkiss you ar eunder arrest for the attempted murder of Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald. You have the right to remain silent anything you or do will cna and can be held aganist you in court.
Gwen: What it wasn't me.
Sam: All the evidence points to you.
Theresa walks over to her.
Theresa: Gwen I just want you to know that um your a b1tch. and oh yeah (she slaps her so hard the finger print is still on her face)
Rebecca pushes Theresa. Theresa falls down. Ethan runs over.
Ethan: She is pregnant what the hell is wrong with you. (looks at Theresa) Are you okay baby?
Theresa: I am fine.
Rebecca: Your lucky it wasn't a harder push.
Sam: Oh wait. I have soemthing for you rebecca. Stick out your hands and close your eyes. I have a nice piece of jewerly for you.
Rebecca: Ohh why Sam you dirty boy.
Sam handcuffs Rebecca.
Sam: Rebecca Hotchkiss you are under the arrest for being an accomplice in this whole thing. You have the right to remain silent Anything you say will and can be used againt you in court.
Rebecca: Oh Sam. I never knew you had it in you. What are we playing cop?
Pilar is growing angry that someone is hitting on he rman.
Pilar: Step away from him. BACK OFF BEFORE I SLAP THE HELL OUT OF YOU.
Sam: Pilar, stop it. Your making everybody suspicious.
Rebecca: O wow Saint Pilar finally got some backbone. Come on Sammy Let go to the motel and put these handcuffs to good use.
Pilar: Thats it. ( slaps rebecca)
Sam: Book them.
The two other officers take the ladies and bring them to the station.
Luis is so confused by his mother's behavior as well as Theresa, Miguel and Paloma.
Miguel: What the hell just happened?
Kay: I don't know, but your mom was like really possessive over my father.
Paloma: Luis said he saw them kiss but we weren't sure if it was his imagination.
Noah: Your mother and My father?
Theresa: What about mam?
Noah: You don't think they are?
Ethan: Yeah right. They are just good friends.
Inside Fancy's room. Pretty and her are laughing about old times.
Luis: Glad to see you two getting along.
Ivy walks in as well as Julian.
Ivy: Are you guys getting along?
Julian: Ivy I think we've been way to much.
Fox walks in.
Fox: Fancy I am glad to see your okay. Pretty.
Luis: You know what honey, I'll be right back.
Pretty: Look Fox, I am so sorry abotu everything I said to you at the airport. I was just so angry and hurt.
Fox: Its okay. I forgive you.
They hug.
Ivy: Julian seriously we have to stop . Our children are actually talking to each other.
Pretty: Mother this all real. I am ready to forget everything that has happen and move on with my life.
Julian: Pretty, I guess we oew you an apology for abandoning you. We never meant to hurt you.
Ivy: I am sorry too. I do love you Pretty. Youa re afterall my daughter.
Fancy: I think this is a good new start for our family.
They all hug.
Fancy: Uh hello yeah I am laying over here.
They all laugh and hug each other.
Outside the room.
Luis: Sam, man what a day right
San: Yeah it has been wquite an interesting day. ( he is staring at Pilar who is talking to Eve)
Luis sees him staring at his mam.
Luis: Sam, whats going on with you and my mother?
Sam snaps out of his gaze
Sam: Nothing. What are you talking about?
Luis: well the way she stood up for you and I saw you guys kiss earlier. I mean what are you doing with my mother.
Sam: I am not doing anything. We are just friends.
Luis: Thats all you better be. She is to much of a good woman.
Sam offended a little.
Sam: Are you saying I am not a good man for her?
Luis: Yeah your funny. Your a good man just not for her.
Luis laughs and walks away and Sam walks over to Pilar.
Luis enters Fancy's room and goes to Fancy.
Ivy: Well its getting a little late. We should go.
Julian: Yes we should. Pretty you are welcomed at the mansion. It is your home.
Pretty: Really! I can come back!!!
Ivy: Of course you can.
Pretty is thrilled and they all say their goodbyes to Fancy and Luis and everyone else. They all go back to the mansion.
Everybody else comes in to check on Fancy and they all say their goodbyes. But before they could leave Sam and Pilar have an announcement to make.
Theresa: Mama, what is it?
Kay: Dad whats going on?
Pilar: Well Sam and I decided its finally time to tell you guys.
Ethan: Tell us what?
Sam: We are dating!
Luis: No fricken way.
Pilar: Mijo, stop it.
Everyone is so shocked and stunned, it was awkward silence for a moment.
Fancy: Well Thats great. I am happy for you guys.
Everyone looks at her.
Fancy: Well someone had to break the silence.
They laugh.
Paloma: I guess we are all happy for you.
Miguel: Take good care of her.
Noah: And you take care of him.
Luis is still furious.
They all leave and Luis is sitting by Fancy.
Fancy: Luis, be happy for your mother. Sam is a good man and they both deserve their happiness.
Luis: but Sam is my best friend and She is my mother. Thats just to wierd for me. Oh Man. I insulted Sam accidently before. I saw he wa snot a good man for my mother. I should apoligize to him.
Fancy: Go hurry.
Luis runs out.
Luis: Sam! Mama wait.
Sam: If you want to insult be again go ahead.
Luis: Look man. I am sorry. I was out of line. You are a good guy and I know you'll take good care of her. Its just she is my mother and I love her and I don't want her getting hurt.
Sam: I understand. I am sorry I didn't tell you sooner.
Pilar: Mijo, its just going to take sometime to get use to.
Luis: I know. Sam I just wanted to sya sorry. Forgive me.
Sam: Sure. (laughs)
They handshake and leave and make love all night long. Luis returns to Fancy.
Fancy: All better?
Luis: Yup.
He walks over to Fancy and kisses her. She pushes away.
Fancy: I am sorry I didn't mean to.
Luis: Its okay. You've been through a lot. Its going to take sometime to recover. And I am going to be right next to you.
Fancy: If anybody can help me, its you.
She pulls him into a kiss.
Luis: Wait you should brush your teeth I don't want to feel like I am kissing Spike.
Fancy: Hahaha not funny. Now shutup and kiss me.
They kiss, but Luis pulls away.
Fancy: Whats wrong?
Luis: You said somethign earlier about Sheridan. What does she have to do with anything.
Fancy: She was there with Pretty and she is the one who called Spike. She told Pretty that if I was raped by Spike you would never want me or make love to me again.
Luis: Thats not true. I would make love and want you anytime and any place. I love you Fancy Crane.
Fancy: I love you too Luis Lopez Fitzgerald.
Luis: Do you know where those two went?
Fancy: Well with Sheridans needs for sex and Spike's desire for women, they went somewhere to have a little "party" of their own.
Luis: I'll call Sam and have them put a search out for them. They will pay.
Fancy: Lets just forget them for tonight and deal with it tommorow. I just want to be next to you where i feel safe and warm.
She moves over and pats her hand on the bed trying to get Luis to lay next to her, but before that he moves her bed toward the window so they can watch the stars. He puts his arm over her her and they hold hands and just lay there waltching the beautiful stars. They see a shotting star and both make a wish.
Luis: What did you wish for?
Fancy: If I tell you it won't come true. What about you?
Luis: Nothing. Everything I wished for is right next to me.
Fancy tears up and they kiss one more time before falling asleep into each other's arms.
Up Next: Another suprise is on its way. Fancy goes home. Sheridan and Spike's fun turns sour as someone is murdered.
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Post by luisismine on Nov 12, 2007 16:59:31 GMT -5
.Oh please let Sher die please please please.
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Post by lancylust on Nov 14, 2007 8:16:41 GMT -5
please more i cannot wait read it
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Post by nicki9202 on Nov 19, 2007 14:45:13 GMT -5
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Dec 8, 2007 13:09:09 GMT -5
At The Hospital. Fancy is getting ready to go home.
Luis: Are you ready baby?
Fancy: Yeah Just take me out of here. I want my bed.
Luis: You little Princess. Come on.
They hold hands and walk out together. They drive back to the mansion.
Luis had called Sam earlier in the morning to find Sheridan and Spike.
At The Motel. Spike and Sheridan are having sex like there is no tommorow.
Spike: Man Oh Man, I haven't felt like this for so long. Sheridan baby. Your the one. You make me wanna do it all night long.
Sheridan:( catching her breath) You pimp. I don't love you.
Spike: Then why are you making love to me?
Sheridan: Its not love. Its just sex. Now shutup the hell up and kiss me you fool.
Spike: I have a better idea.
Spike pulls out furry handcuffs and gives Sheridan a police outfit. She goes to puts it on and handcuffs Spike to the bed.
Spike: Thats right Papa like.
Sheridan: Oh Papa. You been a real naughty boy. I 'll take care of that.
She pulls out her whip and whips him. She uncuffs him and he pulls her over him and they go at it like wild cats and dogs.
Someone is outside the door listening to them.
At The Mansion.
Luis carries Fancy in her room and Pretty enters.
Pretty: Welcome back Fance.
Fancy: Thanks.
Luis: Baby can I get you something to drink or eat?
Fancy: No Thanks Sweetheart.
Just then Luis gets a call from Sam.
Luis: Its Sam. He may know where Sheridan and Spike are. I better take this.
Fancy: Go right ahead.
Luis leaves the room.
Pretty: You are so lucky you found someone as good as Luis.
Fancy: You will find a man who will look past everything and love you for you.
Pretty: I hope your right.
Fancy: I'm so sorry Pretty about all of that. (tearings as she points to Pretty's face)
Pretty: Fancy stop. It is the past. Lets move on and I know you didn't mean to do it.
Luis enters.
Luis: I need get down to the station.
Pretty: Did they find them?
Luis: Yeah I think so.
Fancy: Then go.
Luis: You'll be okay right?
Fancy: I'll be fine.
Pretty: I'll take care of her.
Luis: Thankyou.
He runs over kisses Fancy and then leaves.
Back at the motel.
Spike and Sheridan are still going at it as the door opens and there stands his wife, Jessica.
Jessica: Oh My Gosh. HOW COULD YOU!
She runs over to Sheridan and rips her skanky body off of him.
Jessica: Get of my husband you dirty hoe.
Sheridan: Looks whose talking.
Spike: Jessica, baby. Why aren't you in another john's bed.
Jessica: Because I thought, Hey maybe my husband wants to make love to me but no i FOUND HIM WITH HER.
Spike: Jessica,Leave Sheridan out of this.
Jessica slaps Spike and Sheridan.
They get angry and grab her and don't let her go.
At The police station.
Sam: We found them.
Luis: Lets Go.
They go to the motel and demand the door number. Once they get it. They bust in but the room is empty. They walk slowly guns drawn out and all of the sudden Luis trips over something.
Luis: What the hell?
Sam: What is it?
Luis: I tripped over this.
Sam pulls the sheet back.
Sam: OH MY GOSH JESSICA!!
Blood all over her body and a wire line around her neck.
Sam: LUIS CALL THE AMBULANCE NOW!!!
Luis: I'm on it.
Sam holds Jessica.
Sam: Baby please don't die. Damn it Spike.
Jessica opens her eyes.
Sam: Thank God.
Jessica: (very softly) Daddy. I love you and I'm sorry.
Her eyes roll back.
Sam: NO!! Baby come on sweetie wake up.
He is crying and holds her.
Luis: Ambulance is on there way.
Sam: It is no point. We lost her.
Luis walks over to Sam and comforts him.
Luis: I 'm so sorry.
Sam: I never told her I forgive her and I love her.
Ambulance comes and pulls Jessica away.
Sam leaves with the ambulance and Luis calls for 2 new officers to search the place.
At The Hospital.
Sam calls Kay, Noah, and Ethan.
They are all mortified and Noah, Paloma, Kay, Miguel, Theresa, Ethan and Pilar all show up. Pilar runs to him and he holds her so tight.
Kay: (crying) My baby sister. My baby sister is... iss.. dead. Oh My Gosh.
Kay leans into Miguel.
Miguel: I'm so sorry baby.
Noah: Who did this dad? Who killed her?
Sam: We believe it was Spike and Sheridan.
Noah: Those bastards. I want to rip their necks apart.
Paloma: Noah, Calm Down. It'll be okay. (She hugs him.)
Theresa: Sheridan?
Sam: After the whole Fancy thing Sheridan and Spiek went back to a motel and had some fun of their own and I guess Jessica was there and they murdered her. They murdered my baby girl.
Ethan: I can't believe this.
They all sit together in a moment of silence.
At The Mansion.
Fancy: I wonder if they got them yet.
Pretty: Me too.
Fancy: Hey to past time. Do you want to watch our favorite disney movie?
Pretty: Cinderella. (laughs)
Fancy phone rings. It's Luis.
Fancy: Hello?
Luis: Hey baby. I have bad news. We found where they are located but their gone.
Fancy: What! Where did they go?
Luis: Wait. I'm not done. Jessica, Sam's daughter was murdered. We found her in the hotel.
Fancy: Oh My Gosh. That poor girl.
Luis: I might be a little late. I think i'll check on Sam before I come back okay?
Fancy: Take your time. Bye.
Luis: Fancy, wait. I love you.
Fancy: I love you too.
Pretty: Is everything okay?
Fancy: No they didn't find them and Sam's daughter Jessica was murdered.
Pretty: Oh My Gosh.
Fancy: Jessica was Spike's wife. He was horrible to her.
Pretty: That poor girl.
Fancy: Yeah, its just so sad.
Pretty: I guess it tells us that Life is to short to hold grudges. Embrace every moment like it was your last.
Fancy: That was nice Pretty.
Pretty: Can I get you something? Anything?
Fancy: Maybe a glass of water.
Pretty: Sure.
Fancy: Thankyou.
Pretty leaves. Earlier back at the hospital Fancy made a call for Pretty. Someone who will love her and always had loved her. He should be here anytime soon.
Fancy: I hope he gets here before she comes back.
The door opens.
Fancy: FINALLY!
Pretty: Sorry it took so long.
Fancy: Oh sorry I didn't mean to sound mean.
Pretty: What were you doing?
Fancy: Nothing. Sorry Pretty to bother you, but can you please get me something to eat? Maybe crackers?
Pretty: yeah sure.
Pretty leaves again and seconds later her door opens and in come the mystery man.
Fancy: Okay she will be back soon. She is going to be so thrilled to see you. I'll get someone to distract her.
Fancy calls Fox and Fox goes to distract Pretty.
Fancy and the mystery man are filling Pretty's room with rose pedals and candles .
Fancy: We need something good to happen today after everything. Oh My Gosh Pretty is going to love it.
Downstairs:
Pretty: Fox you startled me.
Fox: What are you doing?
Pretty: Bringing these to Fancy.
Fox: Oh Okay. Why?
Pretty: Because she is hungry. Now move. Your being wierd.
Fox: Hey! Are you still ticklish.
He tickles her.
Pretty: Fox stop it. She pushes toward upstair and enters Fancy's room. Fox follows.
Pretty: Hmm.. she must be in the bathroom. I'll just leave it on the table.
Fox gets a text message saying they are ready.
Fancy leaves Pretty's room and hides and the mystery man too.
Fox: Hey Pretty. Did you redecorate your room?
Pretty: No I have only been her for a day.
Fox: Right. So anyways I have a gift for you. It goes into your room. But I want to give it to you after I find the right spot to put it.
Pretty: What is it?
Fox: You'll see. Just come with me.
They go to Pretty's door.
Back at the hospital Doxtor Russel has pronounced Jessica as dead. Everyone is crying and in tears.
Ethan: Our baby is never going to meet their wonderful aunt. She would have loved these babies like she loves Maria.
Kay: Yeah she always loved playing with Maria.
Paloma: I remember her telling me how she always wanted children, but she could because of Spike.
Noah: She doesn't deserve this.
Sam: I can't believe this is happening. My baby girl is gone.
Pilar: I am so sorry honey.
Luis arrives and joins them. They all go back to Pilar's house and just talk about their times with Jessica. Luis leaves after awhile and returns to Fancy.
At The Mansion.
Luis: Fancy!!
Fancy pulls Luis and covers his mouth and tells him everything.
They watch Pretty and Fox. Fox slips away to Fancy and Luis.
Pretty: Fox what is it? Fox?
Pretty opens her door and sees all the rose pedals and candles. Her hand is over her mouth in shock and out somes the mystery man.
Pretty: You! Oh My Gosh. Its you.
Up Next: Find out who the mystery man is. Jessica's funereal and Spike and Sheridan make an idiot move that gets them caught. Paloma and Pilar have strange feelings.
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Post by luisismine on Dec 8, 2007 13:52:31 GMT -5
you updated & :-/ :-/ :-/ :-/ over Jess.Spike & Sher need to die.More please.
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Post by nicki9202 on Dec 12, 2007 17:21:39 GMT -5
How Sad Jessica didn't deserve to die more please.
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Post by lancylust on Dec 17, 2007 9:50:56 GMT -5
more more updates i want read
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Post by lancylust on Jan 20, 2008 23:38:41 GMT -5
please more updates ok
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Post by lancylust on Jan 27, 2008 9:20:47 GMT -5
more updates
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jan 27, 2008 12:16:22 GMT -5
i'll update as soon as I can.
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Post by lancylust on Jan 27, 2008 15:49:34 GMT -5
i love your story it beautfiul more please
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