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Post by lancylover918 on May 14, 2007 20:33:08 GMT -5
Hey guys this is another Lancy Fanfic. It is kind of a spin off of Grease. Here it is:
Luis and Fancy met at the beach and immediately hit it off but will they stay together after vacation or will they cross paths again.
L: Miguel I don’t want to go to the beach M: Come on Luis you cant be cooped up in your room all day. Plus there will be hot babes L: Fine but only for the babes M: Lets go
Fancy is with Esme for Vacation
Fancy: Esme Im going for a jog see you later Esme: Fancy you know better than to wake me before 5 in the afternoon Fancy: Sorry I forgot Esme: Leave!
Miguel and Luis are on the beach kind of laying out
Fancy runs by and catches Luis’ eye
Luis: Who is that Miguel: Who? Luis: The runner Miguel: Oh Nice choice bro Luis: Shut up
Luis pretends not to care when really he is dying to know who his mystery woman is.
Fancy has just finished running when she is getting a water bottle at the snack shack near the beach
Luis was watching her and sees her get a drink
Luis: Miguel its getting hot I need to get a drink Miguel: Whatever
Luis walks up to Fancy and she is in shock of how hot he is
Luis: Hey Im Luis Fancy: Fancy Luis: I saw you running Fancy: Oh ya? Luis: Ya you looked good
Fancy gives him a wierd look Luis: I mean... um your running looked good Fancy: right Luis: Well maybe ill see you later Fancy: If your lucky ( she leaves him speechless)
Luis: I have to know more about her
Fancy: I have to see him again
Up next: Fancy and Luis meet again and sparks fly
uis is completely obsessed in finding out more about Fancy.[ (What was her last name, What kind of food does she like, What kind of men is she into) All sorts of questions went through his head and he had to find out. That morning he got up for a jog hoping to run into Fancy
To his luck she was running also
Fancy: What now your stalking me Luis: No Im a police officer I have to stay into shape Fancy: What was the Police Officer add on supposed to impress me Luis: Why does it Fancy: Maybe
It gets quiet except for their corresponding breathing
Fancy: So who was that guy you were with Luis: My brother Miguel why Fancy: hes cute Luis: That supposed to make me jelous Fancy: Does it Luis: Maybe
Again it gets quiet until
Fancy: RACE YOU TO THE DOCKS Luis: Fancy wait Fancy was already sprinting toward the docks
Luis runs fast but still cant catch up to Fancy
Fancy is waiting for Luis and when he finally gets there.......
Luis: jeez u can run fast Fancy: I like to be in shape Luis: No problem there
They are both still panting and looking into each others eyes
Fancy goes up to Luis and grabs his neck and roughly pulls his lips to hers
They kiss passionitly for a while and they both dont want to stop
Luis: Wow Fancy: Meet me back here tommorrow afternoon
Before Luis could get an answer out she was already running away
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Post by luisismine on May 15, 2007 6:07:24 GMT -5
Lancy.More please.
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Post by Kimberella on May 15, 2007 7:41:13 GMT -5
LOVIN this already!!! can't wait for more!!!
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Post by lancylover918 on May 16, 2007 16:05:29 GMT -5
Luis is laying in bed thinking about Fancy. I cant wait. He has to see her again. Fancy is laying in bed and wants to see Luis. I have to see him again.
Luis runs to Fancy's villa where she is staying and knocks on her window.
Fancy runs to Luis' hotel and knocks on his door
Esme answers Fancy's window and sees Luis.
Esme: this must me my lucky day. Prince charming has come Luis: Hey is um Fancy there Esme: Oh corse Hot guys come for Fancy Luis: No i mean yes im here for Fancy is she here Esme: No she ran out just a minute ago
Meanwhile
Miguel answers the door and sees Fancy
Miguel: Hey ur that runner my brother had his eye on Fancy: Ya is Luis here Miguel: No he just ran out a minute ago
They both run out and are caught up in their own thoughts they dont see each other and run right into each other
Luis: Fancy! I was looking everywhere for you Fancy runs to Luis and kisses him Luis kisses her back
Fancy: Ive wanted to do that since we stoped this after noon Luis: Good were on the same page They kiss again
Luis: how did this happen Fancy: What happen Luis: You and me. I mean yesterday I didnt even know who you were Fancy: I know but im glad it happened
Fancy and Luis have been going strong for a while now and summer is almost over what will they do
Fancy and Luis are kissing on the beach and Fancy suddenly stops
Fancy: Luis Luis: Ya (obviously wanting to kiss more. He kisses her neck) Fancy: Luis wait Luis Stop Luis: WHy whats wrong Fancy: Luis what are we going to do Luis: Right now? We should do more of this ( he grabs her and kisses her)
With any other guy Fancy would have stopped him but Luis was not any other guy he had this power over her that was so wonderful. She kept kissing him but remebered what she had to saty
Fancy: Luis are we going to be together after the summer Luis: what do you mean Fancy: You live in hamony and I live in new york how are we going to see each other Luis: Here take this (he gives her his high school ring) Fancy: Luis what is this Luis: its my ring I want you to have it. If you wear it we will never forget about it Fancy: Here take my gold chain (She takes off her necklace and gives it to him. For any other man a necklace would look weird but it looked down right sexy on Luis. Luis: There as long as we wear these we will always be together and there is always chrismas and easter and spring and next summer and the phone. Fancy: We wil talk every day Luis: Definitly
Up next: Fancy and Luis have to say goodbye but will they meet again?
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Post by luisismine on May 16, 2007 16:07:34 GMT -5
They better.I'm enjoying this and can't wait for more.
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Post by tinka♥belle on May 18, 2007 9:30:18 GMT -5
Great job
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Post by lancylover918 on May 19, 2007 22:47:27 GMT -5
Luis and Fancy have to say goodbye and Fancy is not looking forward to it
Fancy: Oh luis I dont want this summer to be over Luis: Trust me Fance I know but we will talk everyday and see eachother weekends and holidays Fancy: I know but it wont be the same
Fancy starts to lightly cry and Luis grabs her and gives her one he11 of a kiss They break apart and Fancy leans into Luis' chest and he wraps his arms around her
Fancy: Bye Luis Luis: hey lets not say goodbye lets say see you later Fancy smiles: See you later Luis: See you later They kiss one more time
Miguel: Luis come on Esme: Fancy lets go
Fancy: I guess we have to go Luis: Ok one more They kiss again
Luis: See you later Fancy: See you later ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Luis is lying in bed wishing he were with Fancy Fancy is lying in bed wishing she were with Luis
They both pick up the phone and call each other only to find the other line was busy
Luis: Figures she has a life and isnt lying around thinking about me Fancy: I am so dumb to think he would be home thinking about me
Fancys parents: Fancy can you come here Fancy: Ya Fancys parents: We have something to tell you Fancy: What Fancys parents: Due to your dads job we have to move Fancy: Mom! Dad! my life is here! all of my friends are here Fancys parents: Were sorry but thats the way it has to be Fancy: FINE
Fancy was so upset and really wanted to talk to Luis but knew she couldnt
Up next: Fancy and Luis meet again but is Luis the same
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Post by lancylover918 on May 20, 2007 14:54:59 GMT -5
Fancy and her parents are in their new house unpacking
Fancys mom: Fancy why dont you go to the school to get to know some people Fancy: Fine mom whatever can get me out of this house Fancys mom: What was that? Fancy: Nothing im going
Fancy is walking around and meets a girl named Stacey and they immediatly hit it off Fancy tells her all about Luis and Stacey is surprised
Stacey: Wait what was his name Fancy: Luis, Luis Lopez Fitzgerald and he was the hottest, nicest, sexiest, most caring man I have ever met Stacey: Wait I have a surprise for you Fancy: What Stacey: Follow me
They arrive at a park in a basketball game A few girls are there cheering for the players
Fancy: Stacey why did you take me here Stacey: Look closely at the players
Fancy looks and sees Miguel and sure enough next to Miguel was Luis
Fancy: Oh My God!
The game just ended and Fancy is just standing there with her mouth wide open staring at Luis Luis looks over at Stacey and sees Fancy and he is just amazed
Fancy: LUIS! Luis: FANCY!
She runs over to him and kisses him HARD He grabs her and kisses her back
They are having a hot make out session right there and all of the guys are clearing their throats
Luis breaks apart and looks around at the guys Fancy looks at Luis and sees that something is wrong
Fancy: What? Luis: What oh um nothing He backs away from her a little bit
Fancy: Luis whats wrong arnt you glad im here? Luis: Of cors.......Well sure what ever Fancy: Luis what is wrong with you Luis: Nothing baby. Its hard to keep some of you strait Fancy: What do you mean? Luis: I belive your number 27. Maybe 28 ( He gets high fived by his friends) Fancy: Oh so youve been dating other girls Luis: Yeah why Fancy: Oh nothing just when you gave me this ring I thought we were kind of together Luis: Oh that cheap thing I give that to all the ladies (Obviously lying but trying to stay in with his friends) Fancy: Oh really. (She takes off the ring and throws it at him) Luis: Fancy what are you doing Fancy: If its so cheap I wont miss it. Luis: No its ok you can keep it ( he trys to put it back on her finger but she wont let him) Fancy: Luis dont touch me! I thought you were different but I guess I was wrong. Im sorry that we ever met
Fancy runs off and is followed by Stacey but not before Stacey runs up to Luis and slaps him
Luis' friends look at him like his is an idiot
Luis' Friend: Luis, she is fine! How did you let her get away Luis: No girl gets me whipped Luis' Friend: You get whipped for that kind of girl. Your even the cherry
Luis looks so sad about Fancy Fancy is lying in bed crying over Luis
Up next: Luis goes to extremes to get Fancy back but has she already moved on?
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Post by lancylover918 on May 20, 2007 20:57:58 GMT -5
Fancy: I just cant believe Luis acted like that. Its just so not him Stacey: Maybe the Luis you met at the beach is the different harmony luis Fancy: Well you knew Luis when hes here what is he like Stacey: Well I never knew him he is mostly with the popular crowd Fancy: Enough luis talk I am over him Stacey: Ya riiiigggghhhhttttt Fancy: I am really! I have my eye on a new guy Stacey: Ohhhhhhh Who? Fancy: I think his name was Noah, Noah Bennett Stacey: Oh You like Noah Fancy: Ya is that ok Stacey: Oh well yeah its just I like Noah also Fancy: Oh Stacey I dont want to move in on your man Stacey: Thanks Fancy
Luis is at home thinking about Fancy and decides to call her
Fancy: Hold on Stacey I have another phone call; Hello Luis: Fancy Oh good you picked up Fancy: Who is this Luis: Come on Fance Its me Fancy: Sorry I dont talk to jerks and oh ya dont ever call me fance again Luis: Fancy wait dont hang up! Fancy: Luis what do you want? Luis: I wanted to say Im sorry! That wasnt me Fancy: Oh yeah right Luis: Come on you know me Fancy: No I thought I new you. I thought you were my prince charming my knight in shining armor You were the kindest most caring man I had ever met and you took that away from me today Luis: Fancy I am all of those things Fancy: No your not *She hangs up*
Luis is so frustrated at himself he throws the phone against the wall Luis: I have to get her back
Luis runs over to Fancy's new house only to find her being dropped off by Ben Harris They kiss goodnight and that drives Luis crazy
Luis takes two rocks and throws them against Fancy's window and she doesnt answer Luis climbs up Fancy's pipe and scales the side of her house and taps on her window
She opens it up and see Luis standing there with flowers and her heart stops
Fancy: Luis what are you doing here? Luis: Fancy I was an idot and I am so sorry but I want you back. I want to hold you and I want to kiss you and well long story short..... I love you Fancy Crane I love you Fancy: meet me outside (Fancy is near to tears and she runs down the steps out the door and into Luis' arms
Luis holds onto Fancy and never wants to let go. Fancy looks up at him and smiles
Fancy: Luis.... I love you too Luis: Im glad Fancy: Oh yeah and I want you to call me Fance Luis: I love you Fance
Luis: Fancy I am so sorry Fancy: You hurt me so bad Luis: I know its just my friends bring something out of me Fancy: Luis if you love me you have to treat me right Luis: I know and I will. Here take this back He hands her his ring and puts it on Luis: Dont take it off Fancy: I wont
They kiss and stay that way for a long time
Up next: Fancy and Luis are staying strong until one dance marathon changes everything
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Post by luisismine on May 21, 2007 13:52:11 GMT -5
can't wait for more.
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Post by lancylover918 on May 25, 2007 19:34:29 GMT -5
Luis and Fancy were getting ready for the dance when Fancy gets a strange message
Fancy: Hey its from Luis
Message: Hey um Fancy I mean Fance um I cant make it to the dance tonight I have um studying to do. and dont call me my mom is um sleeping
Fancy: Did his voice sound weird?
Luis gets a message
Luis: Its from Fancy
Message: Um Hey Luis I um cant go to the dance Im busy with my hair and I have a zit. Oh and dont call me our phone is broken
Luis: Thats weird Fancy doesnt usually care about vanity stuff
Luis and Fancy still decide to go to the dance even though they cant go with each other. Luis' buddies are nagging him about not dancing with Sheridan Crane (The second hottest girl in school next to Fancy, She also had a huge crush on Luis)
Luis: No guys I dont want to dance with anyone Guys: Except for his beloved Fancy Luis: Cut it out
Fancy's friends are grouped up and they all want her to dance with John Hurth( the second hottest guy in school)
Fancy: Well maybe one dance wont hurt
After some convincing Luis decides to dance with sheridan
In mid dance Fancy and Luis look around and lock eyes
Fancy: Luis What? Luis: Fancy what are you? Fancy: Oh I get it Luis: What Fancy: You told me you were studying thinking I woulnt go to the dance and they you could come with Sheridan Luis: Ok first of all thats not true and second what are you doing here Fancy: What do you mean? Luis: You had a zit or something with your hair Fancy: What are you talking about Luis: Oh dont act all innocent I knew something was going on with you and Ben the night we got back together Fancy: I cant even look at you Luis: Right back at you
Ben: So far the plan is in action
Up next: Fancy and Luis talk and Bens plan backfires
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on May 25, 2007 19:40:54 GMT -5
more please!
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Post by luisismine on May 26, 2007 13:41:39 GMT -5
Yvetter needs more.....The sooner the better.
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Post by luisandfancy4ever on May 27, 2007 18:05:56 GMT -5
i need a update! I am dying to know what happens. this is so good.
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Post by lancylover918 on May 27, 2007 19:05:37 GMT -5
Fancy and Luis are still mad at each other but Fancy knows that Luis is so stubborn he will never talk to her so she goes to him and decides to talk
Fancy rings the doorbell
*Ding Dong*
Pilar: Hello, oh hello Fancy are you here for Luis Fancy: Yes Pilar I am we are kind of in a fight right now Pilar: I will go grab him Fancy: Well ... if it is ok i would like to just surprise him Pilar: Oh well yes i guess that is ok
Fancy goes back to Luis' room and knocks on his door
Luis: What Fancy knocks again Luis: What! Fancy knocks again Luis: Miguel if you dont....(he opens the door and see Fancy) Fancy: Hi Luis Luis: Fancy what do you want Fancy: Ok i know you are mad at me and dont get me wrong i am still mad at you but i think we need to talk Luis: What ever Fancy: Can I come in Luis: What? Oh ya come in Fancy: Thanks
Fancy looks around and there are a bunch of pictures of them together at the beach and at school and every were else
Fancy picks up a picture of them kissing on the beach and smiles
Fancy: We had fun at the beach Luis: Oh ya I guess Fancy: Come on Luis admitt it you missed me; ok just a little bit? Luis: Oh corse I missed you Fance I love you Fancy: I love you too *They walk closer and closer to each other untill Passions takes over* *They kiss* Luis: this still doesnt make any since or explain why you went to the dance Fancy: I got a message from you saying that you werent going to the dance Luis: I got the same message from you Fancy: i never sent you a message Luis: here listen I still have it
*he plays it* Fancy: Luis you know that is not my voice Luis: I thought that sounded a little odd but maybe you were sick Fancy: Luis i never sent you that but here is your message LUis: Ok lets hear it *she plays it* Luis: Now come on Fancy that sounds nothing like me Fancy: Something weird is going on Luis: Lets look at the number and see if we can recognise it Fancy: Good idea
555-0129
Fancy: Thats Bens number Luis: You have been here 2 months and you already know guys numbers Fancy: No Luis I just know because he called me on that number Luis: That is weird Fancy: Well obviously he wanted us to see eachother at the dance and break up Luis: So he could have you Fancy: What are we going to do Luis: Get even
Up next: Bens plan works or so he thinks
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