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Post by Kimberella on Apr 2, 2007 15:55:03 GMT -5
Loved the update!!! Kay has battle ahead of her!!!!
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Post by Paulweeen on Apr 3, 2007 7:24:32 GMT -5
Hummmmm wonder whats gonna happen!!!! MORE please!
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 3, 2007 8:18:09 GMT -5
WOW Kay's going to wake up soon & fight for her man, lol.
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
Short Story
Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Apr 7, 2007 16:06:07 GMT -5
Chapter 14
Kay stormed into the house, and walked into the kitchen were Tabitha was stirring a pot of green goo and endora was colouring. "well whats got your knickers in a knot?" tabitha asked, laughing at her own joke. Kay cut her a glare and Tabitha cleared her throat and continued stirring. "ugh...what does he see in her? she's so rude...and not even that pretty!!!" Kay said walking over and looking into to pot to see what Tabby was making. She made a face and Tabitha shoo'd her away, so she went and sat down beside endora. "and whom were we talking about as we blew in here like hurrican Katrina?" Tabitha asked reachign for a jar from the cabinet above her head. "DON'T say her name....i'll scream" Kay said, and Tabitha clued in. "oooo....you mean miguel's new leading lady. She's quite the delight isn't she?" Tabitha said mockingly. Kay laughed sarcastically, "o yeah...real treat. you know, i ran into her at the movie store today and she was so rude to me." Kay told tabitha what happened and Tabitha finished off whatever she was making. "sounds to me like you've got a bad case of the big green monster" tabby said coming and sitting with kay. "HA....me...jealous? OF HER?" Kay gave a nervous laugh and it went silent. "alright alright....we both know im jealous. but only a LITTLE." "see....don't you feel better now that you're honest?" tabitha said laughing. "haha....seriously though. i don't get why he's with her!" kay said. "simple....he can't be with you." tabby said.
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Post by luisismine on Apr 7, 2007 16:13:57 GMT -5
I'm loving this.I finally caught up.More soon please.
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Apr 7, 2007 17:53:00 GMT -5
Love this! Update soon.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 10, 2007 9:02:48 GMT -5
Great chapter!!
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Post by Paulweeen on Apr 11, 2007 9:57:40 GMT -5
More please!
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Post by Kimberella on Apr 11, 2007 10:12:41 GMT -5
Loooove this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! More please!!!!!!
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Post by portugalzhottie on Apr 13, 2007 23:19:40 GMT -5
hello ladies.... this is the actual writer of the story you're reading. i just read all your comments and am glad you are all enjoying it:D thanks for all the kind words and enthusiasm. In saying that....this next chapter posted will be the chapter you ladies have been waiting for...it's the defining moment of katriguel.
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Apr 13, 2007 23:25:07 GMT -5
Hellooo!! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! love this=]
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Post by Kimberella on Apr 14, 2007 8:46:52 GMT -5
hello ladies.... this is the actual writer of the story you're reading. i just read all your comments and am glad you are all enjoying it:D thanks for all the kind words and enthusiasm. In saying that....this next chapter posted will be the chapter you ladies have been waiting for...it's the defining moment of katriguel. Love the story it is AWESOME!!!!!!!!
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♥AlwaysLiason♥
Short Story
Liason And Kayguel![ss:"BC & Friends"]
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Apr 14, 2007 13:42:17 GMT -5
Chapter 15 (The Moment)
5 months later on....
The phone was ringing and Miguel was scrambling to pick it up, "MA....HELP....ANSWER IT!!!" he yelled as he hopped around the bathroom wrapping a towel around his waist. Pilar walked over to the phone and answered it. "hello?" she answered, "hi mrs.fitzgerald...how're you?" Katrina asked. "o hello Katrina....i'm doing good....and please, call me Pilar.how're you?" Pilar asked. "I'm fine thank you...is Miguel home?" Katrina asked. Pilar turned to yell for Miguel when he appeared behind her, "thanks mama" he said kissing her cheek. "hello?" he answered the phone. "hey you...what are you doing?" she asked, "o nothing....i was just going to jump in the shower. you?" Miguel said. "not a lot...just about to go out for my jogg. I was wondering...are you doing anything later on tonight?" Katrina asked. Miguel thought, "ummmm....well Maria's coming over, but other then that nothing. why?" Miguel started to play with the fake flowers pilar had set up on the table. "o no reason...." she said with a suspicous tone. "liar...Kay's coming to get her at 7:30 though, so if you want you can come over here after" he said, "actually....i kind of have a surprise, so would you mind coming here?" she asked. Miguel smiled, "a surprise eh...i dont know, im not into surprises" he said jokingly. "you're a bullshitter...you fully do. so come over later ok?" she said. Miguel laughed, "ok see you then...bye" katrina laughed, "bye babe". They hung up and Miguel went upstairs and took a shower.
~*~later on at 7:30~*~
Miguel arrived at Katrina's house and walked up to the door. On the door there was a note that said, "open the door and follow the candy hearts." Miguel smiled, took off the note, and walked in. The entire front entrance was lit with candles and there was a trail of cinnimon hearts leading into the living room. Miguel followed the trail into the living room where he found another note on the coffe table under a bowl of cinnimon hearts. He picked it up and read it, "now that you're inside follow the trail of paper hearts into the kitchen." Miguel turned and started following the hearts into the kitchen. Once he was in the kitchen he saw another note, this one read "turn around for your surprise". He turned around and sitting at a beautifully set up table was Katrina, in a long flowy red halter dress. There were two places set on the table,with candles, food, and drinks set up on the table. When Miguel saw Katrina sitting at the table he smiled a really big goofy smile, and Katrina smiled back and walked over to him and gave him a big smile. They walked over to the table and sat down, "what's all this for?" Miguel asked curiously. "well, we've been dating for five months now...and you've been there for me through everything. You've been so good to me and i just wanted to show you how much i appreciate it." Katrina said grabbing his hand in hers and stroking it. Miguel blushed, "that's really sweet...thanks. but aren't i supposed to be doing this for you...not the other way around!?!" he asked jokingly. "yeah....but i wanted to do this for you. so lets just enjoy the night k?" she said smiling at him. "when you smile at me like that i can go along with anything you want to do" he said smiling back. They ate a delicious meal of pasta, salad, and Garlic bread and they talked about everything. After they were done eating dinner they went into the living room and sat on the couch. Katrina looked up at Miguel and he smiled, "what?" he asked. "nothing....i was just asking myself how it is i managed to get myself such an amazing boyfriend." she said and kissed him. Katrina had kissed him many of times before...but there was something different about this time, there was more passion and excitement in it. Miguel gave into the kiss and held her head in his hands as they sat there and he pulled her closer into his arms. Katrina lay in his arms and continued to kiss him passionately as he started to run his hand up and down her calf, this was slowly heading towards something serious. She was surprised that she wasn't nervous or afraid like she usually was at this point, she was actually welcoming it. She got up and grabbed Miguel's hand and pulled him up off the couch and she continued to kiss him and run her fingers through his lightly gelled hair. She slowly started towards the bedroom and Miguel pulled away, "i'm going to fast for you aren't i? i'm so sorry...it's just i....i got caught up...and and.." she started but Miguel put his finger up to her lips and wispered a light 'shhh'. "i stopped because i didn't want to go too fast for you" he said. She smiled, "no...it's ok, i want to." she said, "if you're not...." he started but Katrina pulled him against her and once again started kissing her. They walked over to the bedroom and Miguel slowly and carefully lay Katrina on the bed, never letting go of the sweet kiss. Katrina took off Miguel's shirt and Miguel started to kiss down her neck, slowly and tenderly.
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Post by luisismine on Apr 14, 2007 14:30:20 GMT -5
oooo baby.I need more and soon.I love this so much.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 14, 2007 14:50:46 GMT -5
Great chapter, that surprise was sweet... more plz!!
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