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Post by nicki9202 on Jun 26, 2007 19:09:06 GMT -5
I Love it I want More please
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Post by lancylust on Jun 26, 2007 19:38:29 GMT -5
i want read luis and fancy that was great
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 28, 2007 0:12:36 GMT -5
In Bermuda, Luis and Fancy have just woken up from a very LONG night.
Luis: Hey you. Good Morning! (kisses Fancy)
Fancy: *yawn* Hey yourself. You got me all worn out last night. I feel exhausted.
Luis: (laughs) Me? What about you? You tired me out, but hey I am good aren't I? (he had a grin on his face)
Fancy:(laughs) My God are you c0cky or what?
Luis: Yeah I know, I am c0cky and I have a oversized ego. Yeah Yeah Yeah. You have said that before.
Fancy: Wow you admitted it. Bravo. (laughs)
Luis: Are being smart with me? Huh?
Luis begins to tickle Fancy.
Fancy: Luis! Stop!(laughing very hard) Stop!
Luis: Nope. Sorry. This is to much fun.
Fancy:(laughing) Luis! Stop! I am ticklish.
Luis finally stops and tries to pull her into a kiss. Fancy pulls away.
Fancy: No I am mad at you. Humph.
Luis: Oh come on Fancy I was just kidding around. I am sorry.
Fancy: Your not forgiven.
Luis: Fine.
Fancy: Just kidding. You better make it up to me.
Luis: How is this for starters?
Luis pulls her into a passionate kiss.
Fancy: needs a little work.
Luis: Hey!
Fancy: Just kidding.
Luis: How about we go take a nice long shower together?
Fancy: I say what are we waiting for?
They run to the bathroom and begin a nice long shower. They scrub each other's back and body and begin making out in the shower.
At The Mansion, Ethan walks downstairs only to find Gwen sitting in the living room.
Gwen: Well Good Morning sleepy head! I got you some breakfast.
Ethan: Gwen, what are you doing here?
Gwen: Just thought I bring you some breakfast after everything that happened last night.
Ethan: Well Thanks. But I am going to leave now so I can win Theresa back.
Gwen: d**nit Ethan. Can't you see she doesn't love you? If she did she would have trusted you.
Ethan: Yeah, but I wasn't there to hold her when she was having whatever nightmare she was having.
Gwen: Just forget about her. She is worth your time or your love.
Rebecca walks in.
Rebecca: Oh Yay! Goodie. You guys are back together!
Gwne: Mother! Shutup!
Ethan: What? We aren't back together. I love Theresa. Gwen knows that Rebecca.
Rebecca: But Gwen said that
Gwen: Mother, what are you doing here?
Rebecca: Thought I just come by and say hi, but I have to leave my boy toy is waiting for me at the hotel. I mean sex buddy. I mean a hunk I mean uh uh uh
Gwen: Oh Mother! Just Go!
Rebecca: Oh Thank God. If I don't get some action now I'll die.
Gwen: Gross.
Rebecca walks out.
Ethan: Did you tell your mother we are back together?
Gwen: Of Course not. You know her, if she doesn't get any she goes crazy.
Ethan: Yeah uh huh. Well I am going to leave.
Gwen: To where? You didn't eat?
Ethan: To get Theresa back.
Ethan leaves and dials his phone. He orders 12 dozen roses to be delivered to Theresa with chocalte and a I'm sorry Teddy Bear.
At The Lopez-Fitzgerald house. Theresa come walking out of the room.There is a knock at the door.
Deliverer: Delivery for Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald?
Theresa: That's me.
Deliverer: Sign here miss.
Theresa: Thankyou.
The deliverer brings in the 12 dozen roses, chocalate and the teddy bear. Theresa finds a card in the roses.
Theresa,
I am sorry about everything that happened last night. I should have been there to help you in your nightmare. I don't know how I whinded up in the other room. Please forgive me and come back to me. I miss you and I love you very much.
Your Love,
Ethan
Theresa: If You love me, then you would believe me! It wasn't some nightmare! Gwen did it! I know she did! d**n her for ruining my relationship!
She throws the roses and chocalate and flowers to the floor.
Pilar walks in.
Pilar: Theresita. What happened?
Theresa: Nothing Mama.
Pilar: Why did you throw these things Ethan gave to you?
Theresa: We are in a fight.
Theresa tells Pilar everything that happened.
Pilar: I am sorry Mija. I hope things work out for you two.
Theresa: No mama. I can't be with a guy who doesn't believe or trust me. I just wanna go out today and just forget Ethan. Paloma! Are you ready.
Paloma comes out.
Paloma: Ready! Lets Go.
Pilar: Where are you two going?
Theresa: Just to enjoy a day out. Bye mama.
Pilar: Okay bye have fun.
They leave. Pilar takes the flowers and puts them in water and put the chocalte and bear on the table. There is a kncok at the door.
In Bermuda.
Fancy: Oh My Gosh Luis, we better get out I am all pruny.
Luis: Sorry. I forgot we were in the shower.
Fancy: hehehe
They get out of the shower and get dressed. They go for a nice walk on the boardwalk in the beach.
Luis: So Fancy...Are you afraid of dolphins?
Fancy: No why?
Luis: Good because I have a suprise for you.
Luis takes Fancy to this huge pool area and Fancy see dolphins in there.
Fancy: What are we doing here?
They see a trainer riding the dolphin.
Luis: *points to the trainer* That! We are going to swin with them too.
Fancy: Are you serious! Oh My Gosh. I can't wait.
Fancy kisses Luis. They change into a bathing suit and go into the water. The trainer shows them how to ride the dolphin and they begin to ride them.
At the Lopez-Fitzgerald house. Pilar opens the door.
Miguel: Mama, welcome home! Paloma called and said you got home a day early.
Kay: It is great to have you back Pilar. Maria missed you so much. (looks at Maria) Didn't you sweetie.
Miguel: How was your trip?
Pilar takes Maria and holds her.
Pilar: It was a lot of fun, but I missed you guys. Did I miss anything?
Miguel: Well...Kay you tell her.
Kay: No you tell her.
Miguel: No You.
Pilar: Will someone please tell me?
Miguel: Okay fine. Kay and I are engaged!!
Pilar: That wonderful. (hugs Miguel and Kay) Welcome to the family.
Kay: Wait there is more.
Pilar: What?
Kay: We're having another baby!
Pilar is jumping up and down with joy.
Pilar: I am so happy. Congratulations!!!!
Kay: Thankyou.
Miguel: Thankyou.
They hug and Pilar gives them coffee and cake.After they finish Miguel and Kay take Maria to the park. Pilar does some house work and begins to sing. She is so happy.
Theresa and Paloma have just gotten there nails done and they get freshen up and go to the blue note.
Bartender: (looks at Paloma)Hey there sexy. What can I get you?
Paloma: Ew are you hitting on me?
Bartender: Maybe. You know baby if I could rearrange the alphabet I put U and I together.
Paloma: Oh Yeah. Well If I could rearrange the alphabet I would put F U together.
Theresa: Paloma!
They walk away.Noah walks over to them.
Noah: Hey beautiful. Whats going on? Is you mom mad?
Paloma: No. But I am. That bartender was hitting on me?
Noah: Who? Him? He is a sleeze bag. Don't pay attention to him! Can I get you ladies something to drink?
Paloma: I'll have a martini please.
Theresa: Mee too. Thanks.
Noah walks away. There is a cute guy staring at Theresa.
Paloma: Ahem. Someone is looking at you. I think he is interested in you.
Theresa: Paloma, just because someone looks at you doesn't mean he likes you.
Paloma: Oh Yeah, then why is he coming over here to talk to you?
Theresa: What.
There is a tap at Theresa's shoulder.
Theresa: Hi.
Jared: Hi. My name is Jared and you are stunning. May I have a dance?
Theresa: Hi I am Theresa and this is my sister Paloma. And yes you can have a dance.
They get up and dance to a slow song. Noah walks over with the drinks.
Noah: Whose that?
Paloma: His name is Jared. I think he likes Theresa.
Noah: Well thats nice. I thought she was with Ethan though?
Paloma: They had a fight so I don't know where they are at right now.
Noah: Oh I see. I have a 5 minute break, would you like to dance.
Paloma: Thought you never ask.
They got up and danced. Ethan walked in the dooor with Chad.
Chad: i feel bad that I left Whitney all alone with Miles and I am out having a good time.
Ethan: Don't feel bad, plus I needed a close guy friend. I am so upset about Theres.a I just miss her so much and I havem't got a phone call or anything.
Chad: Just give it time. Or not.
Ethan: Huh?
Chad pouint to Theresa and Jared.
Ethan: What the hell is she doing?
Chad: Ethan, man just let it go.
Ethan: Let it go! The women I love is over there with another guy!
Gwen walks in and sees Theresa dancing with Jared.
Gwen: Wow. she moved on fast. My plan actually worked.
She sees Ethan and walks over to him.
Ethan: My God, what is she doing dancing with him.
Gwen: Seems like Theresa moved on fast.
Ethan was ina jealous rage and grabbed Gwen!
Ethan: Lets dance.
Gwen: Okay. We can make beautiful music together.
Ethan pretended he didn't hear that and danced with Gwen.
Paloma sees this and goes and tells Theresa.
Jared: Everything okay?
Theresa: What, yeah. It is just my uh ex boyfriend over there.
Jared: I see. He was a fool to let you go.
Theresa just smiled.
Gwen is babbling on and on and Ethan is just staring at Theresa. Etha heard her say ex boyfriend.
Ethan: (to himself) Ex? No way. This is not over. I am not going to lose Theresa. No way in hell! I gotta get her back. What am I going to do? Making her jealous doesn't seem to be working!
In Bermuda Fancy and Luis are having so much fun swimming with the dolphins and riding them.
Fancy: Luis, this is so much fun and so cute. Thankyou.
Luis: Anytime.
They get out of the water and feed the dolphins.
Luis: Wow princess is actually touching fish.
Fancy: Luis: I am not a princess. I am not some stuck up rich girl who calls on mommy and daddy for everything. I am not Paris Hilton.
Luis: I know honey I was just joking I am sorry.
Fancy: Yeah sure.
Fancy throws fish food at him.
Luis: Hey!
Fancy: Whoops sorry it must have sliiped.
Luis: Yeah right.
He gets up and begins chasing her around the pool.
Fancy: Oooohhh ow my ankle.
Luis: Oh My Gosh! Are you okay?
Fancy: Sike!
She pushes Luis into the water.
Luis: Oh Yeah!
Luis pulls her into the water and the dolphins come and form a heart around them. They begin to kiss. They had so much fun and go back to the hotel to enjoy a nice dinner.
Up Next: Will Ethan learn what Gwen really did? Luis and Fancy spend their last night in Bermuda. What will they do? Jared asks Theresa out. Will she accept?
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Post by nicki9202 on Jun 28, 2007 1:36:50 GMT -5
Keep going I love it
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Post by luisismine on Jun 28, 2007 7:50:31 GMT -5
Aww Lancy love and on Gwen.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 28, 2007 11:01:16 GMT -5
Hopefully I'll have more tonight.
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Post by lancylust on Jun 29, 2007 0:00:40 GMT -5
wow that was very good i think make luis jealous her boyfriend i knmow they love each other
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 29, 2007 0:30:49 GMT -5
At The Blue Note. Theresa and Jared stop anicing and Jared gets them something to drink. Noah goes back to wok and Paloma walks over to Theresa.
Paloma: You guys were so cute together on the dance floor.
Theresa: No we weren't. Okay maybe a little. He is such a sweetheart.
Paloma: I can't believe Ethan was a moron and danced with Gwen.
Theresa: Paloma, just let it go.
Jared comes walking back with their drinks.
Jared: Is it okay if I sit with you guys?
Paloma: Yes please.
Chad walks over
Chad: Hey guys.
Theresa: Hey Chad, this is Jared.
Chad: Hi Jared, I am Chad. Nice to meet you.
Jared: You too.
They shake hands.
Theresa: Chad, sit down. Did Whitney come?
Chad: No she stayed home with Miles. I can't stay I came with Ethan. He needed a friend. I just came by to say hi. Have a Good Night.
Theresa: Okay, bye. Give Whitney My love.
Ethan and Gwen are still dancing and Gwen is just babbling on and on.
Gwen: (talking fast) Wow Ethan. I never thought we would get back together. I always knew I was the right women for you. I knew you didn't love Theresa. If you did you would have protected her when i was trying to smother her, but you know I needed you.
Ethan: Woah, wait. What did you just say?
Gwen realizes she spilled the beans. She has to get out of it.
Gwen: i said that I am glad you are giving us a second chance and that I love you.
Ethan: I could have sworn you said smother Theresa. One more thing we aren't back together.
Gwen: I did not say that. You know I would do such a hateful thing. If we aren't back together why did you pull me into a dance?
Ethan: I don't know. I was just ina dancing mood.
They stop dancing.
In Bermuda, it is Fancy and Luis' last night. They go out for a romantic candle light dinner. They are sitting on the beach with a blanket around them and Luis is holding Fancy. They are watching the sun set.
Fancy: i wish we didn't have to go back. I love it here and just being with you.
Luis: I know, it is beautiful here and I wish we could just stay here together forever. With you in my arms and making love to you all night.
Fancy: These past days have been the best days of my life. You made it so romantic and sweet. I really loved the dolphins.
Luis: I am glad I made you happy.I love you.
Fancy: I love you too.
They kiss as the sun sets.
Back at the Blue Note. Salsa music plays.
Jared: Tess, would you like to salsa with me?
Theresa: My name is Theresa. But yes I would love to dance again.
Jared: I am going to call you Tess.
Theresa: My name is Theresa. (she says annoyed)
Jared: Okay, whatever you say Tess.
Theresa: Grr.
They get on the dance gfloor and begin salsa dancing. Theresa is impressed on how well he is doing.Ethan and Chad are sitting at the bar. Gwen has leftin anger because she thought Ethan was hers again. Ethan sees Theresa and Jared.
Ethan: d**nit, what does he have that I don't have?
Chad: Your women.
Ethan looks at him angrily
Chad: Sorry Man.
Noah comes over
Noah: Ethan how can you let Theresa dance with that guy?
Ethan: We got into a big fight and she isn't speaking to me. Hey can you ask Paloma to talk to Theresa for me?
Noah: No Way! Paloma is mad at you too for hurting Theresa.
Chad: Man if you love her then you should have believed her.
Ethan: i do love her. But I don't know what happen and I know Gwen is capable of murder.
Noah: You never know man. People can change. I am off shift, so I am going to go take Paloma home. Night Guys.
Noah walks over to Paloma.
Paloma: All done for the night?
Noah: Yup, can i give you a ride home?
Paloma: Um, sure. I'll tell Theresa.
Paloma goes to tell Theresa while she is still salsa dancing. Paloma and Noah leave. The song finishes and Jared and Theresa walk outside. Ethan and Chad follow and hide in teh bush.
Jared: i had a lot of fun tonight with you Tess.
Theresa: It is Theresa.\
Jared: okay fine THERESA. I was wondering if you would like to go out with me tommorow?
In Bermuda. Fancy and Luis returned to the hotel. They finish packing and take a nice hot bubble bath. When they finish Luis carries her out and begins to make love to her.
Fancy: I love you Luis.
Luis: No Talking. I just wanna make love to you.
They begin to kiss passionately and make love. The room next door hears them.
Esme: My God. they are going wild over there huh? Guess they haven't got some in awhile.
Dylan: Yeah, they are. What do you say we show them off.
Esme: I love the way you think Denny.
Dylan: Whose Denny? i'm Dylan.
Esme: Yea thats what I said. Dylan. Oh shutup and just kiss me you sexy beast.
They begin make love very loudly and Fancy and Luis are disturbed.
Fancy: What the hell?
Luis: That is disgusting. I am going next door to tell them to shutup.
Fancy: My Gosh, what sickos.
They put on a bath robe and go next dorr. Luis knocks very hard on the door.
Fancy: Luis, we'll just ask them nicely to quiet down.
Esme and Dylan are still going at it and now Fancy is annoyed. Fancy knocks on the door. Esme and Dylan stop.
Esme: Gosh hold your horses. We're coming.
Fancy recognized the voice.
Fancy: Oh my gosh.
Luis: What?
The door opens.
Esme: we know we're a little horny today, but i mean come on---Oh My God. Fancy?
Luis: You know each other?
Fancy: Yeah, we best friends. Oh My Gosh Esme.
They hug.
Fancy: What are you doing here?
Esme: I am here with Devin.
Dylan is laying on the bed.
Dylan: ITS DYLAN!
Fancy: Yep your still the same.
Esme: What about you? What are you doing here?
Fancy: Well we came for a little getaway for a few days. We are leaving tommorow though.
Esme: Who is this handsome young guy?
Fancy: Oh This is my boyfriend Luis.
Luis: Hi, nice to meet you.
Esme: Nice to meet you too Luigi.
Luis: No it is Luis.
Fancy: Let it go, she'll never get it right. Esme did you just get here?
Esme: Yeah: I just checked in. I needed a little vacation from Vegas. Wait were you the ones we heard next door?
Fancy blushes.
Fancy: Um Yeah. We got interrupted my your loud moans.
Luis: we just cam eover here to tell you to quiet down a bit.
Esme: We wanted to show you guys off, because you guys were going wild in there.
Luis: sorry. hahah we'll try to keep it down. But I can't make any promises.
Fancy: Luis!
Fancy: Esme, it was great to see you but we gotta go back and yeah.
Esme: I gotta get back to whatever his name is.
Dylan: its DYLAN! D-Y-L-A-N
Esme: Yeah Yeah Yeah. Well it was great catching up with you Fancy. I hope to come to Harmony soon and see you. It was nice to you Lewis.
Luis: (laughs) You too. Bye.
They head back to their room.
Luis: She's funny.
Fancy: Yup thats Esme.Anyways what do you say we pick up right where we left off? (untying his robe)
Luis: I say Lets Go!
They strip the robes off each other and make love all night.
Back at The Blue Note.
Ethan:(whispers) She better not say yes.
Chad: (whispers) Man go fight for her.
Ethan:(whispers) No she'll know I have been spying on her. I thinks he is mad at me for dancing with Gwen.
Chad:(whispers) Told you not to do it.
Theresa: Um, um. Sure why not.
Ethan jumps out.They begin to shout ata each other.
Ethan: What the hell Theresa?
Theresa: Ethan what are you doing here?
Ethan: I was upset so I needed to go out of the house and just think.
Theresa: Did you get enough thinking while dancing with Gwen?!?
Ethan: What? I only danced with her because I saw you dancing with him.
Jared: Man just back off!
Ethan: Man Stay out of this and STAY AWAY FROM MY GIRLFRIEND!
Jared: According to Tess, the correct term is ex boyfriend.
Ethan: Her name is Theresa!
Chad jumps out and pulls Ethan back.
Chad: man lets just go!
Ethan: No! Theresa I love you. Please forgive me. Please give me another chance.
Theresa: Ethan, if you love me you wouldn't trust your ex girlfriend over me.
Jared: Bad decision man.
Ethan: Shutup.
Theresa: I already gave you another chance when I saw you kissing her. How many more do you want?
Ethan: She kissed me!
Theresa: Whatever, it takes two to tango.Look I can't do this anymore Ethan. I can't keep doubting your love for me. I am sorry. (she begins to cry)
Jared: Do you want me to take you home?
Theresa: Yes Please.
They begin to walk away.
Ethan: I AM NOT GIVING UP ON US!!!
Chad: Ethan lets just go. Come on. You hurt her enough tonight. Lets just go and let her cool off.
They walk back to the car and Chad drops Ethan off at the mansion. He can't sleep. He is to upset. Jared takes Theresa home.
Theresa: I am sorry about that.
Jared: Don't be. He is a jerk.
Theresa: He isn't. He is sweet and kind.
Jared: Don't defend him, he hurt you.
Theresa: Your right. Thanks for taking me home.
Jared: No Problem. See you tommorow. (he kisses her on the cheek)
Theresa goes inside and tells Paloma everything that happened. Theresa is s upset, they begin to eat ice cream and talk.Once they finish they go to bed. Theresa can't sleep. She keeps thinking if she should give Ethan another chance.
Theresa:(to herself) I love him so much. I don't know what to do. If only he found out the truth about Gwen. then our lives would be perfect. I don't know what to do. Maybe Jared is a good guy. Maybe my date with him tommorow will go great. I don't know. I am so confused. Maybe I should just sleep.
Up Next: Fancy and Luis return. What does Sheridan have to say about their little trip. Ethan learns the truth, but will it be to late? An accident happens, who ends up in the hospital?
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Post by luisismine on Jun 29, 2007 6:12:42 GMT -5
on Jared.Ethan better get his girl and to Lancy. love my other girl Esme.
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nicki9202
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Post by nicki9202 on Jun 29, 2007 12:44:39 GMT -5
Keep going I love this chapter
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 29, 2007 15:35:38 GMT -5
Thanks. I'll update soon.
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Post by lancylust on Jun 29, 2007 16:32:38 GMT -5
wow kim that good please updates i want see luis be jealous her old boyfriends to harmony ilove there love making all night please writer more i enjoy it alot
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 29, 2007 16:35:08 GMT -5
I will soon promise, but I don't think I am going to make Luis jealous of Fancy's ex. I think they might have enough issues with Sheridan
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Post by lancylust on Jun 29, 2007 20:09:01 GMT -5
yea but he find her serect . he got mad at sheridan could he hurt fancy. maybe you should make fancy have luis baby and wedding day i want know wat sheridan do fancy and babythat be in hosptital i love your story
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 29, 2007 23:34:24 GMT -5
Thanks. I definetely will have an update tommorow night.
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