♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on May 2, 2007 15:33:39 GMT -5
Chapter 18
George sighed, "look...you wanted space, that's what i'm giving you. You left me remember...so no i havent been calling you." he said in a defensive way. Katrina staretd to cry, "i know you hate me for what i did to you and Adrian, and i hate myself. but you have to understand...i did it for you guys." she said. "o really...for us?" he said getting mad. "yeah for you. all i wanted was what was best for you and you adrian...." she started to say but george cut her off. "whats best for adrian....you don't think having a mother in his life is best for adrian?"
a tear ran down Katrina's cheek as she thought about what she had done to her poor baby boy. She knew there was no excuses for what she did, "that's what i thought" George said breaking her thoughts."I know what i did was wrong, and i hate myself a lot for leaving him, and hurting you the way i did. but i wasn't ready for all the responsibilty at the time, and i wouldn't have been a good mother to him." she said defensively, but this just angered george even more. "o...ok....cause i was, right? you being nineteen at the time and me being 20...i was ready to raise a kid on my own with no help from anyone?" he said sarcastically. Katrina couldnt think of anything to say...she knew he was right. "ok...what do you want me to do!?!" she shouted, "you want me to come back to L.A and help raise him? is that what you want?" she asked. George laughed in her face, "HA...no thank you, we don't need your help. I've raised that boy for 4 years alone...what makes you think i need you now?" he asked. "fine...i'm sorry i called." she said, "yeah so am i...see, you can't even bring yourself to call every once in a while to see how he;s doing...that's pathetic. i hope it was worth it." and with that george hung up the phone.
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Post by tinka♥belle on May 2, 2007 15:45:38 GMT -5
That chapter was sad
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on May 2, 2007 17:02:38 GMT -5
Aww!!
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Post by Paulweeen on May 3, 2007 7:30:10 GMT -5
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on May 10, 2007 17:01:57 GMT -5
Chapter 19
Kay and miguel sat on the couch watching tv as Maria played on the floor with her toys. Miguel was very silent and just sat there staring off into space the whole time, and Kay could tell he was thinking of heragain. "miguel..." she said, but he didn't hear her at first because he was so out of it. "MIGUEL" she said louder stirring him from his thoughts. "huh...what...o kay i am so sorry" he said patting her leg. "you're thinking about her again aren't you?" she asked full well knowing the answer. Miguel sighed, "yeah...i'm sorry, i can't help it. it's just i dont even understand what happened you know...one minute we're fine, the next she's kicking me out. I dont even know if it's fully over or anything." he said fustrated. Kay put her hand on his shoulder reassuringly and squeezed it a little,"well maybe things were going to fast for her...i dont know, but you should call her and talk to her. that way you'll know whats going on" she said. Miguel nodded his head, "yeah i think i will...but not now, i want to finish hanging out with you and maria: he said smiling at Kay. Kay smiled back and rested her head on his shoulder and he rested his head on top of hers. This is how it should be she thought, now he'll call katrina and she'll break up with him and he'll come to me to make him feel better.
~*~back at Katrina's~*~
Katrina sat on her couch watching tv. She felt like such an ass, she left her baby and the true love of her life and she abandoned them. She knew it was wrong and that nothing she could do could make it up to either of them but she felt like she at least had to try. She was lying on the couch and was about to drift to sleep when the phone rang, she jumped up startled and ran over and picked it up. "hello..." she said not knowing who it was going to be. nothing...o no she thought. "what do you want? huh? i did what you asked...i made him leave!!" she said yelling into the phone. the raspy voice spoke, "good...i see i finally knocked some sense into you...but thats not all" it said. Katrina sat on the couch and held her head in her hands. "what....what else do you want from me?" she asked. "i want you to go home.." it said. she wrinkled her eyebrows in confusion.."what?:"
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Post by luisismine on May 11, 2007 16:21:20 GMT -5
OOOOO,More please.
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Post by luisismine on May 11, 2007 19:42:12 GMT -5
I see you're here,but no more fic....
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Post by tinka♥belle on May 14, 2007 11:54:20 GMT -5
I hope you update soon.
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on May 14, 2007 15:53:51 GMT -5
I see you're here,but no more fic.... Sorry...Ive Been Studying For Last Term Exams...Im Posting Now.!
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on May 14, 2007 15:55:58 GMT -5
Chapter 20
RedKatrina sat on her couch watching tv. She felt like such an ass, she left her baby and the true love of her life and she abandoned them. She knew it was wrong and that nothing she could do could make it up to either of them but she felt like she at least had to try. She was lying on the couch and was about to drift to sleep when the phone rang, she jumped up startled and ran over and picked it up. "hello..." she said not knowing who it was going to be. nothing...o no she thought. "what do you want? huh? i did what you asked...i made him leave!!" she said yelling into the phone. the raspy voice spoke, "good...i see i finally knocked some sense into you...but thats not all" it said. Katrina sat on the couch and held her head in her hands. "what....what else do you want from me?" she asked. "i want you to go home.." it said. she wrinkled her eyebrows in confusion.."what?:"
"i want you to go home" it said again. Katrina made a confised face and got up, "what...i AM home?" she said so very very confused. The voice gave out a sinister laugh,"no not this home missy....HOME" he said in a way that made her instantly know what they were talking about. "what!?!?! no way....i can't!!!" she said practically yelling. "o yes you can...and you WILL!" they said in a threatning tone. "o yeah...what are you going to do if i don't go?" she said testing them. Little did she know that was the one thing they hated...."DON'T TEST ME!!!" it yelled, "DON'T....YOU'LL REGRET IT IF YOU DO!!!" it said. Katrina was getting really pissed off now, "I'M NOT AFRAID OF YOU!!! YOU'VE ALREADY TAKEN MIGUEL FROM ME SO YOU GOT NOTHING!!!" she screamed into the phone. "o yeah?" the voice said giggling, "YEAH" katrina said. "ok...go look in the linen closet" it said. Katrina turned to her right and saw the door to the closet but she didn't move. "go on...look" it said. Katrina slowly walked over to the closet door and turned the knob. She opened the door slowly and looked in, just then something fell on her head sending her back screaming and slamming the door. "WHAT THE HELL!?!?!" she yelled. The voice was laughing hysterically..."shut up!!!" she yelled, "what the hell was that!?!" she asked again. "go back and look" he said and then hung up. Katrina sat on the couch and stared at the closet not knowing if she should go over and look or if she should stay where she was. She sat there for a good 5 minutes debating and then she got up slowly from the couch and walked slowly over to the door. She opened the door and turned on the light hanging from the ceiling and looked around. She didnt see anything at first but then something caught her eye on the floor. She bent down and moved the coats that had fallen on top of it, and she was shocked to see what was lying there. She gasped and put her hand over her mouth and fell back into her butt. Tears came streaming down her face and she moved forward and picked it up. It was a tan teddy bear with black button eyes and a black nose that she had given to her baby Adrian the day she left him behind and underneath it was a a small, light yellow baby blanket that she had gotten at the hospital when she brought Adrian into the world. She picked up the blanket and the teddy bear and she put them to her face and smelled them They smelled of baby powder and baby wash....they smellt like her baby. She held the bear and the blanket against her chest and she broke down into tears and just sat there rocking back and forth and crying. She was like this for about 5 minutes when the phone rang again, she picked it up so fast and yelled into the phone, "WHAT DO YOU WANT NOW!?" there was silence. "i'm sorry i called..." Miguel said and begun to hang up. "miguel?" Katrina said realizing it was him,"yeah..." he said, "sorry...i'll leave you alone." he said. "miguel...no" she said not even thinking. "are you ok?" he asked noticing she sounded kind of off. She sat and sniffed "uh....yeah...i think so." she said trying really hard to cry on the phone with Miguel. "are you sure...you sound.." he started to say but she started crying again because she could no longer hold it. "i'm coming over" he said, "MIGUEL NO!" she yelled. Too late...she heard the beeping sound meaning he already hung up and was on his way he was on his way there.
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Post by tinka♥belle on May 14, 2007 16:06:18 GMT -5
That was sad.
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on May 14, 2007 17:26:32 GMT -5
Aww!
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Post by portugalzhottie on May 19, 2007 14:24:27 GMT -5
hey you guyz:D just stoppin by the say thanks for all your kind words!!! i have come up with a new chapter...and it's pretty darn tootin good!! but i need a favour from all of you... the mmva's (muchmusic video awards) is slowly coming up...and so i need you all to do me THE biggest favour ever!!! if you read my signature you'll see a link for a website...click the link and vote for george!!!! he really needs your help to win favorite canadian artist!!! so...in order to help him out...i've decided to promote him and try to help him get as many votes as i can. so plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz PLLLLLLZ vote for him!!! now....if at least 5 of you go and vote for my georgie then the next chapter will be posted...PLUS a bonus chapter. so vote vote vote!!!! george needs you help!!!!
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on May 21, 2007 16:41:04 GMT -5
Chapter 21
Miguel got to katrina's house and knocked on the door, he heard scuffling and then the door slowly opened. Katrina came out and looked back and forth before letting him in. she seemed really on edge,and he could tell just by looking at her that she was shaking. "katrina....whats wrong?" he asked stepping towards her and putting his hand on her arm. Katrina looked at the floor and shook her head, "it's nothing" she said. Miguel watched her and he could feel her shaking and could see tears coming down her face. he grabbed her and pulled her into his arms and held her in a big hug. Katrina had her arms crossed across her chest...and she kept them like that for a minute while miguel hugged her. She tried not to cry but being back in Miguels arms made her feel even worse...so she eventualy gave in and began to cry. Miguel kissed the top of her head and hugged her a little tighter, "please...tell me whats going on...i want to help you." he said. Katrina backed up and Miguel let her go, she wiped her tears from her face and walked over to the couch with miguel. They sat down and miguel put his hand on her knee, she smiled,"i'll tell you what happened but please just listen" she said. Miguel nodded and she began...."about four years ago i lived in L.A with my high school boyfriend. I was 19 at the time and he was 21, his name was george...and i loved him a lot. i unexpectedly got pregnant...and george really wanted me to keep the baby, but i wasn't ready for that kind of responsibility. Still...i kept the baby because i was afraid that george would leave me if i didnt and at the time he was all i had." she said staring at her hands more then at miguel who was sitting watching her intently as she spoke. "so about a month after i gave birth to Adrian, thats what i named my baby, i thought i made a big mistake in keeping him, and i was so overwhelmed by everything and i got scared. so one night when everyone was sleeping i left. i havent seen him since then...and i havent seen george since then either." miguel sighed, "wow" he said. katrina started to tear up again, "i knew if i told you you'd hate me...and im sorry i didnt tell you." she said. Miguel looked at her..."i don't hate you, at all." he said taking her hand in his, "i know exactly what it's like to feel overwhelmed by that kind of responsibility...i've been there." he said, "i know.....i was just avoiding telling you because i thought if i didnt say it it wouldnt be real" she said sniffling. there's more though...she said, and miguel got a confused look on his face. She told him about the black mailer and about the stuff in the closet. He listened and understood everything, "you know miguel...you're so understanding it's unbelievable" she said. he smiled, "well...i love you, and would do anything for you" he said. she smiled, "i know....but what about the blackmailer?" she asked. miguel scoughed, "pft...what about him?" he asked, "he's going to know we're together" she said moving away from miguel a little and looking around. "relax...he wont." miguel said. katrina gave a short laugh, "trust me...he knows everything. i think you should go" she said. Miguel sighed, "alright fine...but answe me this" he said. Katrina nodded, "ok" she said. "do you still love him?" he asked. katrina hesitated for a while and then sighed, "i don't know" she said. Miguel nodded, "ok" he said and turned around and walked out. he walked to his car and got in, slipped in the key and started the car. he sat there for a few minutes sliently....then a tear fell down his cheek and landed on his jeans.
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Post by tinka♥belle on May 21, 2007 16:50:44 GMT -5
Awsome update!!
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