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Post by lancylover918 on Jul 17, 2007 11:13:10 GMT -5
Luis and Fancy are in high school and Luis is the popular and handsome quarterback and Fancy is the beautiful shy student who no one really notices. Luis' friends are trying to get him a date for the homecoming game. There is a huge line of girls trying to be Luis' date. Luis is very embarrassed and wants to find a date his way and get to know the girl. While one girl is talking about why she should be his date he looks over her shoulder and sees Fancy who just dropped all of her books down the stairs and he thinks that she is the most beautiful woman he has ever seen.
Luis turns to his friend
Luis: Who is that girl Rick: Oh thats Fancy Crane her family is loaded but she is quiet Luis: Shes cute Rick: Ya whatever
Luis goes over to help Fancy with her books
Luis: Hi Im Luis Fancy: I know Im Fancy Luis: Here let me help you Fancy: I dont need your help thank you Luis: Im sorry did I do something to offend you Fancy: Well just look at what your doing to those girls. Making them parade around you until you pick the best choice. No offense but I think you should meet someone in your own time and get to know that person. Luis: Its funny you say that Fancy: I dont mean to be rude but I really have to go Luis: Hey wait
They walk together
Luis: Would you like to come to the game with me and then maybe get a bite to eat afterward Fancy: Um I dont know Luis: Please come on Fancy: Ok Ill meet you at the game Luis: Great Ill see you there
Up next: Fancy goes to the game and finds herself falling hard for Luis. Luis is falling for fance but will a jelous girl stop him before its too late
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Post by lancylover918 on Jul 17, 2007 11:13:44 GMT -5
Fancy goes and watches Luis in the game where he scores 4 touch downs and wins the game
Luis is swarmed by cheer leaders and team mates after the game but he pushes through them and runs to Fancy
Luis: Hey Fancy: Hey Congratulations Luis: Thanks Im glad you came Fancy: Me too
(They lock eyes for a while)
Sheridan the head cheerleader gets jealous of how Luis is looking at Fancy considering they had just broken up
Sheridan: Luis can you come over here Luis: Um Im busy right now Sheridan: Please Luis: (to Fancy) Ill be right back Fancy: Ok ill be right here
Sheridan: Luis I dont want you talking to Fancy anymore Luis: Wait what Sheridan: You heard me
Fancy turns to her friend who was sitting next to her
Fancy: Oh my gosh isnt he the cutest Esme: Oh ya and he is totally into you Fancy: You think Esme: Did you see the way he kept looking at you during the game and how right afterward he ran strait to you. Fancy he really likes you
Luis: Sheridan you dont get to tell me who I can or cant talk to we broke up and even then that still is wrong Sheridan: Ya but I just dont want to see you get hurt Luis: By Fancy... Have you met Fancy she is the sweetest person I know and she tells you how she is feeling instead of holding it in and I really like that Sheridan: Luis You know you still have feelings for me Luis: Sheridan just stop... I dont know Fancy that well but I really would like to get to know her so just dont do anything to mess this up
Luis runs back to Fancy
Luis: Hey Im going to shower and change and then Ill meet you for our date Fancy: ok that sound good Luis: Ok see you in a few Fancy: ok
Fancy is walking and smiling all the way to the parking lot where Luis was going to meet her. She runs into Sheridan
Fancy: Oh Hi Sheridan Good job at the game with your um cheering and all Sheridan: Oh dont act all sweet and inocent like you didnt steal Luis away from me Fancy: Sheridan I didnt think you and Luis were still together Sheridan: Well Luis still belongs with me Fancy: No Sheridan he ended it you need to accept that Sheridan: You B****
Sheridan shoved Fancy against the brick wall where Fancy hit her head and it started to bleed and Fancy was knocked unconcious
Luis was just walking out of the locker room very excited when he sees Sheridan throw Fancy against a wall and Fancy started bleeding
Luis: SHERIDAN!!!!!!!!!
UP next: Luis has something to say to Sheridan and Fancy is not sure she can still date Luis with Sheridan in the picture
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Post by lancylover918 on Jul 17, 2007 11:14:12 GMT -5
Fancy is in the hospital with a concussion. Luis has been by her side all day and she is able to come out
Luis: I am so sorry Fancy. this is all my fault Fancy: Luis dont feel bad its Sheridans fault Luis: Your so sweet Fancy: Luis Im just not comfortable with this... well us Luis: What do you mean Fancy: I dont know if I can date you Luis: Wait where is this coming from Fancy: If Sheridan is still in you life I just dont think this can work Luis: Fancy, Sheridan is not in my life Fancy: Well she doesnt seem to think so Luis: Fancy I promise you nothing like this will ever happen again Fancy: Really Luis: Yes Fancy: Pinky promise Luis: Cross my heart Fancy: Ok
Fancy is out of the hospital and is resting so Luis decides to take a little trip over to Sheridans place
Luis: Sheridan Open Up!! Sheridan: Luis oh you came back Luis: No I came to tell you that our insane Sheridan: What Luis: You come close to Fancy again I swear! Sheridan: Luis dont be like this Luis: Dont ever come near her ever again
Luis storms out and runs to check on Fancy
Up next: Luis and Fancy have a hot study date in the Library and Sheridan has a little talk with Ivy
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Post by luisismine on Jul 17, 2007 11:18:00 GMT -5
More please.
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Post by ♥Sam'sGirl/Spike'sHo on Jul 17, 2007 11:27:38 GMT -5
Lovin it!! More please!
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Post by lancylover918 on Jul 17, 2007 11:33:47 GMT -5
Luis and Fancy are "studying" in the Library for a quiz in History.
Luis is kissing Fancy's neck while she is trying to study the Plague.
Fancy: Luis (Giggling) Luis! Stop we need to concentrate. Luis: Come on Fancy Fancy: No Dont give me that look. we need to study Luis: Ok Fine Fancy: Good Luis: So wait The plague started in.....
(Luis is leaning over Fancy to get the notes when she had the overwhelming urge to kiss him. So she grabbed his neck and pulled him to her)
Luis was taken by such surprise they tumbled off of the couch while never letting go of one another (body or lips)
They started making out on the ground when Sheridan runs around the corner
Sheridan: I heard something fall and wanted to check it ...... ( she is cut off by the image that was displayed before her)
Sheridan: Luis Fancy Stop
Luis and Fancy were too caught up in their lip lock to hear her
So instead of standing there and yelling at them to stop Sheridan ran over to the wall and pulled the fire alarm
Luis and Fancy continued their make out session on the floor while the water squirted down on them from the ceiling.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Sheridans POV
Seeing as her tactic didnt work she decided to have a little talk with Ivy about Fancy and Luis
Ivy: So Sheridan you wanted to talk to me about Fancy Sheridan: Thats right, I wanted to tell you that she has been spending a lot of time with Luis Lopez Fitzgerald Ivy: Your point Sheridan: He is an untrusworthy, poor, and lying man Ivy: Sheridan, didnt you date him for a while Sheridan: Why do you think that I ended it Ivy: Well from what Fancy has told me about Luis he is a nice young man Sheridan: They why were they caught in the Library on top of one another Ivy: DOING WHAT? Sheridan: That has yet to be determined Ivy: Well I appreciate this little talk and I will talk with Fancy Sheridan: Oh and I took the pleasure of getting this for Fancy
She threw a paper bag at Ivy Ivy opened the bag to find a home pregnancy test
Up next: Ivy and Fancy lash it out over Luis. Their talk has some terrible consequences
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Post by luisismine on Jul 17, 2007 14:18:43 GMT -5
on Sher.
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Post by lancylover918 on Jul 17, 2007 16:16:34 GMT -5
Do you like it?
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Post by luisismine on Jul 17, 2007 17:11:28 GMT -5
Yes I do.
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Post by backstreetboysfan on Jul 18, 2007 11:19:33 GMT -5
I love it so far....Plz update soon
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Post by lancylover918 on Jul 19, 2007 15:40:42 GMT -5
Luis and Fancy have been going out for a while and just came home from a date when Ivy interrupts their good night kiss.
Fancy: I had a really good time. Thank you Luis Luis: Im glad and I had a good time too Fancy: So I guess this is good night Luis: Good night ( he leans and kisses her)
The kiss gets pretty heated when Ivy walks out
Ivy: Fancy! Get in here
Fancy: Mom hold on Im busy Luis: No its ok good night (he kisses her cheek) I love you Fancy: I love you too, bye
Fancy almost dances into her house she is so happy
Ivy: How long have you been going out Fancy: About a two months Ivy: And you already are saying I love you, well me and your father... Fancy: Have never said I love you Ivy: Thats beside the point, Fancy I dont want you going out with this boy anymore Fancy: Why, i mean have you even met Luis Ivy: Ive heard enough about him Fancy: From who Ivy: Sheridan came over here and filled me in about you to. Fancy: What about us, all we do is spend time together Ivy: Oh is that all that you do Fancy: Yes Ivy: What about the Library floor and outside when I broke it up you too were about to go have a little party in the back of his truck Fancy: Mother dont be gross. So we kiss a little bit whats the big deal. Luis would never pressure me into anything Ivy: If you dont end it I will send you back to bording school Fancy: You cant do that Ivy: Yes I can
Fancy runs up to her room and slams the door
Up next: Luis and Fancy have a sweet talk in the girls bathroom of their school
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Post by luisismine on Jul 19, 2007 15:42:43 GMT -5
on Sher &Ivy.More please.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on Jul 22, 2007 22:38:13 GMT -5
aww this cute i need more =)
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Post by tinka♥belle on Aug 15, 2007 15:12:26 GMT -5
Sheridan
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Post by ♥Rina♥ on Aug 20, 2007 9:25:20 GMT -5
OK...I'm not the biggest Lancy fan...but I really like this!
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