Post by lancylover918 on May 14, 2007 17:34:22 GMT -5
This takes place during the trial with a very different outcome.
Judge: Order Order! Now Sheridan Crane step down from the stand
Sheridan: No wait I have to explain! Luis Im sorry
Chris: Sheridan why don’t you explain it to me first. I am your HUSBAND!
Sheridan: Chris not now I have to find Luis
Cut to Fancy and Luis in the back room
Fancy: See Luis I told you She wants you. And that’s why she said all of those things to make me look bad!
Luis: Still it is no excuse
Fancy: Oh Luis. I hope what Aunt Sheridan said doesn’t affect the jury
Luis: Me Too… Me Too
Sheridan Walks In
Sheridan: Luis I am so sorry. You don’t understand
Luis: Yes I do. Fancy was right all along about you. You have been trying to break us apart since the beginning
Sheridan: Yes but only because I still love you. I did this out of love
Fancy: Oh so you made Luis look guilty “out of love”
Sheridan: Fancy Stay out of this
Luis: Don’t talk to Fancy like that. (He turns to Fancy) I am so sorry Fancy that I didn’t believe you at first. You would think that I would learn after Beth But I didn’t. Please Forgive me!
Fancy: Of course I will. I love you
Luis: I love you too (sorry had to add some sap in there)
Sheridan: Ok Ok Ok you can stop now
Luis is really mad now
Luis: No Sheridan you can stop now. I cant believe that you would ever want me to be found guilty
Sheridan: No I would never want that
Luis: I cant believe I just sat there while you made Fancy look like and idiot all of those times, in the jail, in the cabin, in her room
Luis realizes something
Luis: wait….. You convinced me that Fancy was making up all of the attacks in her bedroom…. Maybe you said that because you knew something otherwise
Sheridan: No No I don’t know anything (She is obviously lying)
Fancy: Sheridan I know when you are lying, it is showing all over your face
Sheridan: No
Luis: Sheridan, don’t lie to me if you know something say it now it could save me
Sheridan: FINE!!! I- uh I have some evidence of Fancys attacks
Up next: Sheridan goes back on the witness stand and tells what she knows. Will it be enough to save Luis in time?
Hey guys tell me if you like it. Also any comments would be awesome. The next chapter will be shorter but don’t worry the story will make up for it.
Update!!!!!!!
Judge: I would like to call Sheridan Crane back to the stand for some last minute evidence.
Sheridan: Thank you judge.
Ethan: Sheridan what is this last minute evidence
Sheridan well when I- uh was in Fancy’s bedroom after she was “attacked” Fancy claimed that she popped a button off of her attackers shirt
Ethan: Yes--------
Sheridan: well while she and Luis were looking I was trying my hardest to convince Luis that Fancy was going crazy.
Ethan: Go on Sheridan
Sheridan: well what I never told anyone was that…. I found the button
The Congregation gasps
Judge: Order Order
Grace: Your Honor the witness does not have any evidence
Sheridan: Actually I do (she reaches in her purse and pulls out a small black button)
Ethan: There you see jury Luis had another alibi during the only other attack.
Judge: The jury will review all of the evidence and return shortly
Luis turns back to Fancy
Luis: Fancy I may actually have a chance to live
Fancy: I know I have complete faith
Luis: I just hope what Sheridan said about the button helped in my result
Fancy: I know I don’t know what I would do without you
Luis : Well maybe you never do (Luis and Fancy look lovingly into each others eyes)
Fancy: Oh wait Im getting a page from someone. Im just going to step out for a minute.
Luis: Ok but don’t be too long
Fancy: I wont ( she leaves to go outside)
The Jury comes back
Judge: Jury what is you decision
Jury: In the case of Luis Lopez Fitzgerald, we find him innocent due to last minute changes in the evidence
Everybody is crying and hugging Luis and smiling
Luis turns to find Fancy and doesn’t see her
All of a sudden a gun is fired and Fancy’s scream is heard
Up next: Who was shot, who shot, and why?
Ok Guys here it is!
All of a sudden a gun is fired and Fancy’s Scream is heard by everyone especially Luis
Luis: FANCY!!!!! Despite being in a wheel chair he stood up ripped off his handcuffs and ran toward the scream
Fancy was lying in a pool of blood around her leg, unconscious, and guess who was standing over her with a gun
SHERIDAN
Luis first ran to Fancy’s side and tried to prop her up to give her oxygen. Fancy was coming to.
Luis: I need a paramedic Right Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Luis turned to Sheridan: Sheridan How could you shoot your own niece!!!
Luis was beyond mad, he was confused, distraught, and mainly concerned for Fancy
Sheridan: She doesn’t belong with you Luis I DO!!!!!
Luis: Sheridan I will never be with you ESPECIALLY after this
Fancy was awake now and very much in pain
Fancy: Luis?
Luis: Im here Fance, your gonna be ok
Fancy: What happened
Luis: Well while I was waiting for the jury you were shot
Fancy: Oh I remember now AUNT SHERIDAN! ( she is obviously frightened by her aunt)
Luis: Its ok fancy She is not going to hut you
Fancy has a flashback
Fancy: gosh I wonder who this is. I don’t want to leave Luis, The jury could already be out
Sheridan: Don’t worry fancy. Ill make sure you don’t miss a thing
Fancy: What do you want Aunt Sheridan
Sheridan: I think you know what I want
Fancy: If your talking about Luis….its not going to happen
Sheridan: Oh yeah? Why do you think I confessed to having the button. So Luis would see that in my heart I am still perfect little Sheridan and he will come back to me.
Fancy: No No He is with me… He loves me now
Sheridan: Not for long! (She takes out the gun and Fancy is starting to run away. Sheridan shoots but only gets Fancy’s leg)
End Flashback
Fancy: Luis don’t leave me
Luis: I wont Im staying right here
Fancy: I love you
Luis: I love you too… You have no idea (AWWWWWWWWWW!)
Coming up next: Does Sheridan Escape? If so who helps her?
Hey guys im running into a huge dry spell for ideas and need your help!!!!!!!!!!!
Please any ideas will be great
Quick Update Hope you like it!!!!
Sheridan’s POV
Oh I have to get out of here before anyone catches me and takes me to jail. Now that Luis is free I have to stay free so that we can stay together. (Someone lurks around the corner) Who was that?
Sheridan: Who is that? Show yourself
Mystery Person: Your worst nightmare or your dream come true
Sheridan: who are you
The person comes around the corner. Just by Fancy’s descriptions she knows this to be the attacker.
Sheridan: you’re the one that put my Luis behind bars
Blackmailer: Yes and you could be with him if you don’t obey
Sheridan: what do you want
Blackmailer: I understand that you hate Fancy and Luis together
Sheridan: Yes I just want what is best for them
Blackmailer: Cut the crap Tell me the truth or you wont be able to speak again
Sheridan: Ok I hate them together. Luis belongs to me
Blackmailer: I can help you get Luis and get out of here alive
Sheridan: Im not coming with you. How do I know you wont hurt me
Blackmailer: Lets just day you know some information that I need
Sheridan is not scared only hopeful and anxious to get Luis all to herself
Sheridan: Lead the way
Blackmailer: Perfect Just perfect….
At the Hospital
Luis is in a wheelchair with 5 handcuffs on his arms instead of one due to the last break out
Fancy is in a hospital bed and very weak
Luis: Hey are you feeling any better
Fancy: Much better now that you are here
Luis: Im not going anywhere
Fancy: Luis, Aunt Sheridan said some things that kind of scared me
Luis: What did she say
Fancy: I know this sound so Junior High but she said that when she admitted to having the button, you would see her as the old Sheridan and want to go back to her
Luis: Fancy---
Fancy: No I now im being silly but Im already went through thinking I lost you and I didn’t want to feel that again
Luis: Your not going to lose me to a needle or Sheridan
Fancy is ecstatic!
Fancy: So the jury found you innocent
Luis: Yes! And I was looking for you to tell you and that’s when I heard you scream.
Fancy: Oh Luis! Now well be together forever
Luis: Yes we will
(They kiss for a long time)
Somewhere in the Hospital room were two pairs of eyes looking right at Fancy and Luis.
One gleaming with sick pleaser and one almost green with envy
Hey Guys Here is another update. Hope you like it!!!
Blackmailer and Sheridan decided to leave the hospital and go to a more private place to discuss their plan to get Sheridan Luis and give the Blackmailer information.
Sheridan: Ok so first how can we make Luis all mine
Blackmailer: No I make the rules you give me the information I need
Sheridan: How do I know you wont get rid of me after I tell you this “information”
Blackmailer: you will just have to trust me (gives a raspy chuckle)
Sheridan: No I wont give you any information
Blackmailer: Hey girly I can get this information from other sources, I thought you would be willing to give information
Sheridan: Listen Buddy, I will give you half of the information now and the other half when I have Luis in my arms
Blackmailer: Fair enough! I have a a question to ask you
Sheridan: Ok shoot
Blackmailer: Why did this Pretty leave
Sheridan: Fancy told everyone one of Pretty’s secrets and she left
Blackmailer: Good I have the truth
Sheridan: What?
Blackmailer: Nothing Now I have a plan
Sheridan: ok what is it
Blackmailer: One night when I attacked Fancy I had to drug Luis to get his semen and the entire time he thought it was Fancy
Sheridan: Ok wait…. No I am not going to drug Luis
Blackmailer: You will if you want Luis
Sheridan: Ok but wont he wake up and then go back to Fancy
Blackmailer: Not if Fancy sees you together She will never take him back
Sheridan: And then he will come back to me! Perfect
At the hospital
Eve walks in when Fancy and Luis are kissing. She clears her throat
Fancy: oh sorry Eve (embarrassed)
Luis: Ya sorry we cant help it (he winks at Fancy and she giggles)
Eve: its ok I was just coming in to say that Fancy is free to go
Fancy: Rele? That’s great
Right when that happens a police guard comes in and uncuffs Luis and apologizes for the misunderstanding. Luis feels good so he decides to stand up and he is fine.
Eve: Luis are you ok on your feet
Luis: I feel great but if its ok can I take Fancy home
Eve: of corse as long a both of you take it easy
Fancy: oh we will.
In Luis’ car
Fancy: Whoo I am tired
Luis: me too how bout we go to your house and we take a nap
Fancy: That would be great
Luis: ok home sweet home we come
They are laying in Fancy’s Bed and want to make love but know that they should wait and gain their strength
They are kissing
Fancy pulls away and smiles
Fancy: ok we really need to sleep
Luis: Aw ok one more
They kiss again and Fancy doesn’t want to stop
Luis: ok good night
He wraps his arms around her and she leans of his chest and they fall into a deep sleep
Sheridan is watching the entire thing and cant wait until Luis is with her again
Sheridan: Ok its go time
She goes up to Luis and sticks a needle in Luis’ neck
He looks up and sees Sheridan at first and all of a sudden he sees Fancy. They start kissing.
The Blackmailer comes in and starts to wake up Fancy. She looks up and sees the ski mask. She starts to scream and then she sees Luis and Sheridan kissing. She then starts crying and the blackmailer starts to attack her.
UP NEXT: Will Luis’ Love be enough to conqer the drug and save Fancy. Also who is the blackmailer and why is he or she attacking Fancy
Update!!! Hope you like it.
Fancy was screaming while the blackmailer was tying her up and beating her. (Sorry didn’t mean to be graphic)
Sheridan, despite loving Luis kissing her, was feeling a little sorry for her niece but that thought was cut off by Luis’ warm lips on hers. She was on cloud nine. Fancy was screaming and all of a sudden Luis was having a bad feeling.
Luis’ POV
I guess Fancy is feeling better if she wants to kiss me like this but something is different and I cant shake this feeling that something is wrong. I was starting to understand what was going on when I felt Fancy kissing me. The weird thing is is that it was not Fancy’s kiss. It felt familiar but did not have the same spark or fire like Fancy. Luis stopped kissing “Fancy” and looked her directly in the eye. Only this time it was Sheridan he saw.
Luis: SHERIDAN!!! WHERE IS FAN…… his question was cut off by Fancy’s scream
I looked over and Fancy was being attacked by the rapist who got her the last time. I cant believe this was happening and I didn’t stop it before.
Luis ran over to the attacker and ripped the attacker off of his love while hitting it over and over. The attacker tried to fight back but Luis’ anger was fueling his power. Luis had his gun in his pocket and never forgot it. The attacker took out a knife on Luis and started to cut his arm. Luis took out his gun and shot the attackers leg.
Luis took out his cuffs and cuffed the attacker to the bed. He ran over to Fancy who was so distraught she couldn’t stop shaking and crying. At first she accepted Luis’ embrace but then she remembered him kissing her aunt and she pushed him away.
Luis didn’t understand why Fancy was doing this until he remembered Sheridan. He looked over at Sheridan who was trying to get the attacker free.
Luis ran over to Sheridan and pushed her out of the way. Luis kicked the attacker and ripped out his phone. He called Sam and told him to come over to Fancy’s room ASAP.
Luis took off the mask of the attacker and came to face a woman wearing a lot of padding in order to make herself look more manly.
Fancy managed to choke out “P-P-Pretty?”
Luis ripped his head over at Fancy and looked at her questionably. This was Fancy’s sister? The attacker was Fancy’s sister.
Sam busted through the door and arrested Pretty and Sheridan for helping a criminal.
Luis ran back to Fancy and tried to embrace her. Fancy hit him over and over and pushed him away.
Luis: Fancy? Why wont you let me hug you
Fancy: You try to act so innocent and pretend you didn’t do anything. I was just attacked and you didn’t do anything about it
Luis: I didn’t do anything? I pulled him…er.. her off of you
Fancy: Ya after I screamed to you and screamed to you whie you were busy making out with my aunt
Luis: Fancy I thought it was you, you have to believe me
Fancy: Oh yeah, nice try
Luis: Fancy I was drugged, All I saw was your face when I was kissing Sheridan
Fancy: Luis don’t lie to m---- her words were cut off when she saw Luis’ neck
Fancy: Luis what- your neck is swelling
Luis: There, That is proof that I was drugged by Sheridan
Fancy: That is the same hole that we saw at Eve’s office
Luis: Fancy do you believe me now?
Fancy grabs Luis and hisses im like she has never kissed him before
Luis: I guess that is a yes (Laughs)
Fancy: Yeah.. I’m sorry I was just so hurt when I saw you and then I was attacked by Pretty (she is obviously confused and hurt by finding out that her sister attacked her)
Luis: I’m sure there is an explanation for Pretty, maybe she is being set up
Fancy: Yeah or my sister tried to attack me
Luis: yeah maybe but I cant explain Sheridan
Fancy: That is why it hurt me so much because she told me that you would come back to her and then I saw you and her kis—(she starts to break down)
Luis: Fancy I’m sorry but I thought it was you I swear
Fancy: I know its just it hurt me so much and it makes me sick
Luis: I know it makes me sick too
Fancy: Do you want to go to the interrigation room to see what they say
Luis: Umm yeah but are you ready
Fancy: Yeah as long as your with me
Luis: Im right by your side forever
They Kiss for a long time
Fancy: Now lets go
Up next: What does Sheridan Say and Why did Pretty attack Fancy?
Luis and Fancy arrive at the Police Station and just as they are about to go in…
Luis: Fancy are you sure you are ready for this
Fancy: Yeah I think I am. Lets go in
Luis: After you
Luis and Fancy walk in and see Sheridan and Pretty sitting on two police chairs cuffed to the desk.
Sam is questioning them.
Sam: Sheridan will you explain why you teamed up against Fancy with this Blackmailier
Sheridan: Because Luis belongs to me and Pretty had some ideas
Sam: So you watched you own niece get attacked while you were busy drugging Luis
Sheridan: Well I felt a little bad but Luis was so amazing
Hearing this made Fancy very uncomfortable and sick to her stomach. Luis notices this and grabs Fancy tight and kisses her. This makes her smile.
Sam then questions Pretty next
Sam: Pretty what was your reason to attack your own sister and blackmail all of harmony
Pretty: Well I wanted to get revenge on my sister and all of harmony
Sam: can I ask why?
Pretty: well Fancy told my secret
Sam: and what secret would that be
Pretty: well when we were young and Ethan was away and I had never seen him. When one day he came home from college and I told Fancy I thought he was cute and developed a crush on him. Fancy told everybody that I liked him and of course this humiliated me so I ran away. Once I came back I learned that Ethan was not my brother and wanted to get back at Fancy for humiliating me
Sam: so you attacked her
Pretty: yes and I blackmailed Theresa because she was with ethan and I knew that I would never be with him
Sam: That is sick and twisted
Pretty: Yeah but my sister humiliated me to the breaking point
At this Fancy was crying and silently apologizing and beating herself up over this Luis looks over at Fancy and sees that she is sorry and mad at herself. Luis walks over to Fancy and hugs her tight.
Fancy: Oh Luis I thought that you would be mad at me
Luis: of course not. You were young
Fancy: If I had known the hurt that I had caused I never would have done it
Luis: I know I know but even so that was no excuse for Pretty to do this.
Sheridan is confused now
Sheridan: Pretty why did you want to know your secret from me
Pretty: I needed to know that I could trust you to tell me true information
Sheridan: oh I get it
Sam well unfortunaly both of you will be in jail and Pretty you might even be put to death
Up Next: How does Fancy react to the news and what happens to Pretty
Update!!!!!!!!! Hope you like it. Oh and I need to clear up something Pretty never like Ethan. He came home and it was the first time that Pretty ever had seen him. Pretty told Fancy that she thought Ethan was cute. Fancy then told everyone that Pretty loved Ethan and that humiliated Pretty.
Pretty: Fancy, you cant let me die
Fancy: Pretty you hurt me and Luis so much
Pretty: I know but im your sister and wont his be return for humiliating
Fancy: Don’t you think I have paid enough I have been raped, had to live life thinking I would live without the love of my life and I had to watch my aunt make out with my boyfriend (She is breaking down now) Yes I love you because you are my sister buyyou hurt all of us so badly
Pretty: Fancy I did what I had to do because you hurt me so don’t talk to me about hurt
Luis is sad that Fancy is getting attacked so he steps in
Luis: Pretty I don’t know you and what your like but I do know Fancy and I know what she did hurt you but I think that you need to lay off Fancy now. I didn’t know her when she was young but I know that now Fancy is the most caring person I have ever met and wouldn’t hurt a fly.
Fancy leans into Luis as if he just saved her life and Luis gladly wrapped his arms around her.
Sheridan is sickened by this and tries to run toward Luis but is handcuffed to the desk. (woulnt you love to see her get yanked back haha lol)
Fancy jumps a little bit and Luis holds her tighter.
Pretty: Sheridan calm down
Sheridan: I hate seeing them together
Fancy was very upset at Pretty and Sheridan and couldn’t stand to be in there. Luis follows her and Pretty screams at her to save her. Fancy started running with Luis close behind her.
Fancy falls to the ground of the park and she starts to break down for everything. Getting attacked, by her sister, almost losing Luis two times. She lets it all out. Luis is close behind her and squats down to her level and holds her while she lets it all out. Once Fancy has calmed down she and Luis went to a bench in a park.
Luis: Fancy are you ok
Fancy: yeah as long as you are with me I am always happy
Luis: Hey Fance
Fancy: yeah
Luis: why don’t we go away together
Fancy: Can we do that
Luis: I mean Im not apart of the force but if you could take time off we could go away for a weekend just the two of us.
Fancy: Oh Luis I think that’s just what you and I need. Some time alone
Up next: What happens when Lancy go off together? How does Sheridan react to their news
Luis and Fancy were curled up on Luis’ front porch
Luis: Where do you want to go this weekend?
Fancy: I don’t know how about New York
Luis: I don’t have that kind of money
Fancy: Why don’t we go on the Crane Jet
Luis: Yeah that will work
Fancy: Oh Luis I cant wait to spend a whole weekend alone with you.
Luis: Just the two of us (He holds her closer and she snuggles into him
Luis and Fancy at the airport
Luis: Fancy are you ready to go
Fancy: Yeah I just have to call Sam first
Luis: Ok I will meet you on the plane
Fancy: Ok
She phones Sam
Fancy: Hey Sam this is Fancy
Sam: Hey Fancy are you ok
Fancy: Yeah Sam thanks but the reason I called was to say I am going to take some time off but only for the weekend
Sam: Yeah Fancy Take your time, not that its any of my business but are you with Luis
Fancy: Yes I am We decided to go on a trip together
Sam: Well I think that is great you have a great time together
Sheridan Hears and automaticly knows that he is talking about Fancy and Luis
Sheridan: Is Fancy going off with Luis. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Luis and I are supposed to be together
Sam: Sheridan Shut Up! Anyway good luck Fancy
Fancy: Oh ya thanks (she obviously heard Sheridan and is sad)
Sam: bye
Fancy walks off to the jet and meets Luis
Luis looks very happy in the Crane jet and is so excited Fancy had to let out a little chuckle at him
Luis: What
Fancy: No nothing your just so cute you look like a little boy at Chrismas
Luis: This is so new to me. I love it!
Fancy: Im glad! Now lets get comfortable and away we go
Luis: Then get over here and lets curl up here
(Fancy ran over to Luis and jumped into his arms and stayed that way the entire ride! She was in pure bliss)
Luis and Fancy looked at each other and smiled. Luis leaned down and gave Fancy a sweet kiss on the lips
Just then the pilot told them that they had landed
Reluctently but excited at the same time they got up and went into the airport
Luis and Fancy had their bags and Luis expected a van to pick them up but once again he was shocked to see a limo pull up
Luis: Fancy is this what we are riding in
Fancy: Yep its going to be so fun
Luis: This is going to be some trip
Luis and Fancy got to their hotel room and decided to go out to eat and once they got to the restaurant they couldn’t keep their hands off of each other so they decided to come back to the hotel room
Luis: Fancy oh I want you so badly
Fancy: Luis I want you too lets make love right now
Luis: Your wish is my command
They kiss more and then do the deed
They lay in bed for hours intertwined
Fancy was in heaven but she had no idea what was in store for her in just 2 short days.
Up next: What does Luis have planned for Fancy?
If I don’t get any ideas I will be forced to end this fanfic pretty soon because I am out of ideas. So anything that you guys have dreamed of having in Lancy just make a shout out.
Thanks
Hey guys here is an update. Thank you dardoura for your ideas I have a great idea!
Luis and Fancy were walking through the streets of New York late at night holding each other close to keep warm. Luis has a special night planed for Fancy!
Fancy: Luis will you please tell me where we are going
Luis: No it’s a surprise but don’t worry its close. Just trust me
Fancy: I do trust you. I just want to be alive by the time we get there
(Luis holds her closer and she smiles to herself thinking how lucky she is to have Luis)
They arrive at the Empire State Building and walk in
Fancy: Luis what are we doing here?
Luis: I have a plan don’t worry
They walk into a private dining room on the eighty- sixth floor with candles and flower pedals around everywhere
Fancy has tears in her eyes
Fancy: Oh Luis this is… wonderful
Luis: You like it?
Fancy: Luis I love it thank you for doing this for me
Luis: I would do anything for you
Fancy: Luis
Luis: Yeah Fance
Fancy: I love you
Luis: I love you too babe
They share a romantic dinner just staring into each others eyes and laughing with each other
After dinner Luis walks over to Fancy and gets on one knee and Fancy gasps
Luis: Fancy I love you so much and we have been through thick and thin together. You gave me my life back when I thought it was over. Fancy, Will you be my wife?
Fancy: Oh Luis, YES! I will (She jumps in his arms and gives him a slow and romantic kiss
Walking out of the restaurant
Judge: Order Order! Now Sheridan Crane step down from the stand
Sheridan: No wait I have to explain! Luis Im sorry
Chris: Sheridan why don’t you explain it to me first. I am your HUSBAND!
Sheridan: Chris not now I have to find Luis
Cut to Fancy and Luis in the back room
Fancy: See Luis I told you She wants you. And that’s why she said all of those things to make me look bad!
Luis: Still it is no excuse
Fancy: Oh Luis. I hope what Aunt Sheridan said doesn’t affect the jury
Luis: Me Too… Me Too
Sheridan Walks In
Sheridan: Luis I am so sorry. You don’t understand
Luis: Yes I do. Fancy was right all along about you. You have been trying to break us apart since the beginning
Sheridan: Yes but only because I still love you. I did this out of love
Fancy: Oh so you made Luis look guilty “out of love”
Sheridan: Fancy Stay out of this
Luis: Don’t talk to Fancy like that. (He turns to Fancy) I am so sorry Fancy that I didn’t believe you at first. You would think that I would learn after Beth But I didn’t. Please Forgive me!
Fancy: Of course I will. I love you
Luis: I love you too (sorry had to add some sap in there)
Sheridan: Ok Ok Ok you can stop now
Luis is really mad now
Luis: No Sheridan you can stop now. I cant believe that you would ever want me to be found guilty
Sheridan: No I would never want that
Luis: I cant believe I just sat there while you made Fancy look like and idiot all of those times, in the jail, in the cabin, in her room
Luis realizes something
Luis: wait….. You convinced me that Fancy was making up all of the attacks in her bedroom…. Maybe you said that because you knew something otherwise
Sheridan: No No I don’t know anything (She is obviously lying)
Fancy: Sheridan I know when you are lying, it is showing all over your face
Sheridan: No
Luis: Sheridan, don’t lie to me if you know something say it now it could save me
Sheridan: FINE!!! I- uh I have some evidence of Fancys attacks
Up next: Sheridan goes back on the witness stand and tells what she knows. Will it be enough to save Luis in time?
Hey guys tell me if you like it. Also any comments would be awesome. The next chapter will be shorter but don’t worry the story will make up for it.
Update!!!!!!!
Judge: I would like to call Sheridan Crane back to the stand for some last minute evidence.
Sheridan: Thank you judge.
Ethan: Sheridan what is this last minute evidence
Sheridan well when I- uh was in Fancy’s bedroom after she was “attacked” Fancy claimed that she popped a button off of her attackers shirt
Ethan: Yes--------
Sheridan: well while she and Luis were looking I was trying my hardest to convince Luis that Fancy was going crazy.
Ethan: Go on Sheridan
Sheridan: well what I never told anyone was that…. I found the button
The Congregation gasps
Judge: Order Order
Grace: Your Honor the witness does not have any evidence
Sheridan: Actually I do (she reaches in her purse and pulls out a small black button)
Ethan: There you see jury Luis had another alibi during the only other attack.
Judge: The jury will review all of the evidence and return shortly
Luis turns back to Fancy
Luis: Fancy I may actually have a chance to live
Fancy: I know I have complete faith
Luis: I just hope what Sheridan said about the button helped in my result
Fancy: I know I don’t know what I would do without you
Luis : Well maybe you never do (Luis and Fancy look lovingly into each others eyes)
Fancy: Oh wait Im getting a page from someone. Im just going to step out for a minute.
Luis: Ok but don’t be too long
Fancy: I wont ( she leaves to go outside)
The Jury comes back
Judge: Jury what is you decision
Jury: In the case of Luis Lopez Fitzgerald, we find him innocent due to last minute changes in the evidence
Everybody is crying and hugging Luis and smiling
Luis turns to find Fancy and doesn’t see her
All of a sudden a gun is fired and Fancy’s scream is heard
Up next: Who was shot, who shot, and why?
Ok Guys here it is!
All of a sudden a gun is fired and Fancy’s Scream is heard by everyone especially Luis
Luis: FANCY!!!!! Despite being in a wheel chair he stood up ripped off his handcuffs and ran toward the scream
Fancy was lying in a pool of blood around her leg, unconscious, and guess who was standing over her with a gun
SHERIDAN
Luis first ran to Fancy’s side and tried to prop her up to give her oxygen. Fancy was coming to.
Luis: I need a paramedic Right Now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Luis turned to Sheridan: Sheridan How could you shoot your own niece!!!
Luis was beyond mad, he was confused, distraught, and mainly concerned for Fancy
Sheridan: She doesn’t belong with you Luis I DO!!!!!
Luis: Sheridan I will never be with you ESPECIALLY after this
Fancy was awake now and very much in pain
Fancy: Luis?
Luis: Im here Fance, your gonna be ok
Fancy: What happened
Luis: Well while I was waiting for the jury you were shot
Fancy: Oh I remember now AUNT SHERIDAN! ( she is obviously frightened by her aunt)
Luis: Its ok fancy She is not going to hut you
Fancy has a flashback
Fancy: gosh I wonder who this is. I don’t want to leave Luis, The jury could already be out
Sheridan: Don’t worry fancy. Ill make sure you don’t miss a thing
Fancy: What do you want Aunt Sheridan
Sheridan: I think you know what I want
Fancy: If your talking about Luis….its not going to happen
Sheridan: Oh yeah? Why do you think I confessed to having the button. So Luis would see that in my heart I am still perfect little Sheridan and he will come back to me.
Fancy: No No He is with me… He loves me now
Sheridan: Not for long! (She takes out the gun and Fancy is starting to run away. Sheridan shoots but only gets Fancy’s leg)
End Flashback
Fancy: Luis don’t leave me
Luis: I wont Im staying right here
Fancy: I love you
Luis: I love you too… You have no idea (AWWWWWWWWWW!)
Coming up next: Does Sheridan Escape? If so who helps her?
Hey guys im running into a huge dry spell for ideas and need your help!!!!!!!!!!!
Please any ideas will be great
Quick Update Hope you like it!!!!
Sheridan’s POV
Oh I have to get out of here before anyone catches me and takes me to jail. Now that Luis is free I have to stay free so that we can stay together. (Someone lurks around the corner) Who was that?
Sheridan: Who is that? Show yourself
Mystery Person: Your worst nightmare or your dream come true
Sheridan: who are you
The person comes around the corner. Just by Fancy’s descriptions she knows this to be the attacker.
Sheridan: you’re the one that put my Luis behind bars
Blackmailer: Yes and you could be with him if you don’t obey
Sheridan: what do you want
Blackmailer: I understand that you hate Fancy and Luis together
Sheridan: Yes I just want what is best for them
Blackmailer: Cut the crap Tell me the truth or you wont be able to speak again
Sheridan: Ok I hate them together. Luis belongs to me
Blackmailer: I can help you get Luis and get out of here alive
Sheridan: Im not coming with you. How do I know you wont hurt me
Blackmailer: Lets just day you know some information that I need
Sheridan is not scared only hopeful and anxious to get Luis all to herself
Sheridan: Lead the way
Blackmailer: Perfect Just perfect….
At the Hospital
Luis is in a wheelchair with 5 handcuffs on his arms instead of one due to the last break out
Fancy is in a hospital bed and very weak
Luis: Hey are you feeling any better
Fancy: Much better now that you are here
Luis: Im not going anywhere
Fancy: Luis, Aunt Sheridan said some things that kind of scared me
Luis: What did she say
Fancy: I know this sound so Junior High but she said that when she admitted to having the button, you would see her as the old Sheridan and want to go back to her
Luis: Fancy---
Fancy: No I now im being silly but Im already went through thinking I lost you and I didn’t want to feel that again
Luis: Your not going to lose me to a needle or Sheridan
Fancy is ecstatic!
Fancy: So the jury found you innocent
Luis: Yes! And I was looking for you to tell you and that’s when I heard you scream.
Fancy: Oh Luis! Now well be together forever
Luis: Yes we will
(They kiss for a long time)
Somewhere in the Hospital room were two pairs of eyes looking right at Fancy and Luis.
One gleaming with sick pleaser and one almost green with envy
Hey Guys Here is another update. Hope you like it!!!
Blackmailer and Sheridan decided to leave the hospital and go to a more private place to discuss their plan to get Sheridan Luis and give the Blackmailer information.
Sheridan: Ok so first how can we make Luis all mine
Blackmailer: No I make the rules you give me the information I need
Sheridan: How do I know you wont get rid of me after I tell you this “information”
Blackmailer: you will just have to trust me (gives a raspy chuckle)
Sheridan: No I wont give you any information
Blackmailer: Hey girly I can get this information from other sources, I thought you would be willing to give information
Sheridan: Listen Buddy, I will give you half of the information now and the other half when I have Luis in my arms
Blackmailer: Fair enough! I have a a question to ask you
Sheridan: Ok shoot
Blackmailer: Why did this Pretty leave
Sheridan: Fancy told everyone one of Pretty’s secrets and she left
Blackmailer: Good I have the truth
Sheridan: What?
Blackmailer: Nothing Now I have a plan
Sheridan: ok what is it
Blackmailer: One night when I attacked Fancy I had to drug Luis to get his semen and the entire time he thought it was Fancy
Sheridan: Ok wait…. No I am not going to drug Luis
Blackmailer: You will if you want Luis
Sheridan: Ok but wont he wake up and then go back to Fancy
Blackmailer: Not if Fancy sees you together She will never take him back
Sheridan: And then he will come back to me! Perfect
At the hospital
Eve walks in when Fancy and Luis are kissing. She clears her throat
Fancy: oh sorry Eve (embarrassed)
Luis: Ya sorry we cant help it (he winks at Fancy and she giggles)
Eve: its ok I was just coming in to say that Fancy is free to go
Fancy: Rele? That’s great
Right when that happens a police guard comes in and uncuffs Luis and apologizes for the misunderstanding. Luis feels good so he decides to stand up and he is fine.
Eve: Luis are you ok on your feet
Luis: I feel great but if its ok can I take Fancy home
Eve: of corse as long a both of you take it easy
Fancy: oh we will.
In Luis’ car
Fancy: Whoo I am tired
Luis: me too how bout we go to your house and we take a nap
Fancy: That would be great
Luis: ok home sweet home we come
They are laying in Fancy’s Bed and want to make love but know that they should wait and gain their strength
They are kissing
Fancy pulls away and smiles
Fancy: ok we really need to sleep
Luis: Aw ok one more
They kiss again and Fancy doesn’t want to stop
Luis: ok good night
He wraps his arms around her and she leans of his chest and they fall into a deep sleep
Sheridan is watching the entire thing and cant wait until Luis is with her again
Sheridan: Ok its go time
She goes up to Luis and sticks a needle in Luis’ neck
He looks up and sees Sheridan at first and all of a sudden he sees Fancy. They start kissing.
The Blackmailer comes in and starts to wake up Fancy. She looks up and sees the ski mask. She starts to scream and then she sees Luis and Sheridan kissing. She then starts crying and the blackmailer starts to attack her.
UP NEXT: Will Luis’ Love be enough to conqer the drug and save Fancy. Also who is the blackmailer and why is he or she attacking Fancy
Update!!! Hope you like it.
Fancy was screaming while the blackmailer was tying her up and beating her. (Sorry didn’t mean to be graphic)
Sheridan, despite loving Luis kissing her, was feeling a little sorry for her niece but that thought was cut off by Luis’ warm lips on hers. She was on cloud nine. Fancy was screaming and all of a sudden Luis was having a bad feeling.
Luis’ POV
I guess Fancy is feeling better if she wants to kiss me like this but something is different and I cant shake this feeling that something is wrong. I was starting to understand what was going on when I felt Fancy kissing me. The weird thing is is that it was not Fancy’s kiss. It felt familiar but did not have the same spark or fire like Fancy. Luis stopped kissing “Fancy” and looked her directly in the eye. Only this time it was Sheridan he saw.
Luis: SHERIDAN!!! WHERE IS FAN…… his question was cut off by Fancy’s scream
I looked over and Fancy was being attacked by the rapist who got her the last time. I cant believe this was happening and I didn’t stop it before.
Luis ran over to the attacker and ripped the attacker off of his love while hitting it over and over. The attacker tried to fight back but Luis’ anger was fueling his power. Luis had his gun in his pocket and never forgot it. The attacker took out a knife on Luis and started to cut his arm. Luis took out his gun and shot the attackers leg.
Luis took out his cuffs and cuffed the attacker to the bed. He ran over to Fancy who was so distraught she couldn’t stop shaking and crying. At first she accepted Luis’ embrace but then she remembered him kissing her aunt and she pushed him away.
Luis didn’t understand why Fancy was doing this until he remembered Sheridan. He looked over at Sheridan who was trying to get the attacker free.
Luis ran over to Sheridan and pushed her out of the way. Luis kicked the attacker and ripped out his phone. He called Sam and told him to come over to Fancy’s room ASAP.
Luis took off the mask of the attacker and came to face a woman wearing a lot of padding in order to make herself look more manly.
Fancy managed to choke out “P-P-Pretty?”
Luis ripped his head over at Fancy and looked at her questionably. This was Fancy’s sister? The attacker was Fancy’s sister.
Sam busted through the door and arrested Pretty and Sheridan for helping a criminal.
Luis ran back to Fancy and tried to embrace her. Fancy hit him over and over and pushed him away.
Luis: Fancy? Why wont you let me hug you
Fancy: You try to act so innocent and pretend you didn’t do anything. I was just attacked and you didn’t do anything about it
Luis: I didn’t do anything? I pulled him…er.. her off of you
Fancy: Ya after I screamed to you and screamed to you whie you were busy making out with my aunt
Luis: Fancy I thought it was you, you have to believe me
Fancy: Oh yeah, nice try
Luis: Fancy I was drugged, All I saw was your face when I was kissing Sheridan
Fancy: Luis don’t lie to m---- her words were cut off when she saw Luis’ neck
Fancy: Luis what- your neck is swelling
Luis: There, That is proof that I was drugged by Sheridan
Fancy: That is the same hole that we saw at Eve’s office
Luis: Fancy do you believe me now?
Fancy grabs Luis and hisses im like she has never kissed him before
Luis: I guess that is a yes (Laughs)
Fancy: Yeah.. I’m sorry I was just so hurt when I saw you and then I was attacked by Pretty (she is obviously confused and hurt by finding out that her sister attacked her)
Luis: I’m sure there is an explanation for Pretty, maybe she is being set up
Fancy: Yeah or my sister tried to attack me
Luis: yeah maybe but I cant explain Sheridan
Fancy: That is why it hurt me so much because she told me that you would come back to her and then I saw you and her kis—(she starts to break down)
Luis: Fancy I’m sorry but I thought it was you I swear
Fancy: I know its just it hurt me so much and it makes me sick
Luis: I know it makes me sick too
Fancy: Do you want to go to the interrigation room to see what they say
Luis: Umm yeah but are you ready
Fancy: Yeah as long as your with me
Luis: Im right by your side forever
They Kiss for a long time
Fancy: Now lets go
Up next: What does Sheridan Say and Why did Pretty attack Fancy?
Luis and Fancy arrive at the Police Station and just as they are about to go in…
Luis: Fancy are you sure you are ready for this
Fancy: Yeah I think I am. Lets go in
Luis: After you
Luis and Fancy walk in and see Sheridan and Pretty sitting on two police chairs cuffed to the desk.
Sam is questioning them.
Sam: Sheridan will you explain why you teamed up against Fancy with this Blackmailier
Sheridan: Because Luis belongs to me and Pretty had some ideas
Sam: So you watched you own niece get attacked while you were busy drugging Luis
Sheridan: Well I felt a little bad but Luis was so amazing
Hearing this made Fancy very uncomfortable and sick to her stomach. Luis notices this and grabs Fancy tight and kisses her. This makes her smile.
Sam then questions Pretty next
Sam: Pretty what was your reason to attack your own sister and blackmail all of harmony
Pretty: Well I wanted to get revenge on my sister and all of harmony
Sam: can I ask why?
Pretty: well Fancy told my secret
Sam: and what secret would that be
Pretty: well when we were young and Ethan was away and I had never seen him. When one day he came home from college and I told Fancy I thought he was cute and developed a crush on him. Fancy told everybody that I liked him and of course this humiliated me so I ran away. Once I came back I learned that Ethan was not my brother and wanted to get back at Fancy for humiliating me
Sam: so you attacked her
Pretty: yes and I blackmailed Theresa because she was with ethan and I knew that I would never be with him
Sam: That is sick and twisted
Pretty: Yeah but my sister humiliated me to the breaking point
At this Fancy was crying and silently apologizing and beating herself up over this Luis looks over at Fancy and sees that she is sorry and mad at herself. Luis walks over to Fancy and hugs her tight.
Fancy: Oh Luis I thought that you would be mad at me
Luis: of course not. You were young
Fancy: If I had known the hurt that I had caused I never would have done it
Luis: I know I know but even so that was no excuse for Pretty to do this.
Sheridan is confused now
Sheridan: Pretty why did you want to know your secret from me
Pretty: I needed to know that I could trust you to tell me true information
Sheridan: oh I get it
Sam well unfortunaly both of you will be in jail and Pretty you might even be put to death
Up Next: How does Fancy react to the news and what happens to Pretty
Update!!!!!!!!! Hope you like it. Oh and I need to clear up something Pretty never like Ethan. He came home and it was the first time that Pretty ever had seen him. Pretty told Fancy that she thought Ethan was cute. Fancy then told everyone that Pretty loved Ethan and that humiliated Pretty.
Pretty: Fancy, you cant let me die
Fancy: Pretty you hurt me and Luis so much
Pretty: I know but im your sister and wont his be return for humiliating
Fancy: Don’t you think I have paid enough I have been raped, had to live life thinking I would live without the love of my life and I had to watch my aunt make out with my boyfriend (She is breaking down now) Yes I love you because you are my sister buyyou hurt all of us so badly
Pretty: Fancy I did what I had to do because you hurt me so don’t talk to me about hurt
Luis is sad that Fancy is getting attacked so he steps in
Luis: Pretty I don’t know you and what your like but I do know Fancy and I know what she did hurt you but I think that you need to lay off Fancy now. I didn’t know her when she was young but I know that now Fancy is the most caring person I have ever met and wouldn’t hurt a fly.
Fancy leans into Luis as if he just saved her life and Luis gladly wrapped his arms around her.
Sheridan is sickened by this and tries to run toward Luis but is handcuffed to the desk. (woulnt you love to see her get yanked back haha lol)
Fancy jumps a little bit and Luis holds her tighter.
Pretty: Sheridan calm down
Sheridan: I hate seeing them together
Fancy was very upset at Pretty and Sheridan and couldn’t stand to be in there. Luis follows her and Pretty screams at her to save her. Fancy started running with Luis close behind her.
Fancy falls to the ground of the park and she starts to break down for everything. Getting attacked, by her sister, almost losing Luis two times. She lets it all out. Luis is close behind her and squats down to her level and holds her while she lets it all out. Once Fancy has calmed down she and Luis went to a bench in a park.
Luis: Fancy are you ok
Fancy: yeah as long as you are with me I am always happy
Luis: Hey Fance
Fancy: yeah
Luis: why don’t we go away together
Fancy: Can we do that
Luis: I mean Im not apart of the force but if you could take time off we could go away for a weekend just the two of us.
Fancy: Oh Luis I think that’s just what you and I need. Some time alone
Up next: What happens when Lancy go off together? How does Sheridan react to their news
Luis and Fancy were curled up on Luis’ front porch
Luis: Where do you want to go this weekend?
Fancy: I don’t know how about New York
Luis: I don’t have that kind of money
Fancy: Why don’t we go on the Crane Jet
Luis: Yeah that will work
Fancy: Oh Luis I cant wait to spend a whole weekend alone with you.
Luis: Just the two of us (He holds her closer and she snuggles into him
Luis and Fancy at the airport
Luis: Fancy are you ready to go
Fancy: Yeah I just have to call Sam first
Luis: Ok I will meet you on the plane
Fancy: Ok
She phones Sam
Fancy: Hey Sam this is Fancy
Sam: Hey Fancy are you ok
Fancy: Yeah Sam thanks but the reason I called was to say I am going to take some time off but only for the weekend
Sam: Yeah Fancy Take your time, not that its any of my business but are you with Luis
Fancy: Yes I am We decided to go on a trip together
Sam: Well I think that is great you have a great time together
Sheridan Hears and automaticly knows that he is talking about Fancy and Luis
Sheridan: Is Fancy going off with Luis. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Luis and I are supposed to be together
Sam: Sheridan Shut Up! Anyway good luck Fancy
Fancy: Oh ya thanks (she obviously heard Sheridan and is sad)
Sam: bye
Fancy walks off to the jet and meets Luis
Luis looks very happy in the Crane jet and is so excited Fancy had to let out a little chuckle at him
Luis: What
Fancy: No nothing your just so cute you look like a little boy at Chrismas
Luis: This is so new to me. I love it!
Fancy: Im glad! Now lets get comfortable and away we go
Luis: Then get over here and lets curl up here
(Fancy ran over to Luis and jumped into his arms and stayed that way the entire ride! She was in pure bliss)
Luis and Fancy looked at each other and smiled. Luis leaned down and gave Fancy a sweet kiss on the lips
Just then the pilot told them that they had landed
Reluctently but excited at the same time they got up and went into the airport
Luis and Fancy had their bags and Luis expected a van to pick them up but once again he was shocked to see a limo pull up
Luis: Fancy is this what we are riding in
Fancy: Yep its going to be so fun
Luis: This is going to be some trip
Luis and Fancy got to their hotel room and decided to go out to eat and once they got to the restaurant they couldn’t keep their hands off of each other so they decided to come back to the hotel room
Luis: Fancy oh I want you so badly
Fancy: Luis I want you too lets make love right now
Luis: Your wish is my command
They kiss more and then do the deed
They lay in bed for hours intertwined
Fancy was in heaven but she had no idea what was in store for her in just 2 short days.
Up next: What does Luis have planned for Fancy?
If I don’t get any ideas I will be forced to end this fanfic pretty soon because I am out of ideas. So anything that you guys have dreamed of having in Lancy just make a shout out.
Thanks
Hey guys here is an update. Thank you dardoura for your ideas I have a great idea!
Luis and Fancy were walking through the streets of New York late at night holding each other close to keep warm. Luis has a special night planed for Fancy!
Fancy: Luis will you please tell me where we are going
Luis: No it’s a surprise but don’t worry its close. Just trust me
Fancy: I do trust you. I just want to be alive by the time we get there
(Luis holds her closer and she smiles to herself thinking how lucky she is to have Luis)
They arrive at the Empire State Building and walk in
Fancy: Luis what are we doing here?
Luis: I have a plan don’t worry
They walk into a private dining room on the eighty- sixth floor with candles and flower pedals around everywhere
Fancy has tears in her eyes
Fancy: Oh Luis this is… wonderful
Luis: You like it?
Fancy: Luis I love it thank you for doing this for me
Luis: I would do anything for you
Fancy: Luis
Luis: Yeah Fance
Fancy: I love you
Luis: I love you too babe
They share a romantic dinner just staring into each others eyes and laughing with each other
After dinner Luis walks over to Fancy and gets on one knee and Fancy gasps
Luis: Fancy I love you so much and we have been through thick and thin together. You gave me my life back when I thought it was over. Fancy, Will you be my wife?
Fancy: Oh Luis, YES! I will (She jumps in his arms and gives him a slow and romantic kiss
Walking out of the restaurant