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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 15, 2007 16:49:35 GMT -5
Okay!! Hold on let me post it!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 15, 2007 16:51:19 GMT -5
Another short chapter!Chapter four Fox and Kay were having a peaceful and romantic dinner in their beautifully set up room for the dinner. "I love you, Fox" "I love you too, want some strawberries?" Suddenly out of no where the door bell rang. "Who's out here at this time of the night?" Kay said kind of upset because she had a thought it would be Valerie to ruin her and Fox's romantic dinner and alone time by scolding him to come to work. "You want me to get it, honey?" Fox replied "No its fine, i'll get it" Kay quickly ran down the stairs, the faster she goes, the faster she can get back to her romance with Fox. She turned the door knob......"Oh my God! Its you! What are you doing here!?" Previews: Whitney pays a visit to Fox's office!
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 15, 2007 16:52:32 GMT -5
Uh-OH!!!!! Sounds like trouble!!!!!!!!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 15, 2007 16:53:42 GMT -5
Just for you I'll post another one!! But thats the last for tonight or I'll end up posting the whole 15 chapters I have and then you'll have to wait 1 million years for another one lmaoo
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 15, 2007 16:54:39 GMT -5
Awwww you so sweet!!!!!!! Thanks!!!!!!!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 15, 2007 16:56:24 GMT -5
Aww YW! Chapter five "MIGUEL!??!?!" Kay asked in shock. "Why are you so surprised to see me Kay?" Miguel replied. "You knows its just a little shocking to see you here" Kay stated nervously trying to make it seem not very nervous but it actually did turn out nervous. "So hows Maria doing and how about you Kay?" "Oh, were doing fine, we have a really good person taking care of both of us" Kay said proudly refering to Fox. "Yes, I know, Tabitha is great!" Kay didn't even bother to tell him who she was really talking about. "I'm sorry I haven't been sending money as much, its just that I'm really broke right now, plus I need it to look for Charity" Miguel said lying as he came for Kay and him to be together. "Oh yeah Charity, so why are you back, is this permanent? Have you found Charity? Or is this for good?" Kay asked wanting some answers. "It was time to come home to my family Kay, which is you and Maria and of course mama and papa and my siblings, Kay." Miguel replied. "You didn't answer my other question is this "visit" temp or permanent?" Kay asked. "KAY?! Whats taking you so long? Who's at the door?" yelled Fox all the way from the room. "Who was that Kay?Who's upstairs calling for YOUR name? Was that FOX CRANE?!" Miguel asked a puzzled Kay ((so the previews wasn't in this update but they will happen))
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 15, 2007 17:17:52 GMT -5
Love it Can't wait for more chapters!!!!!!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 15, 2007 17:19:24 GMT -5
Your back!! ! I'll post another one first thing when I wake up!! Promise.
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Post by luisismine on Mar 15, 2007 18:46:14 GMT -5
Oh I like this.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Mar 16, 2007 10:05:02 GMT -5
WAKE UP ELISE!! LOL I need more!! Loving this so far!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 16, 2007 10:58:32 GMT -5
The C-box still isn't working for me =[ I am going to go copy the chap. right now brb.
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 16, 2007 11:00:58 GMT -5
"In a matter of a fact it is" Kay replied nervously but somehow proudly in a way.
"Why is Fox CRANE doing here, with you?!Has he been hurting you?!I'm gonna beat--"
"You aren't doing anything to him and how did you get the feeling he's been hurting me cause all he's doing is treating me like a princess!"
"Your boyfriend?!"Miguel was getting really angry at this point, he tried to keep his bursting anger inside of him.
"You heard me!"
Just then Fox came downstairs wondering where all the yelling was coming from. "What's going on here?Is that you Miguel?"
"Yes it is Crane! Now back off! Shouldn't you be leaving now? Me and your "so-called" girlfriend need to talk WITHOUT you!"
"Woah! Miguel, how dare you speak to Fox that way! Say your sorry! And just to let you know, Fox prefers to be called fox, not Crane"
Miguel was about to start bashing Fox again but then he remembered he came back to get Kay, that was the plan so he had to play goodie goodie with Kay to win her heart. Miguel calmed himself down. "Your right Kay, your always right. Fox probably has been treating you like a princess. But can't you see Kay, i want to make up for all of it. be a family with Maria. I am sorry Crane...I mean Fox and I honestly take those words back.
Fox really didn't fall for the "act" but he also didn't want to cause any trouble so he played along. Fox had this really really really deep feeling Miguel was out to get Kay.
And he was right.
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Post by Kimberella on Mar 16, 2007 11:03:18 GMT -5
Errrrr Miggles and his wiggles!!!!!!
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Post by luisismine on Mar 16, 2007 11:06:36 GMT -5
Errrrr Miggles and his wiggles!!!!!! More please.
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Mar 16, 2007 11:10:03 GMT -5
Chapter 8 The night ended and morning came. Kay and Fox didn't continue their romantic night because of Miguel's appearence. Kay woke up and turned to find Fox laying right next to her. "7:31am" she whispered. She tapped on Fox's strong and muscular arm to get him awake. "Good Morning" "Good Morning" Fox then got changed with his suit and tie. "You don't have to go to work today honey" "Alrighty" Kay soon went downstairs and seeked Miguel and Maria there. Miguel was feeding Maria. "Good Morning" "Good Morning" Kay went over to her daughter and kissed one of her little chubby cheeks. "Good Morning my Angel" "Mama!" "So what do you have planned for your first day back, Miguel?" "Well first I want to say hello to my family then I am going to look for a job to support you and our beautiful Maria."Miguel replied starting to read a newspaper about job interviews. "Where are you planning to get a job at?" "I don't know maybe a janitor somewhere, its the only job nowadays." Kay almost choked on her orange juice. She gave Miguel a playful punch. "Don't joke like that ever again" she laughed. "No I really wasn't joking." Kay said nothing. Soon Fox came down all ready for work. "Hi my little cutie!" He said while walking to Maria and kissing her tiny fingers. "Dada!" Miguel was mad but didn't say a peep. Fox poured himself some coffee, kissed Kay, and said his goodbyes. He then took off for work. Kay was still worried about Visious Valerie but decided to go to her dad's next door. I wish i can tell you that Foxay was in perfect condition except for Valerie and Miguel but I can't because their is much more in store for Foxay. ((The previews about Whitney paying a visit to Fox's office will happen next update))
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