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Post by lancylust on Jun 30, 2007 10:18:37 GMT -5
thany you i love story you give your to the story writer passion the show i cannot wait to read it
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 30, 2007 22:57:55 GMT -5
I am sorry but I will not be able to update tonight. I am really exhausted so I will try tommorow. I will update ASAP. Sorry for saying I will update tonight when I can't.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jul 1, 2007 22:22:08 GMT -5
I am really sorry I keep having to push back my update. I just started work so I have been a little busy. I promise to update ASAP. <3
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Post by lancylust on Jul 2, 2007 0:06:19 GMT -5
thank you it ok you had the long work .i wait read tomorrow did finish the videos yet
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Post by lancylust on Jul 4, 2007 23:04:02 GMT -5
updates soon
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jul 12, 2007 22:36:38 GMT -5
i def will try.
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Post by nicki9202 on Jul 17, 2007 10:41:06 GMT -5
I really want to read the next chapter so update as soon as you can
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jul 23, 2007 22:54:20 GMT -5
It is early afternoon and Luis and Fancy have arrived back from their romantic trip in the Bermudas. They walk in the door and who is sitting their waiting for them... no other than Sheridan.
Sheridan: Well well well....did we have fun on our little fling?
Luis: What are you talking about?
Sheridan: Fancy! Go to your room! I want to talk to Luis alone.
Fancy: No! Your not my mother. Look I respect you but you have no right to yell at me as soon as I come home.
Luis: Sheridan! What has gotten into you? Why are yuou treating Fancy like this?
Sheridan: Fancy! I said NOW!
Fancy: and i said no. Go clean your ears because i already said no twice.
Sheridan :B1TCH *slaps fancy*
In The kicthen. Gwen and Rebecca are enjoying a nice cup of tea. Ethan eavesdrops on them.
Rebecca: I wish you could have succeeded in killing that b1tch.
Gwen: *laughs* I know and the funny thing is that Ethan believed me instead of the women he claims to love.
Rebecca: Maybe he still loves you.
Ethan is furious at what he just heard and marches of to confront them.
Ethan: You evil b1tch. How could you do that to me?
Gwen: Ethan you scared me. What are you talking about?
Ethan: You tried killing Theresa! I am having you arrested for attempted murder.
Rebecca: What you can't do that.
Ethan: Yes I can, but the women i love is about to go out with another man and I need to stop it before it is to late. I'll deal with you later.
Ethan's hops in his car and speeds to Theresa's house.
At Pilar's house
There is a knock at the door. Paloma answers it and finds Ethan standing there.
Paloma: E---than. Hi.
Ethan: Hi Paloma. Is Theresa is here?
Paloma: Actually no she isn't.
*awkward silence*
Ethan: Okay so where is she?
Paloma: Well she is out with Jared.
Ethan: What!
Paloma: Look I am sorry Ethan but maybe you should just give Theresa some space. You should go.
She closes the door and leaves Ethan confused and hurt.
Gwen decided to get out of the house bfefore Ethan gets back. She goes for a walk and thinks.
Gwen: B1tch. stole my man and now she has to pay.
Gwen goes back to the mansion and gets her car keys.
Back at the mansion.
Luis: Fancy lets go. Sheridan I don't know what has gotten into you.
Sheridan: No Luis don't go. I still love you.
Fancy looks at Luis who is shocked.
Sheridan: I can't bear to see you with my niece. It hurts so much.
Luis: Sheridan your married!
Sheridan: I'll divorce him and be with you and we can be together like we were meant to be.You just being with Fancy, hurts.
Fancy is hoping Luis won't leave her. She love shim so much and doesn't know what she would do without him.
Luis: Sheridan I um....
Theresa and Jared's date is going really well. They went out dancing and had a nice lunch.
Theresa: This was so much fun. You really can dance.
Jared: I only dance by best when i have a beautiful dance partner.
Theresa: Stop your making me blush.
Jared: No I am serious you are so beautiful.
They kiss and Jared walks Theresa to her car. Theresa drives off but can't stop thinking about Ethan. She truly loves Ethan but she really liked Jared she doesn't know what to do.
Gwen was driving around and spotted Theresa driving. Gwen let her jealousy come over her and hit Theresa's car into a tree. Her car got hit pretty hard and Theresa is left in her car unconcious.
Back at the mansion.
Sheridan: Luis I was so hurt you took Fancy to Bermuda because you never suprised me with last minutes trips. We are soulmates we are suppose to shared romantic moments. Your not suppose to be out with another women. Fancy I can't believe you would take Luis from me. You knew what him and I had together.
Fancy: Excuse me? Steal him from you? I asked if it wa sokay for Luis and I to go out and you said that you didn't care. Your married gosh Sheridan where are your morals.You have a loving husband and a son who adores you. All you care about is getting Luis back. Luis and I are in love and I am sorry that I hurt you. You know I love you but I can't help how I feel about him. I knwo you had many past lives but none of you ended up happy or with each other. What amkes this time different?
Sheridan: Shutup.
Fancy: No you shutup! I have had it. Now I realize you have been plotting to break us up this whole time. Gosh you really are your father's daughter. You won't stop till you get what you want no matter who you hurt in the process.
Luis: Hello can I say something?
Fancy: Oh sorry Luis.
Luis: Look Sheridan. We have been through a lot together and it was special. It will always remain close to my heart. I'll never forget all the times we had together. But... I am in love with Fancy now. Fancy is right after all our past lives we always whine up miserable and not with each other. True soulmates get through their problems together and we never faced our problems together. Your married and you had oppturtunities to leave Chris to be with me and you didn't. I am sorry Sheridan but the past is the past and that is were our relationship is.
Sheridan: Luis, i thought that you loved me.
Luis: Sheridan: I did, but now I love Fancy. I care about you but I don't love you anymore.
Sheridan is very angry. She looks at Fancy.
Sheridan: YOU! *slaps her*
Luis: Sheridan! You touch her one more time so help me god I will arrest you. Lets go baby.
Fancy and Luis leave and go back to Luis' apartment.
Noah was driving by and sees Theresa's car in the tree. He runs over and calls the paramedics. He takes her out of the car. She is barely breathing.
The paramedics arrive and bring Theresa to the hospital doing everything they can to keep her breathing.
Noah called his dad and investigators showed up right away. He left the scene and called Paloma. Plaoma called her mama, Luis and Miguel.
Luis' phone rings.
Luis: Hello
Paloma: Luis! Oh My Gosh! Theresa was in anaccident. She is at Harmony Hospital.
Luis: Okay I am on my way.
Miguel's phone
Miguel: Hello.
Paloma: Miguel. Theresa was in an accident. Come to the hospital right away.
Miguel: Oh okay. Be there soon.
He tells Kay everything and they leave Maria with Tabitha. They head to the hospital.
Paloma arrives with Pilar. Fancy and Luis arrive the same time Miguel and Kay arrive. Noah holds a panic Paloma. Kay sneaks off and calls Ethan.
Ethan's phone rings.
Ethan: Kay, hi.
Kay: Ethan there has been an accident. Theresa is in the hospital.
Ethan: What! What happened?!?
Kay: We don't know the full details yet. Just come to the hospital now.
Ethan: Be right there.
Ethan drives as fast as he can to the hospital. He arrives as the doctor comes out with news.
Doctor Smith: Hello. I regret to inform you that Miss Lopez Fitzgerald has sliiped into a coma. The damage from her accident is very bad. We have some open cuts and she lost blood. We gave her blood but we are hoping she can wake up from her coma.
Pilar: Dios Mios.
Paloma begins to cry and Noah holds her tight. Kay holds on to Miguel and Luis holds Fancy as tight as he can.
Luis: I am going to find the bastard who did this and make them pay.
Ethan: Can we see her?
Doctor Smith: Yes but one at a time. I think the mother should go first. A mother can always connect with their daughter.
Pilar heads in the hospital room.
Up Next: Theresa miraculously wakes up. Who is able to do it. Everyone learns some shocking information about Theresa's accident. What do they learn? Will they find out who did it? Kay and Miguel find out something interesting about their unborn baby.
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Post by lancylust on Jul 24, 2007 0:41:56 GMT -5
please writer more i hope fancy will be pregnant luis baby
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Post by nicki9202 on Jul 24, 2007 0:51:47 GMT -5
I Can't wait to ready the next chapter I want more
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Post by luisismine on Jul 24, 2007 18:31:21 GMT -5
can't wait for more.
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Post by Brown Eyed Angel on Jul 24, 2007 23:55:32 GMT -5
I am so hook on the story keep them coming...
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Post by lancylust on Jul 25, 2007 12:40:03 GMT -5
updates soon
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jul 29, 2007 10:49:03 GMT -5
i will be awy for 2 weeks o i am hoping to update there. I'll try my best. =) Thanks for your comments.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Aug 15, 2007 10:55:31 GMT -5
Please update soon, great story
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