♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Mar 2, 2007 13:06:29 GMT -5
That's A Story My Friend Wrote And She Gave Me Her Aprroval To Post It Here. I Hope You Guyz Will Enjoy It. Chapter 1Migual stumbled into his moms kitchen, knocking over a stool in the process of trying to turn on a light. "ooowww" he moaned, sitting on the floor and rubbing his shin, just then his mom came into the kitchen turning on the light. "hello...who's there?" she said in a panicked voice. she looked down and saw migual sitting on the floor rubbing his knees and sulking, "miho? oooo...please tell me you haven't been again." she walked over and pulled migual up off the floor. "mama...is that you?" he said squinting and holding onto the table for support. "yes miho it's me....what the heck are you doing?" she asked."i was uh...walking....and i had a little drink thats all im fiiiiine" he said, and he slid down onto the floor again. Pillar rolled her eyes, "migual...you have to stop this, you can't keep yourself drunk, it's not healthy." pillar looked at his mom with a look of sadness in his eyes, "yeah well what else can i do ma? the woman i love is with another man...a man that doesnt deserve her." he gets up and walks over to the table and sits in a seat, plopping his head on the table. pillar comes over and puts a reassuring hand on his shoulder, "i know...it's hard. you mustn't give up hope, if Fox really is lying like you say he is...then she will find out and she will come back to you." Migual scoughed, "yeah, but i dont know if i can wait that long, i mean what if he convinces her that he got treatment and he no longer is dying?" Pillar is silent. "see mama...i've lost her forever." Migual gets up and walks up to his room and undresses, getting into his bed laying on his back. "dear god...i know i haven't been acting appropriately lately...you know since the wedding, but i really need your help. please let kay see that Fox is a liar...please send her and my baby girl back to me." Migual closes his eyes and turns onto his side. he lays there....and a tear slides down his cheek. how is he going to get kay back?
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 2, 2007 13:11:52 GMT -5
Awesome start!!! Love it!!!!!
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Post by tinka♥belle on Mar 2, 2007 13:46:15 GMT -5
Beautiful beginning, more plz!!
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
Short Story
Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Mar 2, 2007 13:52:38 GMT -5
Chapter 2
Migual woke up the next morning with a killer headache, and he rolled over and looked at the time on the alarm clock, 8:30am. He groaned and threw the sheets over his head and rolling onto his stomach. just then he heard a small knock on the door,"who is it?" he asked, raising his head out from underneath the covers. It was kay. He lowered his head onto the pillow, "hey migual" she said standing beside the bed and trying to lift the covers. Migual poked his head out from under the blanket and glared at her, "hey" he said shortly. Kay sighed, "look...i know your hurting right now, but could you please act your age and NOT your shoe size, for two minutes...please?" Migual sat up and smoothed out the covers making room for Kay. "sorry...wanna sit?" he said patting the bed. Kay shook her head..."no thanks" she said. Migual sighed, "ok fine, so why are you here?" he asked. "um...i was wondering if you would mind taking Maria for the night, Fox planned something for the two of us and Tabitha and Endora are going out somewhere...i dont know where but anyways. would you?" Migual nodded, "yeah sure...what time are you bringing her?" he asked. "o she's here right now...she's downstairs in the kitchen with your mom." Migual got up and walked over to his dresser pullling out pants and a black shirt and pulling them on. Kay and Migual walked down to the kicthen and maria was sitting at the table in her high chair as Pilar fed her. DA-DEEEEEEE she sang as he walked into the room, he walked over to her and kissed her forehead. "hey...hows daddies little girl doing?" he asked taking the spoon from his mom and began feeding her. "would you like some breakfast?" he asked kay, who had been standing and watching the two real loves of her life. "um...sure" she said taking the seat on the other side of maria. mmmmmmmmmomma! she sang. migual and kay laughed and pilar brang kay a plate with some eggs and bacon on it. Migual finished feeding maria and took her out of the highchair and sat her in his lap. he was playing with her and she was laughing and smiling. "she's in love with you...last night when i was giving her a bath she wouldnt stop singing daaaaddddie....daaaaadddie." migual laughed, "yeah she's definately daddies little girl...aint ya!" he said lifting her up and kissing her little nose which sent her into a big fit of giggles. Kay smiled. she finished her breakfast and got up, Migual got up after her with maria and walked her to the door. "thanks so much for taking her...i know she'll have a lot of fun" she said smiling. "not a problem...anything for my girls" he said. Kay blushed, " anyways i better get going...fox is waiting and i still have to get properly dressed." migual half smiled, "ok...you two xrazy kids have fun now." they laughed and kay left. migual sighed and said to Maria, "well...it's just us tonight. what would you like to do first...play some poker...or watch some barney?" maria laughed...."daaaaadiee!!!" she sang. Migual chuckled, "barney it is".
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Post by tinka♥belle on Mar 2, 2007 13:58:32 GMT -5
Aww... the daddy part was adorable.
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Post by luisismine on Mar 2, 2007 17:30:49 GMT -5
Aww I love this.
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 2, 2007 19:02:27 GMT -5
Great STORY!!!!!!!!! Love it!!
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Mar 2, 2007 19:52:13 GMT -5
Chapter 3
About two barney videos and a episode of Dora the Explorer later, migual had finally decided that him and Maria needed to get out. "hey maria...how would you like to go to the park?" he asked looking down at her where she sat on the floor playing with her coloured rings. "daaaaadddiiie!" she shouted and she crawled over to him. He laughed and picked her up as she got the his feet. "ok you little monster...lets take you to the park." he said, and he walked to the closet and grabbed their coats, hats, scarfs, and shoes. They played at the park for about an hour and then migual decided it was time to go get some supper, so he put her in her stroller and walked over to a cute little cafe around the corner. He grabbed a table and put Maria in a highchair, giving her a few toys to play with. He settled himself into his chair and started reading the menu, when the waitress came over. "hello...can i take your..." Migual jumped, "JEEZ..."he said, grabbing his chest, "you scared the living lights out of me" he said. The waitress broke into laughter, "im sorry...ahem...can i take your order?" she said bursting into another fit of laughter. Maria started laughing along with her, and Migual turned bright red. "well...good to see i can put a smile on someone's face today." he said laughing, the waitress giggled and took out her writing pad, "o yeah...ya sure did. what can i get you?" she asked. "um...for me i will have a plate of chicken fingers and fries, with a water." the waitress wrote it down, "and for your date?" she asked, smiling and pointing at Maria. "o...she'll just have some milk." he said. She smiled, "ok...i'll be right back with your drinks." and she walked back to the kitchen, and migual kind of chuckled to himself. leave it to me to make a fool of myself the first time i see a cute girl thats not kay, Maria giggled. "hey...are you laughing at daddy?" he said tickling her. she giggled and smiled, she truely was the only girl in his life. "well...here's your drinks" she said, "a water and a milk for the lady" and she placed them on the table. "thank you" migual said smiling. "your food will be along in a few minutes." she said smiling and turning to walk away. "um...waitress!" migual yelled after her. "yes?" she said. "im sorry...but i didnt catch your name, and i'd rather not call you waitress all night." she laughed and pointed to her name tag. "the names katrina...and if you need anything call." he smiled, "right...thank you very much." he said. PRETTY LADY! maria sqealed, and migual nodded....indeed she is he thought. indeed she is.
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Post by luisismine on Mar 2, 2007 20:29:25 GMT -5
This is good.Update soon please.
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 2, 2007 20:52:35 GMT -5
Lovin this story!!!! More please!!
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Mar 5, 2007 9:22:41 GMT -5
This One Is A Short Chapter.
Chapter 4
ding dong. Migual got up and ran to the door and opened the door. It was Kay and Fox in their evening wear, "hey you guys...Maria's sleeping, i'll go get her" he said ushering them in. He gave Fox a dirty look as he walked in behind Kay and Fox gave him a devilish smirk. Kay and Migual walked up to Maria's room, and when they opened the door Maria was standing in her crib smiling, "MOOOOOOOMMMMA!" she squealed. kay ran over and picked her up, "hey baby....did you have fun with daddy?" Maria clapped her hands, "daddy!" Kay and Migual laughed, and Maria smiled showing the few teeth she had. Just then Fox came into the room and Maria squealed with even more delight...."daddy...daddy..." and he opened her arms and wiggled her fingers for Fox. He walked over to her and took her from kay, and tickled her tummy, "ahhhh....daddy no tickle" she said. Migual shot Fox a dirty look and Kay cleared her throat. "ummm we should go" and Migual nodded, "yea....please do." and Fox and Kay left the room.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Mar 5, 2007 11:44:46 GMT -5
Loving this, more plz!!
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 5, 2007 11:45:12 GMT -5
GREAT story!!! More please
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Mar 5, 2007 12:06:23 GMT -5
Chapter 5
Migual pulled on his coat and walked outside. He was fuming from what had just happened in his room, "that no god snake is trying to take away my family. I know he framed me...but i have no proof." He walked down to the Blue Note and took a seat far in the back so he wouldnt be so visable. He ordered a beer and sat staring into it for what seemed like a life time. That's when he saw her walk in....with HIM beside her, holding his hand....with the ring on it. "you should be here with me...holding my hand...and wearing my ring" he said to himself. Kay and Fox walked past him and sat at a booth two booths down from him, "great" he muttered. Kay turned around and saw Migual sitting there so she waved at him. right when she did Fox put his arm around her and she turned around. Migual was getting fed up....so he got up to leave. Just then he heard it, the voice coming from the stage that sounded like melted chocolate, so smooth and natural. He looked up on stage and noticed the girl standing there, she was wearing a black halter dress that showed off her slim yet curvey body...and her long, flowing, dark brown hair was shining in the stage lights as it flowed all the way down her back. Migiual was mesmorized, he stopped walking and stood and stared, but then he found a seat up front...close to the stage. There was something oddly familiar about this girl, but he couldn't put his finger on it. She finished up her song and started into another one, but this one she introduced..."this is a special song for all you lonely men and women sitting out there without your lovers tonight". this is what she sang...
Goodbye is what she said when she said im sorry And I, Im dying on the inside Cuz i tried but I cant hide the tears that fall from my eyes Hold me close one more night Hold me close one more time Hold me close cuz Im dyin on the inside A butterfly hello with a little wink But what she think of me And oh she smiled give me her name But who would have thought i would be crying here with all this pain no no Hold me close one more night baby Hold me close one more time (just give me one more time my baby) Hold me close cuz Im dyin on the inside A butterfly Now theres nothing I can do and theres nothing I can say about losing you I wish that I could find a way, wish that I could see you again If only I could turn back time Hold me close one more night... Hold me close one more time.. Hold me close cuz Im dyin on the inside (dying on the inside) A butterfly.... Migual sat and watched her sing. The song was absolutely amazing, it was exactly how he was feeling at that moment with Kay. He watched her as she finished the song and smiled. She was very familiar but he couldn't put his fnger on it. She walked off stage and sat over at the bar, migual was sitting and watching her...trying to figure out where he knew her from. He knew he remembered seeing her beautiful face somewhere...he just didn't know where. He got up to go over and talk to her but just as he was making his way over to her, Kay grabbed his arm and pulled him aside. "migual...we need to talk" she said. Migual shook her off and started to walk away, "not right now kay...i know what you're going to say, and i dont want to hear it." and he walked away leaving Kay standing there dumbfounded. Migual walked up to the bar and sat beside the girl, "hey..." he said to her. She turned and smiled, "hello...how are you?" she asked back. "i'm doing good...and yourself?" he asked. "um...i am doing quite good" she said. "you were amazing up there tonight, i really loved your song." he said, giving her the famous lopez-fitzgerald charmer smile. She giggled, "o thank you...it was nothing really. The band originally booked cancelled last minute and they were desperate to find someone to fill in...so...i offered." Migual laughed, "well again, you did amazing." she laughed, "again...thank you. " and she winked. "What's your name?" migual asked, "my names Katrina..." she said, and Migual's face lit up and he laughed. "i knew i knew you from somewhere!!!" he said excitedly. Katrina laughed, "o yeah and where's that" she said. "i came into the restraunt where you work earlier today with my daughter." he said. " o yea that's right...amazing you remembered" she said. He smiled back and put his hand on her arm. "i never forget a pretty face" he said, and katrina laughed.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Mar 5, 2007 12:12:51 GMT -5
Great chapter!!
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