Post by luisandfancy4ever on May 25, 2007 23:54:29 GMT -5
This is my first Fanfic. Please comment and tell me your opinions. If you like it i will continue writing it or if you think there are things ic an change or any suggestions to make this better let me know. Thankyou.
At the Lopez-Fitzgerald house.........
Pilar: Luis, mijo how are you?
Luis: I'm hurting mama, how can i live my life without sheridan? I thought she loved me, but i was wrong. I am never going to love again.
Pilar: Don't say that, don't let sheridan ruin your chances at happiness. She broke up with you months ago.Don't feel sorry for yourself, why don't you go out and have some fun?
Luis: No it is ok mama, i can't help but feel sorry for myself, how can i go on? I am just going to go back to my place and try to sleep.
Pilar: Ok mijo, get some rest i love you.
Luis: I love you too mama.
At the Crane Mansion......
Fancy: How could he do this to me, mother? I thought Noah loved me, but he is nothing but a liar and a cheater.
Ivy: O sweetheart, i know it hurts but crying all day won't help.You guys broke up months ago. You need to get your life back on track. Why don't you go out for a little while. I am sure Ethan or Fox will go with you?
Ethan: Go where mother?
Ivy: Why don't you and fancy go out to the blue note and have some dinner?
Ethan: I would love to spend time with my sister, but it is up to fancy.
Fancy: Thanks Ethan, but no thanks. I am not in the mood to go out and eat.
Ethan: Mother, may i talk to fancy alone?
Ivy: Of course.
Ethan: Fancy, i hate seeing my little sister so upset. Please come and have dinner with me. We can talk and you can tell me what is going on.
Fancy: Ethan, i don't know what to do. My heart has just been ripped out of me. How could Noah hurt me so badly by cheating on me, he kept telling me he loved me and tht he never slept with Maya, but i saw him with my own eyes.
Ethan: Fancy i am so sorry he did that to you. I promise you a night out with your favorite brother will cheer you up
Fancy: (laughs) favorite brother? Hah. I am just kidding. Ok fine, let me get dressed and we can go.
Ethan: I'll pretend you didn't say that, but at least you laughed. I'll go wait outside for you.
As Luis is about to leave, theresa, paloma, and miguel walk in..............
Miguel: Hey Luis, where are you going?
Luis: I am going to go back to my place and going to try to sleep.
Paloma and Theresa: Luis are you ok?
Luis: I am trying to be. Goodnight.
Pilar: what are we going to do, Luis is so hurt right now. I knew Sheridan would do this to him, i use to love her but look what she did to my mijo. She made him give up on love.
Paloma: mama don't worry. I am sure Luis was just saying that.
Theresa: Yeah, but he look really sad and hurt.
Miguel: Maybe i should take him out to dinner or something and try to cheer him up.
Pilar: That is a good idea, he could use someone to talk to.
Miguel: Ok i am going to go over to his place now.
At Luis' apartment......
Luis: Why did this have to happen to me? Why did she leave me? Am i not good enough for her?
there is a knock at the door.....
Luis: Hey Miguel, what are you doing here?
Miguel: I thought we good go out to the Blue Note or something and have some dinner.
Luis: I don't know. I am not really up to going out.
Miguel: Luis, come on. I promise you will have fun. We can just go out for a little while.
Luis: Ok, fine. Let me just change and we can go.
At the Blue note Ethan arrives with Fancy and Miguel and Luis arrive
Fancy: Oh my god. There is Noah. Lets Go.
Ethan: Fancy no. You need to show him you don't need him and that you can have a good time.
Fancy: But Ethan...
Ethan: No buts fancy, lets go sit over there.
Miguel: Luis why don't we sit over there next to that couple.
Luis: Ok fine, lets go.
Miguel: Excuse me sir.
Ethan: Sure, hold on. Fancy get up and let them in.
Fancy Okay i'll move.
Miguel gets in the seat but accidently pushes Fancy and she falls back into Luis' arms.
Miguel: Oh My Gosh. I am so sorry. Is your wife okay?
Ethan: She isn't my wife. She is my sister.
Miguel: Sorry. Miss are you ok?...Miss.
Fancy and Luis are just looking at each other.
Fancy: What? Oh yes i am fine. Sorry i fell on you.
Luis: No no don't be sorry it was an accident. I am Luis and this is my brother Miguel.
Fancy. Nice to meet you. I am Fancy Crane and this is my brother Ethan.
Miguel and Luis: Crane....?
Fancy: Yes, crane. Is there a problem?
Luis: No, um you are sheridan's niece aren't you?
Ethan: Yes she is. Why? Oh My Gosh. Your the one she left.
Luis: Yes i am. Um anyways are you sure you are ok Fancy?
Fancy: Yes. Thankyou for catching me.
Luis: Anytime. I mean...... Nevermind.
Ethan: Fancy, what do you want to eat? Fancy hello earth to fancy?
Fancy: What What? O um yea that is great.
Ethan thinking to himself: Oh no. She looks like she is taking a interest in that Luis guy.
Fancy can't stop looking over at Luis, but what she doesn't know is he is doing the same.
Miguel: I am sorry Luis that you had to deal with that. That must have reminded you of sheridan, huh? Luis?
Luis: uh yea sure order the cat.
Miguel: Luis, what are you doing? Snap out of it. I didn't say i am going to order the cat. Are you alright?
Luis: Yea i am fine. Miguel it was a good idea to go out to dinner. Thanks.
Miguel: no problem, bro. Luis are you staring at fan or whatever her name is over there?
Luis: Her name is fancy!
Miguel is thinking to himself: hmm....is luis trying to move on, but with sheridan's niece. This can't be good.
Fancy: Will you excuse me Ethan, i am going to go to the bar to get a drink, want something?
Ethan: Uh sure, suprise me. I will get our food.
Luis sees Fancy get up and go to the bar..........
Luis: Hey Miguel i am a little thirsty. I think i am going to get a drink. I'll get you a beer.
Miguel: But Luis you just got a drink....(looks at the bar and sees fancy and says Oh to himself) Ok a beer is fine.I will order the food.
At the bar.....
Fancy: 2 red wines please
Noah: Fancy
Fancy: Noah i forgot you were here.
Noah: Can we talk?
Fancy: NO! I have nothing to say to you and if you want to apologize save it.
Noah: Look Fancy i am sorry, i never meant to hurt you.
Fancy: Well you did. Can i just have my wines please?
Noah: Sure hold on.
Luis: Hey Noah, can i get 2 beers? Hey Fancy.
Noah:Sure.
Back at Ethan and Miguel's table
Ethan: Your brother is totally looking at my sister. Tell him to stop before i beat his eyes out.
Miguel: No way. Your sister can't keep her eyes off my brother. Tell her to stop.
Ethan: You don't think they are.... no way
Miguel: What? Interested in each other? From the looks they are giving each other i would say yes.
Ethan: Maybe this is a good thing.
Miguel: How?
Ethan: I was so upset watching fancy at home crying for months about Noah and now that she is trying to move on even if it is with sheridan's ex, it doesn't matter. Luis deserves happiness after all the hurt he has been through because of sheridan.
Miguel: I think your right. Luis has been upset for months about sheridan leaving him for someone else, but now i think he is beginning to or trying to move on. I think Luis and Fancy might just be a good match.
Ethan: Your sisters are Theresa and Paloma right?
Miguel: Yeah why?
Ethan: Well Fancy is friends with both of them and i think that we should tell them about tonight and come up with a plan to help these two get together.
Miguel: Good idea. I have a plan, follow my lead later.
Back at the bar......
Fancy: Hey, you know Noah?
Luis: Yeah, we are friends. How do you know him?
Fancy: (whispers) I wish i never did. He is my ex boyfriend.
Luis: Oh i am sorry to hear that it didn't work out. I know how you feel.
Fancy: Yeah i am sorry that my aunt sheridan treated you the way she did. You didn't deserve any of that.
Luis: Don't be sorry. I was hurt, but i don't know something about tonight is helping me move on.
Fancy: Well that is good, i find myself in the same situation. I thought i would never get over Noah, but i don't know something about tonight. It feels like a New Beginning.
Noah: Um, i am standing here you know?
Fancy: I don't care.
Noah: Here are your drinks guys.
Luis: Thanks.
Fancy: Bye Luis. Noah.
Luis: Bye Noah.
Ethan: Well you took a long time to get the drinks. What were you doing? The food is here.
Fancy: I forgot Noah was here and he was trying to apologize, but i didn't want to hear it and then Luis came over and we talked for a little while. He knows Noah, but i don't care about that.
Miguel: Luis, i finished my beer and your beer. You took so long to get our beers. I was thirsty. What was the holdup?
Luis: Oh, i was talking to Fancy. Did you know she dated Noah? Noah is such a idiot for letting her go.
Miguel: I didn't know that but ok. The food is here, let's eat and go. It is getting late.
Luis: Ok.
Miguel and Luis finish eating and are getting ready to leave.
Miguel: Ok lets go.
Luis: Ok um lets say bye to Fancy and Ethan.
Miguel: Ok.
Luis: Bye Fancy, we are leaving. Bye Ethan.
Fancy: Bye Luis, you know what we are finish too. We will walk out with you guys if thats ok.
Luis: Of Course.
Miguel: Hey Ethan, remeber our talk before about that place you were telling me about, can i get your number and when i go home i'll add it in my phone.
Ethan: Oh um, i don't have my phone with me either.
Fancy: Oh thats ok i'll give him mine and he can call you whenever.
Luis: Miguel is so irresponsible,(looks at miguel) no offense. I'll take your number and then they can call each other whenever.
Miguel to himself: Yes! it is working. I got to go home and talk to Theresa and Paloma.
Ethan: Ok. Thanks. Lets Go.
When they get outside......
Ethan: O fancy i forgot something inside, i'll be right back.
Fancy: Ok sure. I'll wait.
Miguel: Luis, i have to use the bathroom. I was so IRRESPONSIBLE i forgot.To many drinks man.
Luis: Miguel i was kidding.
Miguel: I know. I will be right back.
Luis: Ok i'll wait.
Inside the bar.....
Ethan: That was your GENIOUS plan.
Miguel: No idiot, i am going to have theresa call fancy and tell her to come over for girl things or whatever and i'll make sure Luis is home, because looking at those two, you can tell they want to see each other again.
Ethan: Good idea.
Outside.....
Luis: Fancy, where is ethan?
Fancy: Inside. He forgot something. I guess both of our brother are irresponsible. (laughs) Where is Miguel?
Luis: (laughs) maybe. He had to go to the bathroom. To many drinks.
Fancy: (laughs) so did you have a good evening?
Luis: As a matter of fact i did. I never thought i would smile again but i did.
Fancy: That is great. I never thought i could have fun again especially without Noah, but i did.
Luis: Noah is an idiot for letting you go.
Fancy: Thanks. Your so sweet. I say the same about Sheridan, but our past is our past and we both can have a new beginning.
Luis: Yes it is. Maybe we'll see each other around.
Ethan: Ready Fancy?
Fancy: Yeah, bye Luis. It was nice meeting you.
Luis: You too Fancy.
(Luis is wondering what Fancy would have said if Ethan didn't come back)
Miguel: Ready Luis?
Luis: Yes.
In Ethan's car.....
Fancy to herself: I have to see him again. Fancy snap out of it. To soon to think about another relationship, but Luis was just so sweet and boy was he hot. I hope i'll see him again.
Ethan: Fancy: I am so happy you are smiling again. What or Who put this smile on your face? Does his name start with a L or a H or a L
Fancy: What are you talking about Ethan? Oh shutup and drive. Luis is a nice guy, maybe i' ll see him around harmony. Maybe i should talk to sheridan first.
Ethan: If you want to.
Ethan to himself: Fancy you will see him again.
In Miguel's Car.....
Luis to himself: My god Fancy is beautiful. I would love to see her again and talk to her. She made me smile and laugh again. I need to see her again.
Miguel: Luis you seem happy. What are you thinking about? Let me guess....Fancy
Luis: What? no. But when i was talking to her i felt like i knew her my whole life. Maybe i'll bump into her.
Miguel: Maybe
Miguel to himself: Oh Luis you will see her again. Ethan and my plan is going to work.
Up Next: Will Ethan and Miguel's plan work? Sheridan is hesitant about Fancy's question. What happenes when Luis and Fancy see each other again?
At the Lopez-Fitzgerald house.........
Pilar: Luis, mijo how are you?
Luis: I'm hurting mama, how can i live my life without sheridan? I thought she loved me, but i was wrong. I am never going to love again.
Pilar: Don't say that, don't let sheridan ruin your chances at happiness. She broke up with you months ago.Don't feel sorry for yourself, why don't you go out and have some fun?
Luis: No it is ok mama, i can't help but feel sorry for myself, how can i go on? I am just going to go back to my place and try to sleep.
Pilar: Ok mijo, get some rest i love you.
Luis: I love you too mama.
At the Crane Mansion......
Fancy: How could he do this to me, mother? I thought Noah loved me, but he is nothing but a liar and a cheater.
Ivy: O sweetheart, i know it hurts but crying all day won't help.You guys broke up months ago. You need to get your life back on track. Why don't you go out for a little while. I am sure Ethan or Fox will go with you?
Ethan: Go where mother?
Ivy: Why don't you and fancy go out to the blue note and have some dinner?
Ethan: I would love to spend time with my sister, but it is up to fancy.
Fancy: Thanks Ethan, but no thanks. I am not in the mood to go out and eat.
Ethan: Mother, may i talk to fancy alone?
Ivy: Of course.
Ethan: Fancy, i hate seeing my little sister so upset. Please come and have dinner with me. We can talk and you can tell me what is going on.
Fancy: Ethan, i don't know what to do. My heart has just been ripped out of me. How could Noah hurt me so badly by cheating on me, he kept telling me he loved me and tht he never slept with Maya, but i saw him with my own eyes.
Ethan: Fancy i am so sorry he did that to you. I promise you a night out with your favorite brother will cheer you up
Fancy: (laughs) favorite brother? Hah. I am just kidding. Ok fine, let me get dressed and we can go.
Ethan: I'll pretend you didn't say that, but at least you laughed. I'll go wait outside for you.
As Luis is about to leave, theresa, paloma, and miguel walk in..............
Miguel: Hey Luis, where are you going?
Luis: I am going to go back to my place and going to try to sleep.
Paloma and Theresa: Luis are you ok?
Luis: I am trying to be. Goodnight.
Pilar: what are we going to do, Luis is so hurt right now. I knew Sheridan would do this to him, i use to love her but look what she did to my mijo. She made him give up on love.
Paloma: mama don't worry. I am sure Luis was just saying that.
Theresa: Yeah, but he look really sad and hurt.
Miguel: Maybe i should take him out to dinner or something and try to cheer him up.
Pilar: That is a good idea, he could use someone to talk to.
Miguel: Ok i am going to go over to his place now.
At Luis' apartment......
Luis: Why did this have to happen to me? Why did she leave me? Am i not good enough for her?
there is a knock at the door.....
Luis: Hey Miguel, what are you doing here?
Miguel: I thought we good go out to the Blue Note or something and have some dinner.
Luis: I don't know. I am not really up to going out.
Miguel: Luis, come on. I promise you will have fun. We can just go out for a little while.
Luis: Ok, fine. Let me just change and we can go.
At the Blue note Ethan arrives with Fancy and Miguel and Luis arrive
Fancy: Oh my god. There is Noah. Lets Go.
Ethan: Fancy no. You need to show him you don't need him and that you can have a good time.
Fancy: But Ethan...
Ethan: No buts fancy, lets go sit over there.
Miguel: Luis why don't we sit over there next to that couple.
Luis: Ok fine, lets go.
Miguel: Excuse me sir.
Ethan: Sure, hold on. Fancy get up and let them in.
Fancy Okay i'll move.
Miguel gets in the seat but accidently pushes Fancy and she falls back into Luis' arms.
Miguel: Oh My Gosh. I am so sorry. Is your wife okay?
Ethan: She isn't my wife. She is my sister.
Miguel: Sorry. Miss are you ok?...Miss.
Fancy and Luis are just looking at each other.
Fancy: What? Oh yes i am fine. Sorry i fell on you.
Luis: No no don't be sorry it was an accident. I am Luis and this is my brother Miguel.
Fancy. Nice to meet you. I am Fancy Crane and this is my brother Ethan.
Miguel and Luis: Crane....?
Fancy: Yes, crane. Is there a problem?
Luis: No, um you are sheridan's niece aren't you?
Ethan: Yes she is. Why? Oh My Gosh. Your the one she left.
Luis: Yes i am. Um anyways are you sure you are ok Fancy?
Fancy: Yes. Thankyou for catching me.
Luis: Anytime. I mean...... Nevermind.
Ethan: Fancy, what do you want to eat? Fancy hello earth to fancy?
Fancy: What What? O um yea that is great.
Ethan thinking to himself: Oh no. She looks like she is taking a interest in that Luis guy.
Fancy can't stop looking over at Luis, but what she doesn't know is he is doing the same.
Miguel: I am sorry Luis that you had to deal with that. That must have reminded you of sheridan, huh? Luis?
Luis: uh yea sure order the cat.
Miguel: Luis, what are you doing? Snap out of it. I didn't say i am going to order the cat. Are you alright?
Luis: Yea i am fine. Miguel it was a good idea to go out to dinner. Thanks.
Miguel: no problem, bro. Luis are you staring at fan or whatever her name is over there?
Luis: Her name is fancy!
Miguel is thinking to himself: hmm....is luis trying to move on, but with sheridan's niece. This can't be good.
Fancy: Will you excuse me Ethan, i am going to go to the bar to get a drink, want something?
Ethan: Uh sure, suprise me. I will get our food.
Luis sees Fancy get up and go to the bar..........
Luis: Hey Miguel i am a little thirsty. I think i am going to get a drink. I'll get you a beer.
Miguel: But Luis you just got a drink....(looks at the bar and sees fancy and says Oh to himself) Ok a beer is fine.I will order the food.
At the bar.....
Fancy: 2 red wines please
Noah: Fancy
Fancy: Noah i forgot you were here.
Noah: Can we talk?
Fancy: NO! I have nothing to say to you and if you want to apologize save it.
Noah: Look Fancy i am sorry, i never meant to hurt you.
Fancy: Well you did. Can i just have my wines please?
Noah: Sure hold on.
Luis: Hey Noah, can i get 2 beers? Hey Fancy.
Noah:Sure.
Back at Ethan and Miguel's table
Ethan: Your brother is totally looking at my sister. Tell him to stop before i beat his eyes out.
Miguel: No way. Your sister can't keep her eyes off my brother. Tell her to stop.
Ethan: You don't think they are.... no way
Miguel: What? Interested in each other? From the looks they are giving each other i would say yes.
Ethan: Maybe this is a good thing.
Miguel: How?
Ethan: I was so upset watching fancy at home crying for months about Noah and now that she is trying to move on even if it is with sheridan's ex, it doesn't matter. Luis deserves happiness after all the hurt he has been through because of sheridan.
Miguel: I think your right. Luis has been upset for months about sheridan leaving him for someone else, but now i think he is beginning to or trying to move on. I think Luis and Fancy might just be a good match.
Ethan: Your sisters are Theresa and Paloma right?
Miguel: Yeah why?
Ethan: Well Fancy is friends with both of them and i think that we should tell them about tonight and come up with a plan to help these two get together.
Miguel: Good idea. I have a plan, follow my lead later.
Back at the bar......
Fancy: Hey, you know Noah?
Luis: Yeah, we are friends. How do you know him?
Fancy: (whispers) I wish i never did. He is my ex boyfriend.
Luis: Oh i am sorry to hear that it didn't work out. I know how you feel.
Fancy: Yeah i am sorry that my aunt sheridan treated you the way she did. You didn't deserve any of that.
Luis: Don't be sorry. I was hurt, but i don't know something about tonight is helping me move on.
Fancy: Well that is good, i find myself in the same situation. I thought i would never get over Noah, but i don't know something about tonight. It feels like a New Beginning.
Noah: Um, i am standing here you know?
Fancy: I don't care.
Noah: Here are your drinks guys.
Luis: Thanks.
Fancy: Bye Luis. Noah.
Luis: Bye Noah.
Ethan: Well you took a long time to get the drinks. What were you doing? The food is here.
Fancy: I forgot Noah was here and he was trying to apologize, but i didn't want to hear it and then Luis came over and we talked for a little while. He knows Noah, but i don't care about that.
Miguel: Luis, i finished my beer and your beer. You took so long to get our beers. I was thirsty. What was the holdup?
Luis: Oh, i was talking to Fancy. Did you know she dated Noah? Noah is such a idiot for letting her go.
Miguel: I didn't know that but ok. The food is here, let's eat and go. It is getting late.
Luis: Ok.
Miguel and Luis finish eating and are getting ready to leave.
Miguel: Ok lets go.
Luis: Ok um lets say bye to Fancy and Ethan.
Miguel: Ok.
Luis: Bye Fancy, we are leaving. Bye Ethan.
Fancy: Bye Luis, you know what we are finish too. We will walk out with you guys if thats ok.
Luis: Of Course.
Miguel: Hey Ethan, remeber our talk before about that place you were telling me about, can i get your number and when i go home i'll add it in my phone.
Ethan: Oh um, i don't have my phone with me either.
Fancy: Oh thats ok i'll give him mine and he can call you whenever.
Luis: Miguel is so irresponsible,(looks at miguel) no offense. I'll take your number and then they can call each other whenever.
Miguel to himself: Yes! it is working. I got to go home and talk to Theresa and Paloma.
Ethan: Ok. Thanks. Lets Go.
When they get outside......
Ethan: O fancy i forgot something inside, i'll be right back.
Fancy: Ok sure. I'll wait.
Miguel: Luis, i have to use the bathroom. I was so IRRESPONSIBLE i forgot.To many drinks man.
Luis: Miguel i was kidding.
Miguel: I know. I will be right back.
Luis: Ok i'll wait.
Inside the bar.....
Ethan: That was your GENIOUS plan.
Miguel: No idiot, i am going to have theresa call fancy and tell her to come over for girl things or whatever and i'll make sure Luis is home, because looking at those two, you can tell they want to see each other again.
Ethan: Good idea.
Outside.....
Luis: Fancy, where is ethan?
Fancy: Inside. He forgot something. I guess both of our brother are irresponsible. (laughs) Where is Miguel?
Luis: (laughs) maybe. He had to go to the bathroom. To many drinks.
Fancy: (laughs) so did you have a good evening?
Luis: As a matter of fact i did. I never thought i would smile again but i did.
Fancy: That is great. I never thought i could have fun again especially without Noah, but i did.
Luis: Noah is an idiot for letting you go.
Fancy: Thanks. Your so sweet. I say the same about Sheridan, but our past is our past and we both can have a new beginning.
Luis: Yes it is. Maybe we'll see each other around.
Ethan: Ready Fancy?
Fancy: Yeah, bye Luis. It was nice meeting you.
Luis: You too Fancy.
(Luis is wondering what Fancy would have said if Ethan didn't come back)
Miguel: Ready Luis?
Luis: Yes.
In Ethan's car.....
Fancy to herself: I have to see him again. Fancy snap out of it. To soon to think about another relationship, but Luis was just so sweet and boy was he hot. I hope i'll see him again.
Ethan: Fancy: I am so happy you are smiling again. What or Who put this smile on your face? Does his name start with a L or a H or a L
Fancy: What are you talking about Ethan? Oh shutup and drive. Luis is a nice guy, maybe i' ll see him around harmony. Maybe i should talk to sheridan first.
Ethan: If you want to.
Ethan to himself: Fancy you will see him again.
In Miguel's Car.....
Luis to himself: My god Fancy is beautiful. I would love to see her again and talk to her. She made me smile and laugh again. I need to see her again.
Miguel: Luis you seem happy. What are you thinking about? Let me guess....Fancy
Luis: What? no. But when i was talking to her i felt like i knew her my whole life. Maybe i'll bump into her.
Miguel: Maybe
Miguel to himself: Oh Luis you will see her again. Ethan and my plan is going to work.
Up Next: Will Ethan and Miguel's plan work? Sheridan is hesitant about Fancy's question. What happenes when Luis and Fancy see each other again?