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Post by Kimberella on Apr 11, 2007 10:44:26 GMT -5
You write more and you may see Paul n Wenty alive again. Otay...I din't want to have to do it..... But you guys have left me no choice.....
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Post by Paulweeen on Apr 11, 2007 10:44:48 GMT -5
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Post by luisismine on Apr 11, 2007 10:45:57 GMT -5
You write more and you may see Paul n Wenty alive again. Otay...I din't want to have to do it..... But you guys have left me no choice..... Oh do I look afraid???NOT
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 11, 2007 10:48:32 GMT -5
I think it was a good update Kimbre, but I wanna know what happened. More plz & hurry, they are holding Paul hostage!!
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Post by Kimberella on Apr 11, 2007 10:53:51 GMT -5
Otay...I din't want to have to do it..... But you guys have left me no choice..... Oh do I look afraid???NOT You BETTA be!!! And TANK you Tina!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Kimberella on Apr 11, 2007 11:32:54 GMT -5
Ethan was at the beach,he had everything all planned out the horse and carriage would be there to pick up Theresa any minute now,and he could not wait to see the look on her face when the real surprise came,he opened up the ring box.. "We are finally going to spend our lives together Theresa,I can't wait to make you my wife" He snapped the box shut again and went over every last detail before she arrived...Lit all the candles,turned on the music,he had pulled out all the stops,he would do anything to make her happy...
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Theresa stood there in shock,she had not seen him since the day of their wedding, She had tried over and over again to reach him but never could,and now here he was... "Jared" she looked at him and could see the hurt still in his eyes.. "Tess.." She didn't know what to say to him,all this time she had and now she was speechless...about that time they both turned to see a horse and carriage stop right in front of the house... "Wow,guess thats for you huh!?" Jared was not trying to cover up his bitterness "Yeah..I guess it must be" she faintly smiled "Well...looks like you have finally got your fairytale, you, Ethan,even the horse and friggin carriage...look this was a bad idea.." he started to walk away,when Theresa grabbed his arm...
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Post by luisismine on Apr 11, 2007 11:46:07 GMT -5
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 11, 2007 11:47:10 GMT -5
Nooooooooooo don't do this to me!!
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Post by Paulweeen on Apr 11, 2007 12:23:03 GMT -5
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Post by luisismine on Apr 13, 2007 16:02:46 GMT -5
Hello Fic? ??
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Post by Kimberella on Apr 13, 2007 16:18:08 GMT -5
"Jared...don't go" Theresa held onto his arm, "Look..I know that what I did to you was wrong..on so many different levels,but I am sorry Jared...I never wanted to hurt you that way.." He turned to her,looking like he had just gotten his heart crushed all over again, "Yeah well,you did Tess...you broke my heart,I can't belive that you just left me there...standing like some fool in love.."
He sat done on the porch swing and put his head into his hands,Theresa sat down next to him and tried to hold his hand...he pushed her hand away, "Jared.."
"Tess,don't try to act like you care..because we both know that don't..you threw everything that we had away when you walked out of that church" "I'm sorry.." she wiped away the tears starting to flood out of her eyes. "Yeah,me too" he stood up and walked off the porch taking one last look back at her before pulling out of the driveway..
Theresa pulled herself together and saw that the man waiting with the horse and carriage was getting impatient.. "Well,I guess I better get it together,Ethan is probably worried to death by now.." She grabbed her purse and off she went....
****************************************************** Back at the beach Ethan patiently waited,he was starting to get nervous. "What in the world is taking her so long,she should have been here a long time ago.." he tried to call her cell and got no answer,he was about to leave when he saw her....
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Post by luisismine on Apr 13, 2007 16:20:14 GMT -5
;D but feel for Jared.I bet Whit can comfort him.
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Post by tinka♥belle on Apr 13, 2007 16:35:14 GMT -5
Yep... Whit can have me. I want some ;D
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Post by archie's_angel#12 on Apr 13, 2007 16:53:06 GMT -5
Aww I love this hun!!! Update soon!
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Post by ♥AlwaysLiason♥ on Apr 13, 2007 18:15:25 GMT -5
More Plzzzzzz...Update Soon!
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