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Post by luisismine on Jun 20, 2007 6:04:30 GMT -5
you know I love this.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 20, 2007 10:49:49 GMT -5
thanks and i love your banner. =)
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 21, 2007 0:11:49 GMT -5
At The Bennet's House. Noah is trying to sleep, but there is a distraction. He can't stop thinking about Paloma. He just had to see her. He got up and got dressed and wondered if he should go Pilar's house/
At Pilar's House. Paloma is sitting on her bed and writing in her diary.
Her Entry:
Dear Diary,
These past few days have been muy perfecto. I have been spending so much time with Noah. He is so amazing. I really want to see him again. He is just oo so sexy. I just want to rip his shirt off sometimes. I can't wait to see him again. It is a little late so i better go to sleep. Mama is coming home tommorow. I can't wait to tell her everything that has been happening. Buenos Noches.
At Gwen's Hotel
Gwen: I gotta blow this b1tch out of the waters. Ethan belongs with me. But what to do, what to do? (scratches head)
The phone rings....
Gwen: Hello
Sheridan: Oh My Gosh Gwen! Luis took Fancy to Bermuda for a few days!
Gwen: I see.
Sheridan: ALL YOU CAN SAY IS I SEE?
Gwen: Sorry Sheridan. I am just a little bit distracted. The whole Theresa thing is just driving me crazy.
Sheridan: I am sorry Gwen. I wish I could help you.
Gwen: It is ok. I think I got a plan.
Sheridan: Oh God I am afraid to know.
Gwen: Don't worry I'll be good.
Sheridan: Yeah right. Whatever. Chris will be home soon. I have to go. Bye. Don't be .
They hang up.
Gwen: Don't worry Sheridan, I won't. I'll be really really good. in making Theresa's life miserable/
In Bermuda.
Fancy: Luis what were you going to say?
Luis: I am trying to tell you that I LOVE YOU. (everyone stares for a moment and looks away) I am sorry, I yelled it like that. I just couldn't hold it in much longer. Look I know we have only been together a short period of time. And---
Fancy: Luis, can you shutup for a second so I can tell you I love you too.
Luis: I love you. You are so self determined and out spoken. You brought out a side of me that no one has before. You gave me my life back. I couldn't be any more grateful to have you in my life. You bring joy and happiness to me.
Luis looks into Fancy's eyes and pulls her closer and kiss her so passionately that she just melts inside.
Luis: What do you say we skip dinner and go upstairs? I don't I can wait any longer. I want to make love to you all night.
Fancy: Oh Luis. I want you too. What are we waiting for? Lets Go.
They run upstairs and begin to rip each other's clothes off. Fancy's poor dress is torn because Luis couldn't find the zipper. Fancy ripped Luis' shirt off because she couldn't wait to unbutton the buttons. They begin to make passionate love.
At Pilar's House. There is a sound at Paloma's Window.
Paloma: What is that sound? It sounds like it is coming from the window. (she walks over to the window)
Paloma: Dios Mios. (she opens the window) Noah, what are you doing here?
Noah: Paloma I just had to see you.
Paloma: Hang on. I will be right down.
She opens the door and Noah pulls her into a deep kiss.
Paloma: My My My are we a bit EXCITED tonight?
Noah: What?!? No. But I am excited to see you though.
Paloma: Come in. I'll get us some wine and food.
Noah: Don't bother.
He grabs her and kisses her. They begin to make out and the next thing they know they are in Paloma's room. They make love all night.
At Gwen's Hotel...
Gwen: This plan is going to be perfect.
She heads back to the mansion. Ethan and Theresa are sound asleep in Ethan's room. When she gets there she opens Ethan''s door quietly.
Gwen: (whispers) Man are they heavy sleepers or what. All I gotta do is kill this b1tch. Ethan is going to hear me. I gotta drug him first and get him out of the room. Gwen drugs Ethan and drags him to a guestroom. As she is dragging him she accidenlty bumped his head in the wall.
Gwen: (whispers) Oh My Gosh! Oh My Gosh. Honey I am so sorry. Are you ok? (kisses his head)
After she puts him in the guestroom. She goes to Ethan's room and puts a pillow on top of Theresa's face.
In Bermuda. Fancy and Luis have made love several times already.
Fancy: Wow that was amazing.I will never forget this night Luis.
Luis: I love you so much.
Fancy: I love you too. Ready for another round?
Luis: A better question is are you ready for me?
Fancy: My your ego is huge.(she laughs)
Luis: Only when is comes to you. (he laughs)
They make love half the night. They are both so worn out, Fancy falls asleep as Luis holds her.
Luis:(whispers) I love you Fancy. You don't even know how much. I hope that if your dreaming of your future I am in it. (he kisses her foreheadand falls asleep)
Up Next: Will Theresa survive? Will Ethan save her? Pilar returns a day early and she finds Paloma in bed with Noah. What is her reaction?Sorry guys. I know this isn't the best chapter. I have been a lil distracted lately. I'll try to wite more soon/
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Post by luisismine on Jun 21, 2007 8:46:54 GMT -5
on Gwen. to the rest. Hope everything is okay with you.
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Post by lancylover918 on Jun 21, 2007 12:15:28 GMT -5
I love it so much!
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Post by lancylust on Jun 22, 2007 22:35:46 GMT -5
wow that best time story i ever i love it
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 22, 2007 23:01:35 GMT -5
Thankyou everyone.
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Post by lancylust on Jun 23, 2007 22:15:51 GMT -5
please write more i love story
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Post by Sonny&Brenda Fan on Jun 23, 2007 22:27:06 GMT -5
Man This Story Is HOT!!!!!LANCY ALLL THE WAY AND ET AS WELL!!!!!
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Post by lancylust on Jun 24, 2007 10:43:15 GMT -5
please write more i love to read more i amhuge fan of lancy and et too
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 24, 2007 11:39:08 GMT -5
I will soon I promise
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Post by lancylust on Jun 24, 2007 22:59:27 GMT -5
thankyou love it
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Post by lancylust on Jun 25, 2007 21:34:00 GMT -5
let know when story updates lyothbounpheng@gmail.com
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jun 26, 2007 11:31:47 GMT -5
At The Lopez-Fitzgerald House. Paloma and Noah were exhausted after several rounds of making love and were fast asleep. Pilar has returned home a day early from her trip.
Pilar: Man, it is go be home. I wonder where everyone is. Miguel isn't home and Theresa isn't here either. Dios Mio where are my children. Maybe Paloma is home. I should go check her room.
Pilar walks over to Paloma's room and turns the knob to open the door.
Pilar: Dios Mios!
At The Crane Mansion.Theresa is trying to fight to stay alive. Ethan is in the other room and hears nothing.
Theresa: HELP!!! ETHAN!!!!!!
Gwen: He can't hear you, . Your going to die.
Theresa manages to push Gwen off of her and they being to fight. It is an all natural girl fight. They are pulling each other's hair and scratching each other, with a few slaps here and there. Ethan woke up hearing the noise coming from his room. Gwen did not realize that she mixed the actual drug pill with her medicine. She gave Ethan the wrong thing.
Ethan: Where the hell am I? This isn't my room. Where is Theresa?
Back in Ethan's Room
Gwen: Stay Away from him you tramp. He is mine!
Theresa: You wish! Get off of me you crazy twit.
Ethan rushes in.
Ethan: Break it up. What the hell is going on? Gwen what are you doing here?
Theresa: Yeah, Gwen do you wanna tell him or should I?
Gwen: Well um um
Back at the Lopez Fitzgerald house
Pilar: Paloma! What on earth is going here? Oh My Gosh Noah!
Paloma: Mama, what are you doing here? I thought your flight was due for tommorow.
Pilar: It was, but I came home a day early. Don't change the subject. Get your clothes on both of you and get out NOW!
Noah: Pilar, I assure you nothing happened.
Pilar: Nothing happened? Noah I wasn't born yesterday, I have eyes and I saw all I needed to see. I think you should just leave.
Noah: Okay, I am sorry Pilar. Bye Paloma. I love you.
Noah reaches for a kiss.
Pilar: Boy don't you think about kissing her. You better get outta my house .
Paloma: Mama.
Pilar: Quiet Paloma.
Noah leaves.
Pilar: Paloma, you are to young to have sex. What has gotten into you.
Paloma: Mama, I am just in love. Noah and I really care about each other and we love each other. Things just got a little out of hand.
Pilar: A little out of hand! A LITTLE! I walked in on my daughter and her boyfriend half naked!
Paloma: Mama, just calm down.
Pilar: Calm Down! I don't think so. I can't believe this is happening. I thought I taught you to wait until marriage.
Paloma: Mama, I found someone that loves me for me and that I love with all my heart. You should be happy.
Pilar is about to cry.
Pilar: I just can't believe my mija is growning up. Promise me this won't happen again.
At the Mansion.
Ethan: Well Gwen?
Gwen: well, I just came by to see my mother and I heard Theresa screaming and so I came in to see if she was okay. I guess she woke up and thought I was attacking her and things just got carried away.
Theresa: That is not true. Your such a liar. Think about it Ethan, if Gwen was telling the truth, how did you whind up somewhere else?She came in here and put a pillow over my head trying to kill me.
Ethan: Gwen is this true?
Gwen: Of Course Not. Come on you know I wouldn't sink that low just to get you back.
Theresa: Youc an't believe her. She is lying.
Ethan: But Honey, why would she lie?
Theresa: Oh my Gosh. You believe her. Why would I be screaming then?
Ethan: Maybe you had a nightmare. I rpobavly just slept walk into another room. It Happens.
Theresa: You know what the only Nightmare I have had is being with you. I can't believe you don't trust me. I am I mean I was your girlfriend. Your suppose to trust me and you don't You trust her.
Ethan: Theresa, don't be like that.
Theresa: Ethan, Leave me Alone. Goodbye. Gwen you can have him he is all yours.
Theresa walks out the door crying. Ethan: Theresa wait.
Gwen pulls him back
Gwen: Forget her. Just give her space.
Outside.
Theresa: Maybe Ethan will come get me. That will show me how much he loves me.
Inside.
Ethan: Yeah maybe your right. I knew you still love me, but you wouldn't sink that low.
Gwen: Of Course not. I should go. I'll sleep in a guest room. Bye.
Gwen kisses him on the cheek. Ethan wipes it off and Gwen leaves the room. Ethan tries to go back to slee, but all he can think about is Theresa.
Outside.
Theresa: I can't believe he didn't come out to get me. I can't believe I was right about him all along. He is just a pig. I just need to go home and think. This week has just been to much.
At The Lopez Fitzgerald House.
Paloma: Mama! I am sorry but I can't do that. I can't help how Noah and I feel about each other.
Pilar: Paloma! Your just becoming a grown women. This takes time.
Paloma: mom I know I am your baby in the family, but I am a grown up and I can make my own decisions.
Pilar: I just hope you know what you are doing. You should just think about this. I am jet lagged. We will talk more tommorow.
Theresa arrived home and walks into Paloma's room.
Theresa: Oh My Gosh. Mama! Your home!
They run and give each other a hug. Pilar notices that something is wrong.
Pilar: Theresita. What is wrong?
Theresa: Nothing. I thought you were coming home tommorow?
Pilar: No I changed flights. Are you sure your okay? Where have you been?
Theresa: i was at Ethan's
Pilar: Oh Thats nice. Well I am tired. We will catch up tommorow.
Pilar leaves.
Paloma: Okay, what happened?
Theresa: A lot. What about you.
They tell each other everything that happened.
Theresa: Oh My Gosh. I can't believe Mama walked in on you two. (laughs)
Paloma: Ethan is . You''ll find someone better.
Theresa: I know. I wanna hate him so much right now, but I love him so much.
Paloma: Why don't we go out tommorow. We can spend the day catching up and bonding?
Theresa: I would like that.
They hug and go to bed.
Up Next: Luis and fancy spend a fun day in Bermuda. Theresa meets someone new. What is Ethan's reaction? Will Ethan win her back? Miguel and Kay tell Pilar their good news. Gwen is thinking her plan is working.
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Post by luisismine on Jun 26, 2007 11:45:52 GMT -5
loved it.
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