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Post by luisismine on Nov 13, 2007 19:23:16 GMT -5
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Post by doodlesmom2 on Nov 13, 2007 22:45:21 GMT -5
What's up with Pilar's sudden visit ?? Gwen .... so needs bitched !! Showing up to tell Theresa she pregnant ... biotch!! Hope she sinks like the ... hmmmmm......Wondering which spearm bank Gwen used ..... or in how many months she can claim she had a miscarriage ?? ....Ethan's set just grew a little bigger ....Loved it when he told her " watch me!" Fantastic !! it!! More pleaseeeee ;D!!
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Post by therethanfan5 on Nov 14, 2007 4:50:54 GMT -5
love it more plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Post by Kimberella on Nov 18, 2007 14:52:25 GMT -5
Chapter 12Walking around town I just try and clear my head,seems like I have been walking for days. I don't even know if this is what I want.Maybe living in harmony isn't what is going to make me happy. Sitting down on a bench I take the huge ring out of my purse and slide it on my finger.The light from the docks makes it glimmer and sparkle. "Maybe I should just go home.." "Now why would you want to go and do something like that?" I look up and see Ethan standing in front of me. "What are YOU doing here?" "Looking for you....I have been for hours now,where the hell have you been,i've sent you about a thousand text messages." "Yeah,I know." "You know? Do you know that you had me worried sick?I was just about to call Luis,when I saw you sitting here." "Umm,last time I checked,I didn't need to let you know what I was doing 24/7,and where is Gwen? Shouldn't you two be off shopping for cribs or carseats or something?" "I don't know,at home I guess.I left her pretty angry this afternoon after I found out that she had stopped by and paid you a visit....I'm sorry,I wanted to tell you.Thats why I wanted to meet today." Trying to fight back my emotion I stand and gather myself to leave. "No need for any explanation..it's not like were together or anything..i'm really happy for you." "yeah..I know,but last night.." he moves in closer to me and the smell of his cologne makes my heart start to race. "Was JUST a kiss...that's all." I try to not give into the urge to grab hold of him and kiss those lips again.And it was so much more than just a simple kiss. "Really? Because I thought that you felt the same thing that I did...something special." "Well,even if I did,it really doesn't matter now does it?" "Yes.It does Theresa.It matters to me." "Look,I should really get going.My family is probly worried and..." Before I could even finish my sentence he grabbed me and pulled me into him kissing me like his life depended on it.I loved the way I felt melting in his arms.But I knew I had to stop now or there would be no turning back. "No..stop Ethan.We can't do this.I really got to go." as hard as it is walking away from him I wonder if I am making the biggest mistake of my life.
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Post by ♥ Elannie ♥ on Nov 18, 2007 15:08:08 GMT -5
Oh you know that these two are supposed to be together!! I sooooo need another update!! Thanks Kimbre, that was great!! ;D
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Post by luisismine on Nov 18, 2007 15:27:28 GMT -5
and :-/ I need more missy...get typing.
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Post by Kimberella on Nov 18, 2007 16:11:49 GMT -5
Chapter 13
Quietly tip toeing through the front door trying not to wake everyone I hear somebody in the kitchen.
"Mama?"
"Oh Mija..you scared me."
"I'm sorry..." I take a seat next to her at the table.
"What are you doing up so late....is everything okay?"
"I was waiting on you.AND,I couldn't fall asleep so.."
"Okay,it is time for you to SPILL! Now tell me what is going on mama."
"Guess I may as well,I already told Luis.."
"What is it? What is going on with you?"
"John and I are getting a Divorce .Two nights ago I caught him with Elizabeth in his office..NOT working."
"His secretary? What a Pig. i'm so sorry mama."
"No,I think it is all for the better Mija...i think that deep down I have known for awhile now.But I just didn't want to accept it."
"So what now? What are you going to do?"
"Well...actually.I did something rather drastic today."
"And that would be...?"
"I bought a house...here in harmony,right down the street as a matter of fact."
"Are you serious mama? You are ready to up and leave california for good?"
"Yes..yes I am Mija,I am ready for change in my life."
"yeah...I know the feeling."
"What about you,I thought that you were already in love with harmony,and you were ready to stay here...has something changed?"
"Everything has changed mama..I don't wanna talk about it tonight though,maybe in the morning?"
"Wish I could..I am leaving early in the morning,seems I mhave some things to work out with John,but i'll be back by Friday."
"Okay,well make sure you call me as soon as you arrive.let us know you got there safe and sound."
"Okay Mija,I will."
"And TRY to get some sleep would ya?"
"I will,promise."
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Post by therethanfan5 on Nov 18, 2007 16:47:47 GMT -5
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww beautiful chapter keep going plz make ethan stay with theresa
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Post by luisismine on Nov 18, 2007 17:11:51 GMT -5
and this fic...you can post more any time soon.
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Post by backstreetboysfan on Nov 18, 2007 18:23:55 GMT -5
Aww...I love it so far...Plz soon
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Nov 19, 2007 20:34:27 GMT -5
loving it poor theresa =(
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Post by doodlesmom2 on Nov 19, 2007 22:57:24 GMT -5
My heart breaks for Theresa ........ it!! great story !! more pleaseeeeeee ;D!!
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Post by Kimberella on Nov 20, 2007 21:43:47 GMT -5
Chapter 14A couple days had passed,it took all I had in me to keep avoiding all of Ethan messages. I know that it was killing him that I was ignoring them.But it's the only way i'll be able to forget about him...and those feelings. Bright and early and my phone is already ringing. "Now whoever this is MUST not know me because it is not even past 9.." I search through my purse otherwise known as the big black hole to see it is mama calling. "Hello?" "Mija...thank god!" "Mama..whats wrong,are you okay?" "Yes.i'm fine,just airport delays..I need you to do me a HUGE favor." "Of course anything,What is it?" "I need you to go and meet with the contractor at the house today,because it looks like there is no way I am making it back to Harmony in time to be there." "Okay,no problem Mama..is this contractor cute?" "Actually I have'nt even spoke with him,your brother set it all up." "Okay....i'll meet him anyways,Just for you." "Well thank you Mija,and pleeease don't be late..okay? Be there by 11! I love you and i'l be seeing you soon." "Okay mama,love you too,have a safe trip!" hanging up the phone I realize I had better get my butt into gear if I wanna make it on time.
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Post by luisismine on Nov 20, 2007 22:18:07 GMT -5
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Post by ♥ Elannie ♥ on Nov 20, 2007 22:24:54 GMT -5
I loved it, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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