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Post by noahpalomaandetfan on Sept 2, 2007 2:13:54 GMT -5
Pretty please update soon. I finally got around to reading this story and would like to read more of ET, Lancy and Noah & Paloma ..
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Post by backstreetboysfan on Sept 2, 2007 14:51:06 GMT -5
I love it so far....Plz update soon
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Sept 2, 2007 23:16:44 GMT -5
I am sorry everyone that I haven't updated yet I am hoping to update tommorow thanks for your patience
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Post by noahpalomaandetfan on Sept 4, 2007 21:21:40 GMT -5
I am sorry everyone that I haven't updated yet I am hoping to update tommorow thanks for your patience I just got around to finish reading it but I write to when I have free time from NIU classes and work... so I know what it like when someone can't get to updating a story right away, that makes it easier to be patient.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Sept 15, 2007 23:39:02 GMT -5
Inside Theresa's Hospital Room, Pilar walks in and holds Theresa hands. She begins to tear.
Pilar: Theresita. Wake up please. Your family and friends need you. Don't give up and fight. Think of everyone who loves you and wants you to get better. I can't lose another child. I can't. Please God, let my daughter heal and come back to us. Theresaita come back to us. (Pilar begins to cry really hard) I love you mija.
Pilar leaves Theresa's room. Paloma is still crying and Noah comfort her. As Pilar rejoins everyone, the doctor passes by. Luis stops him.
Luis: Doctor Smith, I have a question. What are the chances of Theresa waking up?
Doctor Smith: Well, her vital signs are very strong right now. We are hoping that will change very soon. But if it doesn't the chances of her surviving are very slim. I am sorry.
Luis: Thankyou doctor.
Paloma: Oh My Gosh!(crying) I can't lose my sister Noah. I can't. I lost so much time not knowing her when i was growing up. She has to get better. She just has to.
Miguel: I am going to go in and see Theresa. Paloma would you like to come with me?
Paloma: Okay.
They walk in her room as Sam walks in and meets up with everyone with some interesting information.
Luis: Sam what have you got?
Inside Theresa's room, Miguel and Paloma sit by Theresa's side. They each grab her hand.
Miguel: Hey sis. Paloma and I are here. You need to come back to us. We all need you. Please fight to stay alive.
Outside Theresa's room.
Sam: How is Theresa?
Kay: She is in a coma. The doctor said her vital signs are not to strong.
Luis: Sam what have we found out?
Sam: Okay well, we know that this wasn't an accident.
Pilar: Are you saying someone purposely did this to her??
Sam: When we examined the scar, we found damages that had to be done by another car. The side were the car hit the tree has damages but the other side shows that the paint of the other car wiped off onto Theresa's.
Ethan: Dad do we know who did this?
Sam: Well....
Inside Theresa's room.
Paloma: Theresa, I grew up all my life knowing I had a sister. I spend so much time not getting to know you. We are fianlly getting close please come back to us. How did this happen? Theresa listen to me. So many people love you. You have to pull through. I love you.
Miguel: I love you too.
They walk outside and see Sam.
Ethan: Well Dad. Who did this to her?
Miguel: Whats going on?
Kay: Honey, Your sister's accident was no accident.
Paloma: What do you mean?
Fancy: Someone purposedly hit her car. Whoever did it knew where she was and her exact location.
Sam: We don't know who did it yet. But we will get to the bottom of this I promise.
Ethan can't take it anymore. He wonders who would do this to the women he loves. He sneaks away from everyone and into Theresa's room.Ethan goes in and kisses her. He sits beside her and holds her hand.
Ethan: Theresa. I am so sorry I didn't believe you about Gwen. I found out the truth and I can't believe that I didn't trust you. You mean the world to me. I wish we can switch places and I'd be laying there instead of you. You have to get better and come back to me. I need you in my life. I promise if you wake up I'll be the best boyfriend and I'll never doubt you. I can't lose you not after everything we been through. Remember all the times we had, our first date. It was so special. I love you so much. (Ethan breaks down and cries) God. I never thought I could ever feel this way. I'll never leave you. You are the women for me. Everytime you walk in the room my heart jumps. Please wake up baby. Please.
He grabs her hand and leans toward her. All of the sudden....she moves her hands. Ethan sees her eyes flickering. She whispers I love you too.
Ethan: Oh My Gosh. She waking up.
Ethan kisses her and runs outside the room to get a doctor.
Ethan: Wheres Doctor Smith?!? Theresa is waking up!!! Get a doctor quick!!!
Noah runs to get the doctor, but Kay all of the sudden collapses to the floor.
Miguel: Kay! Oh My Gosh. Honey are you okay? Wake up.
Sam: Sweertie, whats wrong?
Fancy: Quick we need a doctor!!!
Kay begins to open her eyes. A nurse comes.
Luis: Kay what happened?
Kay: What do you mean?
Miguel: Honey you just collapsed on the floor.
Kay: I did?
Paloma: Maybe you should let a doctor see you.
The nurse bring Kay to a room and Miguel follows.
Miguel: Let me know whats going on with Theresa.
The doctor comes and goes to Theresa's room.
Ethan: She moved her hands and flickered her eyes. She whispered I love you.
Pilar: Lets not get our hopes up. We have to wait for the doctor.
Doctor Smith comes back out.
Inside Kay's room, a doctor comes and examines her.
Miguel: What happened Doctor?
Doctor Scorpio: Kay has to much stress on her. She needs to relax or she can collapse again. She needs to take it easy.
Miguel: Baby you have to take it easy. Doctor how is the baby?
Doctor: The babies are healthy and going strong.
Kay: Woah Woah Woah. BABIES!!!!
Docotr Scorpio: Yeah didn't you know you were carrying triplets?
Miguel: TRIP
Kay: LETS!!!
Doctor Scorpio: They are doing just fine and Kay is released but no stress.
Miguel: Thankyou.
The docotr leaves. Back outside Theresa's room, the docotr comes out.
Ethan: Well is she awake?
Doctor Smith: Its a miracle. Her vital signs are going strong and she is gaining back consciene. Whatever you guys said to her worked. She is going to have a full recovery. O wait, I do have some other news.
Ethan: WHAT NEWS YOU JUST SAID EVERYTHING WAS GOING TO BE FINE!!!
Miguel is rolling Kay in a wheelchair and rejoins everyone.
Kay: Whats going on?
Miguel: What news? What happened?
Pilar: Theresa woke up and she is going to have a full recover but doctor Smith has more news to tell.
Doctor Smith: I didn't mean to scare you. She is going to be fine. I forgot to mention that Theresa is pregnant and the baby miraculously survived the accident.
Ethan: Pregnant?
He faints.
Fancy: Ethan Oh My Gosh. Are you okay?
Ethan gets back up.
Luis: So she is having a baby?
Doctor Smith: Congratulations. You guys can go in a see her but not to many. You don't want to over do it. She'll be able to go home tommorow.
Ethan: Can I go in first? I want to tell her about the baby?
Luis: Sure.
Ethan goes back in the room and sees Theresa with her beautiful eyes open. He goes and holds her hand.
Ethan: Hey. How are you feeling?
Theresa: Okay, but what happened?
Ethan: You got in a car accident, but someone purposedly did this to you. We are going to get to the bottom of it I promise.
Theresa: Who hates me that much?
Ethan: Lets not think about it right now. The important thing is that your alive and today is a miracle. I thought I lost you. The docotr said your chances of making it were slim.
Theresa: Well I heard what you dais and I felt ur hand on mine. Like i had a connection with you.
Ethan: I will neevr leave or doubt you. I love you so much and I have some news to tell you.
Theresa: What si it?
Ethan: Your having a baby and I hope its mine too. (laughs)
Theresa: I'm pregnant? That wonderful and of course your the father. I think. (giggles)
Ethan: Man your something, after all you been through you still have a sense of humor.
He kisses her as Luis, Fancy, Pilar and everyone else walks in.
Sam: Ahem.
Pilar: Mija I am so glad your awake.
Luis: We thought we lost you.
Fancy: Thank God your awake.
Paloma: We heard about the baby too. Congratulations.
Noah: Kay, by the way? What happened before?
Miguel: The doctor said she has been dealing with to much stress and needs to take it easy.
Kay: She also said that the babies are fine.
Sam: Babies?
Kay: We're having triplets!
Pilar: Dios Mios! Today is such a good day. Thank the lord.
Everyone goes and kisses Theresa and leaves. Ethan decided to spend the night at the hospital with her.
At Luis' Apartment.
Fancy: Man what a day.
Luis: Everything turn out great today. Only thing is to find the bastard who did this to Theresa.
Fancy massages Luis.
Fancy: I know, but lets just rest and deal with everything tommorow. Lets just be thankful Theresa and Kay are okay and the babies too.
Luis: Your right. Thanks for being there to supoort me today.
Fancy: I do anything for you.
Luis pulls Fancy into a deep kiss. They begin to make love.
At Kay and Miguel's house.
Miguel goes to Maria's room and kisses her goosnight. He carries Kay onto the bed.
Kay: My strong hero. I love you.
Miguel: I love you too.
He lays beside her and holds her. They fall asleep into each other's arms.
Sam takes Pilar out for some coffee. Paloma and Noah head back to Pilar's house.
At The Book Cafe.
Sam: I promise Pilar, I'll find whoever did this to Theresa and make sure they do their time.
Pilar: Thankyou so much Sam. I don't know what we would do without you.
Sam: I just hope I am successful in this case.
Pilar: I know you will be.
They look into each other's eyes and share a passionate kiss.
At The Hospital.
Ethan: Theresa, get soem rest. I rpomise nothing will happen to you. I'm here and I am not going anmywhere.
Theresa: I know I trust you. Just don't ever let me go.
Ethan: Not ina million year. (He holds her hands and kisses it)
At Pilar's House.
Noah: I am glad everything worked out today.
Paloma: Now we just have to find out who did this.
Noah: Whoever did this is a monster. They are purely evil.
Paloma: Thanks for being there for me. I don't know what i would have done if she didn't wake up.
Noah: She did wake up and she is going to recover. Don't worry.
Paloma: Your right.
They sit on the couch and hold each other. They listen to some music and begin to dance. Noah whispers to Paloma.
Noah: I think I'm falling in love with you.
Paloma: I think I am too.
They kiss and continue to dance.
Up Next: Theresa comes home. More evidence shows up about Theresa's accident. Sheridan starts a fight with Luis over Fancy. Ivy learns what Gwen did. Fox comes back.
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Post by luisismine on Sept 16, 2007 14:39:24 GMT -5
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Post by nicki9202 on Sept 16, 2007 18:34:45 GMT -5
I Love this capter please update you are such a creative story writer
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Sept 18, 2007 15:56:36 GMT -5
thankyou for being so patience. I'll try my best to update soon. =)
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Oct 8, 2007 13:33:35 GMT -5
Back at the hospital. Theresa wakes up. Ethan isn't there.
Theresa: Ethan? Hmm Where did he go?
Ethan walks in with breakfast on a tray.
Ethan: Good Morning Honey. I thought I just bring you some breakfast. I also brought you double since you are eating for two.
Theresa: Aww your so sweet. Thankyou.
Ethan puts the tray down and leans in to kiss Theresa. Just as they kiss there is a knock at the door.
Back at Pilar's house. Pilar wakes up and remebers her kiss with Sam. Paloma walks in.
Paloma: Good Morning Mama.
Pilar: Good Morning Mija. How was your night?
Paloma: Oh mama. It was wonderful. Noah drove me home yesterday and we danced for like an hour. It was beautiful and he told me he loves me.
Pilar: That is wonderful. I am so happy you found someone good to you.
Paloma: Wait, where were you last night. I didn't even here you come in.
Pilar: Well um Sam took me out for some coffeee and the next thing I know we kissed. Then he took me home home.
Paloma: YOU AND SAM KISSED??
Pilar: Paloma, why are you yelling?
Paloma: sorry, i meant thats wonderful. How was it? Do you like him?
Back at the Mansion. Ivy and Rebecca walk in the living room.
Ivy: Rebecca what do you want? I really wish not to talk to you.
Rebecca: Well I thought we should settle everything since we are going to be in laws soon.
Ivy: What are you talking about?
Rebecca: You didn't hear. Ethan and Gwen are back together.
Ivy: What?? Ethan loves Theresa.
Rebecca: No he loves Gwen. Beside that B1tch is dead.
Ivy: What do you mean Theresa is dead?
Rebecca: It all over Harmony. Gwen crashed Theresa's car in a tree and she was left unconscience. She is the hospital in a coma.
Iv: Gwen tried to murder Theresa!!!!
Rebecca: and succeeded. We are going to be in laws!!!
Ivy: Oh my Gosh. I have to tell Ethan.
Rebecca: O no you don't. Gwennie will hate me.
Ivy: Your daughter tried to murder the love of my son's life. There is no way I am letting the both of you get away with this.
Ivy slaps Rebecca.
Back at The Hospital.
Ethan: Come in.
Doctor Smith: Hello Ethan and Theresa. I just came to inform you that Theresa's doing very well. She is released but she is going to need a lot of care.
Ethan: I'll make sure of that.
Doctor Smith: Well take care. Bye.
Theresa: Oh Ethan I can go home. This is wonderful.
Ethan: Yes it is. I'll go get your things and take you back home.
He kisses her and leaves the room.
Back at the Police Station. Sam is sitting at his desk holding a picture of Pilar. Luis walks over.
Luis: Sam.Any lead on Theresa's accident.
Sam quickly puts the picture way.
Sam: Uh what?
Luis: Are you okay. You look like you were day dreaming. and what did you put away?
Sam: Nothing. and I was not daydreaming.
The phone rings.
Sam: Chief Bennet.
Luis sits and waits.
Sam: Okay send it over.
Luis: Whats going on?
Sam: Some more evidence has been found at the plave of Theresa's crash. It should be here soon.
Back at Pilar's house.
Pilar: I don't know mija. I just have this feeling like I never felt before.
Paloma: Oh mama. Maybe you should go see Sam and talk.
Pilar: Yeah your right. I'll head down to the station right now.
Back at the mansion.
Rebecca: What was that for?
Ivy: Your daughter tried to kill Theresa.
Rebecca: SO TAKE IT OUT ON HER. NOT ME.
Ivy: YOU B1TCH. GET OUT OF MY HOUSE NOW!!!!
Rebecca: fine, but keep your mouth shut.
Ivy: (smirks) sure.
Rebecca leaves to go find Gwen. Ivy leaves to find Ethan.
Back at the station. The eveidence comes.
Sam: Interesting.
Luis: What is it?
Sam: It is a braclet that must have slipped off the person who did this to her. I'll sent this to the lab. Also these pictures came from the camera that where the accident took place.
Luis: Sam. Look there is the car that ran Theresa's car over. There is a license plate, but I can't make out the numbers.
Sam: I can't either. You know what I'll contact the place where these pictures came from and see if they have a video footage. We can slow it down and see if we can read the lisence number.
Luis: Okay good. I am going to find whoever did this to my baby sister and make them pay.
Sam: I'll do everything I can.
Luis: Thanks. Anyways I am going to meet up with Fancy for Lunch. I'll be back in a hour.
Sam: okay.
Just as Luis' leaves Pilar arrives at the Station.
Pilar: Sam, hey.
Sam: Hey you.
Pilar: Where is Luis?
Sam: Luis went to meet Fancy. He isn't here.
Pilar: Oh I see. Well we need to talk.
Sam: Yeah we do. But first more evidence came up about Theresa's accident. We got pictures that show the car hitting Theresa' s car.
Pilar: Really? So can we find whose car it belongs too?
Sam: We are sending for video footage to see if we can find the number of the lisence plate. I promise to let you know as soon as I can.
Pilar: Thankyou. Sam we really need to talk.
Sam walks and grabs Pilar. Sam kisses Pilar.
Sam: How about we talk over dinner tonight?
Pilar: That sounds like a plan.
Two cops walk by and see Pilar and Sam kissing.
Bret: Is that Chief Bennet and Lopez-Fitzgerald's mother?
Ryan: No.. could it?
Bret: We better not say anything.
Ryan: Yeah lets go.
Ivy can't get a hold of Ethan. She goes to the station to tell Sam what she knows. Ivy walks in the station and sees....
In Fancy's room. Luis walks in. Fancy is putting up a picture frame of Luis and Fancy on her nightstand.
Fancy: Look at my strong brave hero. Your so handsome and man I love you.
Luis: Well good. I love you too.
Fancy: Oh Luis. You scared me.
Luis: Sorry baby.
He kisses her.
Fancy: Are you on a break?
Luis: Yeah I am. I just thought I come by an get some lunch with you.
Fancy: Aww that was sweet. But I have a better idea.
She pulls him to a kiss. Fancy feels a little sick. Before they can begin to make out she runs to the bathroom and puke.
Luis: Honey are you okay?
Fancy: Yeah I am fine. Maybe it was soemthing I ate.
Luis: Okay I'll go downstair and get you some medicine and water.
Fancy: Thankyou.
Luis walks down to the kicthen and there is Sheridan sitting at the table.
Sheridan: luis, what are you doing here?
Luis: I just came down to get some water for Fancy.
Sheridan: Is she okay?
Luis: She is fine.
Sheridan: Thats good.
Luis: Yeah okay well bye Sheridan.
Sheridan: Wait Luis. I think there is something you should know.
Back at Ethan's apartment.
Ethan: There you go honey.
Theresa: Thankyou. Oh it is so good to be home.
Ethan: Why don't you lay on the bed and I'll make you some tea.
Theresa: Thankyou.
Back at the Station. Ivy sees Sam and Pilar kissing.
Ivy: What the hell is going on here?
Sam: Nothing.
Ivy: You were kissing her. Pilar how could you? I thought you were my friend.
Ivy runs out.
Pilar: Sam I feel horrible. I should go talk to her.
Sam: okay I'll call you later and pick you up at 6.
Pilar: Okay bye.
He kisses her. Pilar runs out to look for Ivy.
Back at the kitchen.
Luis: Wat is it?
Sheridan: Well Fancy has the tendency to be a little needy at times. She acts like a child when she doesn't get something she wants.
Luis: Sheridan, not this again.
Sheridan: I 'm sorry Luis. I still care about you and i only know whats best for you.
Luis: No you don't Fancy knows what I want. So just stay out of our lives.
Sheridan: Luis, that is not true. How could you doubt me again. Remember what happened to Marty. You know OUR son. MY SON!! The one who you thought was beth's.
Luis: Sheridan: Loook I apoligized. I miss Marty too, but he is gone. For about a year now. We need to move on. Marty will always have a special place in our heart. Nothing will ever replace him.
Sheridan: I'm sorry Luis. It is just I miss him.
Luis: I do too.
Sheridan hugs him. She leans in and kisses him. Luis pushes her away. Fancy walks in.
Fancy: What is going on?
Luis: This b1tch kissed me. Ugh (wipes his lips)
Fancy: Sheridan you b1tch. what the hell is wrong with you?
Luis: Seriously Sheridan you bring Marty up everytime just to get close to em again. Now i realize it. You evil whore. How could you use our dead son to try to get me back?
Sheridan: HOW DARE YOU ACCUSE ME OF THAT??
Luis: SHERIDAN JUST SHUTUP!!! LEAVE ME AND FANCY ALONE.
Fancy: Leave us alone. Lets go baby.
Sheridan: You know what Fancy I have something to say to you. pretty is back in twon. She called me last night.
Fancy: Thats impossible. No one has heard from her since...
Luis: Since what?
Fancy: I'll tell you when we get upstairs.
They go upstairs. Fancy begins to tell Luis everything.
Fancy: It was all over a boy. He gave Pretty all his attention and I got really and angry and we bagn to fight.
Luis: Thats it? Its okay. All siblings fight.
Fancy: No When we fought, I grabed a bucket that I thought was filled with water, but it was acid. I ruined my sister's face!!!!
Luis: Fancy, calm down. It was all an accident. You weren't going to lose me over that. The way Sheridan kept mentiong it, I thought you killed her.
Fancy: I would never do such a thing.
Luis: I know. That why I love you. Your so sweet and gentle. Are you feeling a little better?
Fancy: I am okay. I just had a little upset stomach.
Luis: Okay good. You know I need to go back to the station.
Fancy: Okay. I love you.
Luis: I love you too. Dinner later?
Fancy: Of Course.
Luis kisses her and heads back to the station.
At The Harmony Airport. Fox is waiting for a limo to pick him up and all the sudden he sees this woman sitting down.
Fox: Hmm...she looks very familar. Could it be? No. Shes....
Fox walks closer to see the woman.
Fox: Oh My gosh.
Pilar finds Ivy in the park.
Pilar: Ivy.
Ivy: Pilar how could you?
Pilar: I am so sorry Ivy. It just happened.
Ivy: Sorry I got so upset. It is just he was my first love and I never expected you two together.
Pilar: if you want I won't see him anymore.
Ivy: No Pilar. You deserve happiness. You've been through alot. I mean everything that has happened.
Pilar: Are you sure your okay with this?
Ivy: I'm sorry. You and him deserve to be happy.
Pilar: Thankyou so much!!!!
They hug.
Ivy: Pilar, as your friend I need to tell you something about Theresa's accident.
Pilar: What is it?
Up Next: Who is the mysterious woman Fox's sees? Ivy tells Pilar who crashed Theresa's car. Ethan decides to pop the question. Fancy is kidnapped.
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Post by nicki9202 on Oct 8, 2007 13:37:19 GMT -5
More please I Love this story
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Post by luisismine on Oct 8, 2007 13:46:22 GMT -5
woo hoo can't wait for more.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Oct 20, 2007 23:56:18 GMT -5
In The park
Pilar: Ivy, spit it out. Whats wrong? What is it you need to say?
Ivy: Pilar this is really hard to say. I don't how I am going to say it.
Pilar: Ivy, before we get any older.
Ivy: I KNOW WHO CRASHED THERESA'S CAR!
Back at The mansion. Fancy is getting ready for her dinner date with Luis. She takes a shower but after she comes out she has a strange feeling like someone is watching her.
Fancy: Hello? Is anyone there?
The closet suddenly opens.
Fancy: Oh My Gosh. What the hell?
Fancy walks over to the closet and walks in.
Fancy:(screams) AHHHHHH!!!!!!!!
At the Arirport. Fox still looking at the woman.
Fox: Oh My Gosh! It is....No it can't...but she was....
Fox walks over and realizes it is his sister Pretty.
Fox: PRETTY!!!
Fox tries to hug her.
Pretty: Don't touch me.
Fox: Don't you remeber me. It is Fox. Your brother.
Pretty: Oh you mean the brother who left me out in the cold and betrayed me like the rest of the family especially Fancy.
Fox: You know thats not true. You left us.
Pretty: None even bothered trying to contact me. All you guys wanted wa sme out of your lives.
Fox: Pretty!!!
Pretty: Whatever Fox. I have to go.
Fox: Where are you staying? Come back to the mansion with me?
Pretty: Yeah right. I am staying at a hotel where you and the rest of the family can't bother me. If you dare tell anyone I'm back you will be sorry.
Pretty walks away fast as her phone rings.
On the phone Pretty is talking to a woman and Fox overhears.
Pretty: Is everything set?..... Perfect... I'll meet you soon. I just got in but I had an encounter with Fox. That bastard. Okay I'll be there soon.
Pretty rushes off and Fox is hurt by what she called him. He goes back to the mansion.
At Ethan's apartment.
Ethan: Baby are you hungry? Should I fix something up for you or that little miracle your having? (rubbing Theresa's stomach)
Theresa: Maybe a sandwhich?
Ethan: sure. I 'll be right back.
Ethan makes the sandwhich and slips a little suprise inside. He bring it to Theresa.
Theresa: Thankyou honey.
She bites in and hits soemthing hard.
In Fancy's Room. She is still in the closet.
Fancy: HELPPPPP!!! SOMEONEEEE!!! LUISSSSS!!!!!
Woman: (in a raspy voice) Luis can't help you now!!!!
Fancy: Who the hell are you?
The woman ties Fancy up and covers her mouth and eyes and drives off. Fancy is squirming trying to break loose.
Woman: Your not getting away. You stole my everything from me. If I can't have it neither can you.
Fancy:(mumbling) Luis!!!
At The Park:
Pilar: Who did it? Tell me!!!!
Ivy: It was Gwen. Rebecca blurted it out to me. She told me that Gwen was really mad that Theresa stole Ethan from her.
Pilar: That B1tch. She didn't steal Ethan. We need to go to Sam now!
Ivy: Thats why I went there but then....
Pilar: Ivy, I'm sorry. I should be a friend and not date him.
Ivy: No Pilar. I see the the way he looks at you. He really cares about you. You deserve a good man. It just going to take some time getting use to.
Pilar: Thankyou Ivy.
They hug and rush off to the police station to tell Sam.
At Ethan's Apartment.
Theresa: Ow. What The hell?
Theresa opens the sandwhich and see a beautiful ring.
The Ring:
Theresa: OH MY GOSH! OH MY GOSH!!!! Ethan!!!!
Ethan takes the ring and wipes it clean. He bends down on one knee and hit the music player. It begins playing Always be My Baby by Mariah Carey.
Ethan: Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald. I know we haven't been together for the longest time but no one knows me better than you do. We have had our rough times but got through it and now we are going to bing a child into this world. I love you. I want us to be a happy family and with that being said Theresa Lopez-Fitzgerald will do me the honor of becoming my wife?
Theresa: (in tears) You have to do this when I am pregnant and more emotional than ever!! I love you so much!!! My answer is yes!! YES I'LL BE YOUR WIFE.
They are both in tears and share a kiss. He slips the ring on.
At The Hotel. The car Fancy's in pull in the parking lot and they bring her to a room. They sit her in a chair.
Pretty: Well Well well.....I never thought I see you again but looks like I have.
Pretty looks at the woman.
Pretty: Great work.
They tied her to the chair completely. They untape her mouth and uncover her blind fold.
Fancy: OH MY GOSH!!! YOU TWO!!!
At The Blue Note. Luis is waiting for Fancy.
Luis: What is with her? She isn't usually late. She was suppose meet me over 15 minutes ago. Her phone is off. I should call the mansion and find out if she is still there.
Luis calls ther mansion.
Luis: Hi is Fancy there?...Oh she isn't... Did she leave a while ago? You didn't see her leave? Oh well thats strange. Thankyou.
Luis starts to worry.
Luis: Where could she be?
Pilar and Ivy arrive at the station.
Sam: Hey you guys. Everything okay?
Pilar: Yeah. Ivy knows who smashed mija's car.
Sam: Ivy Thats great! Tell me who did it.
Ivy: It was Gwen. She was upset about Theresa and Ethan being together so she wanted to get back if Ethan. The only way she thought that would happen is if she killed Theresa.
Sam: It is understandable. Do you have evidence?
Ivy: Ohter than the words slipping out of Rebecca's mouth. No.
Sam: Well I can't make a full arrest just yet until the evidence from the lab comes back.
Pilar: They found a braclet of the suspect and are running it in the lab.
The phone rings in the station.
Sam: Cheif Bennet.
Luis: Sam, this is an emergency. Fancy is missing.
Sam: WHAT DO YOU MEAN FANCY IS MISSING?
Ivy: WHAT!!!!!!!!! WHERE IS MY DAUGHTER?
Luis: She was suppose to meet me at the blue note a half hour ago and she hasn't shown up yet! I called the mansion and the maid said she isn't there. Sam what am I going to do?
Sam: Come to the station now.
They hang up.
Ivy: Sam whats going on?
Pilar: Where is Fancy?
Sam: Luis called and said Fancy didn't show up for dinner, she is a half hour late and he called the mansion and the maid said she isn't there and didn't see her leave.
Ivy: Oh My Gosh. She has been kidnapped!!!
Pilar hugging Ivy.
Pilar: We don't know anything yet. Lets wait for Luis.
Up Next: The search for Fancy is in full swing. Everyone is looking. Luis has a breakdown. We find out who the other woman is and Fox tells Kay and Miguel he saw Pretty. Fancy thinks of a way to communicate to Luis.
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Post by luisismine on Oct 21, 2007 7:29:23 GMT -5
so glad you updated this.Can"t wait for more.
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Post by nicki9202 on Oct 28, 2007 20:41:40 GMT -5
more please I love this chapter
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Nov 1, 2007 0:20:23 GMT -5
Luis eneters the station.
Ivy: Luis, where is my daughter?
Pilar: Mio, please tell me you found her.
Luis: Ivy, mama i can't find her, the maid said she didn't see her leave and her room is empty and she isn't in the mansion.
Sam: Are you sure Fancy isn't being fashionably late?
Luis: If there is one thing I know about her....she is never fashionably late. Sure maybe by a minute or two but not a half hour!
At The Hotel.
Fancy: Oh My Gosh! What the hell is wrong with you two?
Pretty: We have been talking lately and decided it is finally time to get our revenge on you for ruining our lives.
Fancy: What are you talking about? Sheridan haven't you done enough to try and pull Luis away from me. It hasn't work every time you tried!
Sheridan: Shutup! Listen B1tch! Luis is my man and don't you forget it!
Pretty: Fancy remeber how jealous you were of me that I got the guy and you didn't. You remember how you left this hideous scar on my face!!!! (as she pulls back her hair to the nasty scar) Do you also remeber how you made up rumors about me about how I was a prostitute and would do anything for money?
Fancy: That was in the past!
Pretty: My love life has never been the same since those rumors had been reported everywhere! I can never find a man to love me and look beyond this digusting hideous thing!
Sheridan: Now you must pay... we are going to make sure you never see Luis again and when your gone I'll be there to comfort him. What you think Pretty I should wear you know a little something and let it slip!
Fancy: HE LOVES ME! You B1tch!!!!
Back at the Station.
Sam: It has been almost an hour and no one has heard or seen Fancy.
Luis: Sam we have to find her! She could be in big danger!
Ivy: My daughter! My baby!!!!
Pilar holding Ivy's hand
Pilar: We''ll find her Ivy we will.
Sam: I am going to launch a full investogation. We are going to find her. All the cops have been notified.
Luis: I'm leaving. Me staying here will not bring her back to me.
Ivy: We'll look too. Someone is bound to find her.
Pilar: I'll help you Ivy.
They are leaving and Pilar and Sam share a good-bye kiss as Luis is confused.
Sam: Everyone go go go!!!
At Kay and Miguel's House. Fox arrives to say hello.
Miguel: Hey Fox, how are you doing? Come in.
Fox: I am good, just a little jet lagged.
Kay: Honey, whose it?
Fox: Hey Kay.
Kay: Oh Hi Fox. How was your trip?
Fox: It was really good, had a lot of fun. You know when I went to the airport I ran into somebody. (Fox remebers what Pretty said and starts to debate wheter or not he should say something)
Miguel: Who?
Fox opens his mouth but the phone rings.
Kay: I'll get it.
Miguel: So who did you see?
Kay on the phone.
Kay: Oh My Gosh! Okay we'll help look.
Fox: Kay, whats wrong?
At The Hotel.
Sheridan and Pretty share a evil laugh.
Fancy: You guys are horrible. Let me go. We can talk about this.
Pretty: Should we let her go?
Sheridan: Yeah right!
Pretty: I say we leave her locked up and go out.
Sheridan: Have fun Fancy, make sure you don't move....Oh wait you can't hahaha.
They leave and Fancy is in the hotel all alone. Before they leave know they make sure she gets a little beating. They slapped her a few times. Kicked her and punched her face. Pulled her hair. Fancy was bleeding a little.
Fancy: I've got to find a way to communicate to Luis. But How?
The search.
Luis: Fancy damnit pick up your phone!!! Where are you? Please God let us find her!!
Ivy: Luis any luck?
Luis: Nope.
Pilar: Sam went to the mansion and saw some video clips. I have to tell you that she was kidnapped but the person is masked and we have no clue who it is.
Luis: Damnit! We have got to keep looking. Damn this bastard.
Miguel and Kay's house.
Kay: That was Pilar. Fancy has been kidnapped.
Miguel: We need to go help!
Fox: Oh man my sister!!!!
Miguel: Fox we can continue this later.
Fox: It was Pretty! I saw Pretty.
Kay and Miguel stop.
Kay: Pretty? Your sister?
Miguel: Why is she in Harmony?
Fox: I have no clue but you can't tell anyone she told me if I tell anyone she is here 'll be sorry.
Kay: Did she say anything else?
Fox: Well I heard her on the phone, she was meeting someone and asked if everything was setup.
Miguel: Thats wierd.
Kay: Do you know where she is staying?
Hotel.
Fancy: Damn it, if I can reach my phone I can text Luis while have the chance. They are gone and this is my only shot.
Now Fancy's hands were still tied, but she had mastered in text messaging. She was able to text Luis from the back for her and she had memorized all the numbers and letters. Please let Luis get this.
The search.
Luis can't take it.He can't believe this happening. He loves Fancy so much. He just breaks down in a corner and cries.
Luis: (crying) God please give me Fancy back. Please. I lost so much already. I can't lose the best thing that has happened to me. She is my angel, my baby, my life. I love her with all of me. I need her please. Please help me find her. Give me a sign or clue.
All of the sudden his phone rings. Its a next message from Sheridan!
Hey Luis. I heard about Fancy missing. I want to help. Lets meet up and we can search together. =)
Luis was unsure about this. He thought she has been trying to break us up why would she help. He didn't reply back.
Hotel.
Fancy: Please let Luis get it. Please.I have to figure out how to get out. I am a trained cop and trained for this. I should know. They are kidnappers why would you leave the person held captive by themselves. What idiots!
Kay and Miguel's House.
Kay: You don't think Pretty.....?
Miguel: Nah.
Fox: Could she?
Kay: Nahh... to obvious.
Miguel: Should we tell Sam?
Fox: We can't with Pretty threat
Kay: Fox, this is your sister. We have to do something.
Miguel leaves and calls Ethan. Ethan tells Theresa and Ethan goes out to help. Theresa can't go because it would cause to much stress.
The Search. Everyone meets back up at the station. Ivy, Pilar, Sam, Ethan, Miguel, Kay, and Fox. Noah and Paloma have been informed and are on their way.
Miguel: Fox, tell them. It might help.
Fox: I can't.
Luis overhears.
Luis: Can't what?
Kay: Fox!!!
Sam: Whats going on?
Fox decides to come clean.
Fox: When I was at the airport I ran into Pretty. She pushed me awaya nd denied she was family to me. She said we betrayed her especially Fancy. She said if I tell anyone I'd be sorry. When she was leaving I heard her on the phone talking to someone.
Sam: What they say?
Fox: She asked if everything was set and the other person said yes. Pretty said she'll meet with them soon.
Ivy: Pretty! Back in town!!!
Luis: This is the sister Sheridan keeps mentioning?
Ivy: Yes.
Luis: The one Fancy threw acid on accidently?
Pilar: Oh I see she told you. There was more to it but i don't know if she got to it yet.
Noah and Paloma arrive and Luis gets another text message... this time from Fancy!
Hey baby. I am fine. I am sorry I blew you off, but I don't think it was meant to be. Don't try to find me. Its over.
Luis read it out loud and everyone can't believe it. He knows in his gut its not true especially if the mansion video tapes prove she was pulled out.
Ivy: Thats not like her. She would have told somebody.
Luis: Fox, did Pretty say where she was staying?
Fox: Yeah at the hotel.
Luis: I say we check it out.
Paloma: But the kidnappers can be on secret names.
Luis: i don't care. I want my woman back and I am going.
Sam: Luis, wait. Your goanna need back up incase they are armed and dangerous.
Paloma: I'll go. She is my best friend and I want to help.
Pilar: Mija, no. It may be to dangerous.
Noah: Pilar is right. i can't risk losing you.
Paloma kisses him.
Paloma: This is my job and I am going.
They head off and everybody else continues to search and review evidence.
Up Next: Was Fancy's text message real to Luis or was she caught? They find her, but is it to late? Will they find out who did it? Everyone learns who is responsible for Theresa's accident. Luis confronts Sam about Pilar.
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