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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 18, 2007 16:59:49 GMT -5
Oh please update soon, loving the Foxay story!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Apr 18, 2007 17:17:20 GMT -5
This one was written by me Chapter five: A date with Miguel The next night quickly arrived, which was Kay's date with Miguel that took place at the Seascape. "Kay come on, hurry up. We're going to be late. I made reservations for 6:30, its already 6:45." "Lack of patience Miguel. Hold on. A girl needs time!" Kay yelled while finishing the last touches of her makeup. She looked more special then she felt. All she could think of was Fox and that wasn't a very good start for her and Miguel's relationship. When she finally completed the makeup, Kay hurried herself downstairs to a waiting Miguel. "Finally. I don't know whatsup with girls taking long to prepare..all guys take is 5 minutes." Kay rolled her eyes. Not even a "you look beautiful" came out of his mouth and from that Kay felt hurt. "Now lets go" Once the couple arrived at the Seascape Kay felt wrong. All she longed to do was race out of the fancy restaurant and run to Fox's arms--but she knew she couldn't, not only with she get Miguel's bad side but she will also recieve many bad mouthing of how she was a fool to take back Fox from all he's done. As the waitor walked over to their table, she recognized it was her friend Fred from work. "Oh hey Kay" he kindly greeted "I'm guessing you took the day shift today, so this is..Miguel, right?" A smile started to spread on Miguel's overtanned face "Yup, thats me" he brought out his hand. Kay didn't even bother to introduce. "Hey Fred, hows it going? Busy tonight?" "Thats for sure. So what would you two like to drink?" "We'll have a bottle of champagne." "Sounds good. I'll be right back with it" he walked away. "Are you ok, Kay? You look like you have a high fever" Miguel put his firm hand over her forehead. "Yeah...I'm going to go take a walk around the warf to get some fresh air, that will probably help." "Okay, just don't be too long." Kay walked out and strolled back and forth the warf when that night, the worst night of her life flashed back...
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Post by Paulweeen on Apr 18, 2007 21:39:25 GMT -5
More Elise More!!!
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Post by luisismine on Apr 19, 2007 7:48:07 GMT -5
poor Kay.I need more.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 19, 2007 8:11:58 GMT -5
Great chapter!! More!!
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Post by Kimberella on Apr 19, 2007 8:26:57 GMT -5
LOVEd that chapter!!! Need more now girly!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Apr 23, 2007 15:38:31 GMT -5
By passions4everfan. It was the day of Kay's and Fox's wedding.Everything was perfect, in place.All the bridesmaids were in their beauitful blue dresses and the flower girls Maria and Endora were in little cute pink dresses.Kay was in her dressing room.The staff was fixing up her hair and makeup....Soon she was going to be Mrs.Fox Crane...She loved the sound of that...
Just as she was about to get out of her dressing room she saw an envelope laying on the table.It was adressed to her.She read:
Hello Kay.As you know today is your wedding day.But there are some things you should know before you marry Fox.You see he was paid to fall in love with you by his grandfather and then break your heart.So once you walk down that aisle get ready for a lifelong pain of misery.How could you marry a man so cruel?And if you believe this isn't true why don't you go ask prince charming?
Regards,
Looking out for you
Kay had tears forming down her face.Her mascara was slipping down.She thought maybe it was fake.She went immediatley to confront Fox.
Kay ran in her wedding gown up to Fox before the ceremony started.Everybody was watching.Fox turned around.
"What happened to you Kay?!Are you alright!?" "Am I alright!?What the hell is this Fox?" Fox grabbed the letter out of her hand and read. "Is this true Fox?Were you paid to marry me!!!"she yelled in anger.
Fox could see the tears coming down her beautiful face.He didn't want to hurt her.He loved her.So he had to confess.
"Kay..I love you, you know that...Its just that I was out of money even though I'm a Crane I wasted all my money on things and then I was desperate...So I approached my grandfather and he told me that I had to make you fall in love with me then marry you and break your heart...I didn't want to but he made me...But then once I got to know you I did fall in love with you!So I gave back his money and now here I am about to marry the love of my life..."
Kay slapped him. "I probably deserve that" "You bastard!You were paid to marry me!?" "But Kay I was just desperate but then I did fall in love with you!" "Well I'm sorry I can't marry a lying bastard like you." Kay took off her ring and gave it to him. "Who knows what else you've been lying to me about" "Kay please take this back...I love you" "Well I don't"
Everybody watched from afar. Ivy came running.She was happy as ever. {"I guess the weddings off".....she said in her mind}
Kay ran away into her dressing room. Fox went after her but Simone stopped him. "You've done enough....Crane"
Fox took the letter and tore it into pieces. He punched his hand into the door.. Tears were coming down his face. "Why me?Why can't I ever be happy!?"
Kay was in her dressing room thinking the same things.She was crying in her dad's arms......Kay dozed out of her flashback. "Why'd this all have to happen?" "Right now I could of had a family with Fox and Maria,maybe have children of our own..Why'd this have to happen?Why can't anything ever go right?!" Kay looked at her watch and realized she was out there too long.She went back to the restaurant. "Where have you been I've been worried sick about you." "Sorry Miguel.I just felt really hot and needed to be there a little longer to cool down." The champagne was on the table.Miguel poured some in Kay's glass. They both took a sip then clinged their glasses. "To us and life of happiness with each other and Maria" Kay put on a fake smile.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 23, 2007 15:41:06 GMT -5
Poor Kay, that chapter was sad.
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Post by Paulweeen on Apr 25, 2007 8:29:13 GMT -5
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Apr 28, 2007 20:37:27 GMT -5
Chapter seven: Regret and Fear What seemed forever the dinner finally ended. Kay's face was tired from forcing herself to smile throughout the whole time. "So our special night turned out to be nice" smiled Miguel while the odd looking couple stepped out of the french doors that lead to outside the restaurant. "Sure did" Kay nodded. She was thankful for the acting lessons that her mother made her take when she was a child. "I'm sorry I didn't tell you earlier but red really looks good on you--you basically look amazing." "Thanks Miguel..you don't look too bad yourself" Miguel chuckled. He turned to his gentlemen side and elegantly opened the front door of his old car for Kay to glide in. ------------------- Meanwhile a lonely Fox laid on his king sized matress thinking over about all the unfortunate events that took place in his whole 25 years of living. Why did he have to make that deal with his evil grandfather. He should of knew he was up to no good. For the first time since that doomed day of the supposely-wedding Fox felt millions of tears stroll down his cheek. His life was over--no more Kay--no more life, just him, pain, and misery. "I love you Kay, I always will" he whispered. He should of known that accepting his grandfathers deal to break Kay's heart for Crane money would only bring him Regret and Fear
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 29, 2007 11:57:11 GMT -5
Aww... More please?!
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Post by Paulweeen on May 1, 2007 10:49:43 GMT -5
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on May 1, 2007 16:25:50 GMT -5
this was by passions4everfan
Chapter 8: Thinking over things
Fox grabbed a tissue to wash up all the tears from his dreamy blue eyes.Fox got a call on his pager.He was needed at Crane Industries.
"Why now?"
Fox put his coat on and headed out the door.There was so much traffic out in the road.He turned on the radio.he kept changing stations cause each one had a song that reminded him of Kay....He finally reached his destination.He was up at C.I. till 1 am.He went downstairs to get a cup of coffee so he could stay awake.When he was down there he saw none other than Theresa Crane Miguel's brother.
Fox ignored her and bought his coffee.
Fox took another sip then went back to his office.Fox finally got off at 2:30am.He was out on the road again.As Fox was driving suddenly he saw a car coming his way.A drunk driver crashed into his car!
"BOOM"
Fox was trapped inside.He couldn't breath properly.He injured his leg. 10 minutes later an ambulance came rushing by and helicopters were every where recording Mr.Crane's accident.
Fox was rushed into the hospital.
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Across town Kay was in bed--with Miguel at his house..She couldn't get any sleep.She went to the fridge to get some hot chocolate.Kay flipped on the tv and saw the news.
"Behind me is where it all went down.Mr.Fox Crane landed himself in a car accident.He was rushed to the hospital.No word yet if he survived."
"Oh my gosh.Fox!I have to go see if hes alright!" Miguel came out---"The hell your not"
Kay turned around."What the?--Miguel?Fox was just in a car accident I have to go see if hes alright!" "After all whats happened you still care about the bastard.Did you forget what he did to you?He deserves that to happen to him.Besides he has his family for him over there.He doesn't need you.I need you back in my bed."
Kay couldn't say anything and just went back into their room.
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Post by tinka♥belle on May 1, 2007 16:30:03 GMT -5
Miggles is being a jerk. I love this, more please?!
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Post by Paulweeen on May 2, 2007 8:05:22 GMT -5
Come here Miguel !!!
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