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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Jan 19, 2007 20:40:47 GMT -5
Granddaughter of one of the richest men in the world Fancy Crane walked into her home for the very first time in years. It felt so nice to finally be back in Harmony. When she opened the unlocked door to the mansion she automatically spotted her mother Ivy sitting down on the luxurious dining room sofa in the front of the mansion reading an fashion magazine, she seemed to be really into it because she didn't even notice Fancy was there.
"Mother! I'm home!" Fancy said gleefully and loud to a startled Ivy.
"Uhhh...Fancy? Is that you? What are you doing here in Harmony?!" asked a stunned Ivy.
"I'd expect a better "hello" but whatever. I am just visiting, I'll be leaving soon. So what's new?"
Ivy let out a sigh of relief. "A lot of things changed since you been gone. So when exactly are you leaving?"
"No idea. Do it even matter mother?" Maybe a month or two. I just can't believe grandfather didn't let you know I was coming. I mean, he's the one who convinced me to come."
Just then Alistair came out of one of the doors of the mansion. "Is that you, Fancy?!"
"Grampy!" Fancy ran into her grandfathers arms and gave him a long hug.
"How's my favorite granddaughter doing?" Alistair placed his hands on Fancy's shoulders.
"I'm great! It's so good to see you! How are you?"
"I'm fine as well. Why don't you go get ready for the dinner tonight that I planned for your return. I bought you a dress, it's on top of your bed in your room. I especially planned a special dinner just for you with all your family"
"Oh my gosh! Your so sweet! I'm going to go get ready and prepared for it!" She hurried upstairs to her bedroom. "Looks the same as it did the last time I stood here" she smiled. She couldn't wait to see Fox, father, and everybody that would be attending the dinner dedicated to her. She then saw the beautiful dress that Alistair bought for her. "Oh my god, it's gorgeous!" She said while picking it up. It's a navy blue dress with sequins running along the front towards the top of the dress. A lot of material was used to make it and Fancy could tell by how much it weighed. She was amazed and felt so special.
Meanwhile son of chief of police Noah Bennett sat on the living room sofa with his sister Kay and her soon to be husband, Fox Crane. They were just talking about random things.
"So what are you guys doing tonight?" asked Noah.
"Oh me and Fox are supposed to go to a dinner to celebrate Fox's sister Fancy's return. Why? Do you want to come?"
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Post by ♥Julie♥ on Jan 20, 2007 12:04:47 GMT -5
Great job so far!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Jan 20, 2007 16:11:45 GMT -5
"How could you be celebrating another Crane's return? You should be worrying more. Besides isn't that old sick bastard Alistair attending?"
"Oh come on, Noah, Fancy's one of the good Crane's like Fox. Just put aside the fact that Alistair's coming and come with us. It will be fun!"
"Oh whatever. Why do you want me to attend anyways? It's like it's a huge deal to you or something along the case" Noah sounded annoyed.
"It's certainly not a big deal for me. I just thought it would be nice for you to tag along with us, just think about it, a huge, fancy, free dinner. Now go get ready and prepared!" Kay scolded.
"Oh fine!" When he reached his bedroom upstairs he wondered why Kay longed for him to go so badly. It's not like he's going to meet the love of his life if he's there, right? Noah lifted his shirt to reveal his muscular and sexy body. He pulled on his closet door. "Hmmm...what should I wear tonight? Maybe something fancy...?" He questioned himself while looking around his tiny wardrobe.
Fancy has put her dress on with matching stunning shoes on. She keeps on reapplying her makeup over and over again. After all her family would be staring ar her for the first time in years. She longed to make sure this would be a wonderful reunion. A while later she figured she had enough makeup on. Her nails were perfectly painted. The color of her dress amd nails fit together so well. She had her hair up. She stood in front of her full length mirror and checked the back of her to make sure it was perfect. Fancy looked flawless. The dinner is supposed to begin at 7:30 and it was still only 6:45, she wondered what she would do in her spare time. She decided to go downstairs and just wait there or talk to anybody that was down there.
She was extremely eager for the dinner. Who knows maybe she'll meet somebody very sweet, charming, and handsome.....
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Post by ♥Julie♥ on Jan 20, 2007 16:18:28 GMT -5
more please!!
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Post by Kimberella on Jan 20, 2007 17:11:59 GMT -5
Great Job!!!!! Loved it!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Jan 20, 2007 21:31:27 GMT -5
Time flew by and guests for the dinner began to arrive one by one. The one that reached first is Ethan. "Is that you Fancy?"
Fancy spun around startled by the noise and turned to find her half brother standing there. "Ethan! It's so wonderful to see you! It's been so long--too long!" Fancy ran to his waiting arms.
"Fancy, I can't believe it! You have grown to be a gorgeous lady!" Ethan said wrapping his arms around her tightly.
Fancy giggled "Thanks Ethan. You are quite handsome yourself. So what are your thoughts about my dress?"
"Wow, it's beautiful, Fancy!" A smile appeared on his face while studying the gown.
"Grandfather had gotten it for me. I knew he knows my taste!" Fancy informed Ethan joyfully.
Ethan's smile formed into a frown knowing that she actually liked that beast Alistair.
Fancy didn't seem to notice the frown on his face. The only thing she noticed at the moment was two blue gorgeous eyes staring back at her. Her heart skipped a beat. It was kind of hard to believe how gorgeous and sexy he looked. Fancy wondered who he was, she didn't remember ever seeing him before she left for boarding school. Did she know him? Why was he attending her dinner? She soon seeked that he was with her brother Fox and his fiance Kay.
Fancy slowly walked towards the three of them.
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Post by Kimberella on Jan 21, 2007 20:02:16 GMT -5
Ooohhh more please!!
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Post by Paulweeen on Jan 22, 2007 8:48:32 GMT -5
Love it! Keep it up!
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Post by tinka♥belle on Jan 22, 2007 9:25:05 GMT -5
Awsome beginning!! More plz!!
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Feb 3, 2007 0:44:07 GMT -5
((I once again apologize for the long wait!))
What felt like forever Fancy finally reached the three of them. Her curiosity grew to who the guy is.
"Fancy!" Fox spreaded his arms expecting a warm hug.
"Fox! How are you?!" Fancy laid her arms around his neck.
"I'm doing great! As you already know from my previous emails Kay Bennett is my fiance." Fox informed her while pointing his index finger towards Kay.
"Very nice to meet you Kay! As you obviously know my name is Fancy Crane" Fancy introduced herself while extending her right arm.
"It's great to finally have the opportunity to meet you. Fox has told me so much about you." A smile appears across Kay's face while shaking Fancy's hand.
Then Fancy turned her attention to Noah. "...and who might this be?" She questioned while grinning.
"Oh I almost forgot! This is my brother Noah." Kay gleefuly introduced while waving her hand magically towards Noah staring right at Fancy's face.
Fancy seemed to be staring back. Kay waved her hand back and forth to Noah's face "NOAH!?"
"Huh?" Noah jumped turning his attention to Kay then turned it back to Fancy. "Oh, hello Miss Fancy Crane.." Gosh, is she gorgeous?! Wait no, Noah...you can't start going out with other girls at a time like this...it's way too soon from Kate! Noah thought in his mind.
"Hi Noah..nice to meet you" Fancy bit her lip with a nervous smile.
Noah returned the smile.
Noah..what a sexy name..man, he's even sexier up close!.. why am so nervous? I, Fancy Crane has never been nervous or shy with a guy...hmm..thats weird. Fancy thinks in her head.
Just looking at Noah's face made Fancy's knees want to collaspe. He's so seductive with his brown curls, muscular body, gorgeous smile, sexy voice, and thousands of things she can't think of currently.
Kay and Fox stand aside watching those two chatting, giggling, and smiling at each other.
"Hey Fox? You wanna know what I'm thinking?" A grin spreads on her face.
"What?"
"A game...that involves hooking up love birds..."
Fox automatically figured out what she was speaking about.
They both grinned while strolling to their seats.
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Post by Kimberella on Feb 4, 2007 12:09:18 GMT -5
Great job!!!! Love it!!
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Post by tinka♥belle on Feb 5, 2007 10:04:23 GMT -5
Love it!! More please!!
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Post by Paulweeen on Feb 6, 2007 9:21:17 GMT -5
More more!!!! lol... soon??? lol
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Feb 24, 2007 15:38:35 GMT -5
Sorry for the short AND lack of updates!!
"To Fancy Crane's return!" Ivy toasted as everybody lifted up their crystal glasses.
Fancy sat there blushing but not because of the heart warming toast but to the guy who was sitting right across of her seat. Noah smiled back.
Just then some girl sitting beside Noah, who Fancy didn't have a clue to who she was, began to flirt with Noah. She failed to listen to their conversation was but based on the lady's face it seemed to be like she was seducing him.
Fancy morphed into being joyful to jealous immediantly. She planned to interrupt them even though Noah didn't look to interested in her at all. "Soo...um..Noah.."She had to think quickly "I know..we just met..and all..but..umm would you like to hang out maybe sometime tomorrow?...for fun.."
"Did you just not see us talking" The woman hissed with a attitude.
"Well excuse me missy, for your info---
"Fancy stop. You to Melissa." Noah interrupted. "Anyways to answer your question I'd love to hang out with you tomorrow....as friends" He shyly smiled.
Fancy smiled "Fabulous!"
Melissa put her hands on her hips Why can't I ever get Noah? First it was that bitch Kate and now this spoiled brat? You got to be kidding me.....
Finally the big dinner arrived with all kinds of food. All the guests plates were filled with delicious food. After everybody finished with that and the desert everybody began to go home. Fancy hugged Ethan, Fox, and Kay goodbye. When Noah's turn came he shockingly gave her a hug.
"Oops..umm sorry about that"
"Not a problem"Well I guess I'll see you tomorrow at12:30ish"?
"Great!"
Ad they said goodbye to eacher other Fox and Kay waited for them in the corner.
"We didn't even do anything and the plan's working perfectly?" Fox whispered to Kay a bit confused.
"I know...this is easier then I ever imagined"
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Post by tinka♥belle on Feb 26, 2007 12:05:14 GMT -5
Awsome update & don't worry about it!! I'm the worst at updating!!
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